Tha Phoenix vs X-NaUgHtY-bOy-X
 

Battle Rules:

6 - UNLIMITED Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting

30 min Check in
60 min drop.

Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 09-11-04 at 12:50 PM

Must drop verse in 4320 minutes after check in.

X-NaUgHtY-bOy-X has ACCEPTED this battle on 09-08-04 12:52 PM.

omg im battling a newb hus never battled on dis site be4//
im gonna give dis guy a lose to his record kick him out after i opend the door//
there no point in him even makeing a rap up just 4 dis battle hes gonna lose will take this guy on a cruse//
this guy is such a guy nigga even my grnny cud kick his ass hes like loving the guy in muse//
so he trying to chalang me with his all shity ryhem n stuff//
even his mum is ashamed of him when she went tho all the pain 4 dis guy all his friends call him a puff//
hes thinks his so bluff but he has to show a fake pic//
and hes trying to act hard but he nos he has no dick//
im not even trying to hard coz theres rly no point i got this 1 hand down,down//
hes nos his gonna lose hes sitting there watch his computer when i win him 5 votes down.down.down hes trying all hard not to frown,frown.frown//
my 1st line just kicked his whole verses ass hes think o look im gonna kick his verse out//
im gonna win this hes no it without even a little dout//
i wud o tho his mam wud have put him up 4 adoption or kicked him out of da house//
hes so anoying like tom and jerry and hes da gay mouse//
look if he wins this i will be so suprised but i no it anit gonna happen so im gonna smile all day//
i no ive won dis hes lines suck lyk hes dose to his bro dick coz there both GAY!!!!!//
heres the end of my verse i wud lyk to say//
i am a rapper hes is lame i rap all day he rapes all day//

check<>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>IN<>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>MAN<>>>>>>>>>>>>>i anit got all day<>>>>>>>>>>>

Checkity checkin in...............................

You lost when you posted “I’ll battle” Lost wit one Verb
I quit doin drugs, but yo I’m still smoking this herb
Two X’s but you missin one so you know you can’t get the triple
I’ll be doin RV a favour when my punches leave you a cripple
Ya punches are like pillows so you know you can’t get in this bout
Why did Rabbit invite you to my crew, if it was my decision I’d kick you out
Say your from Kellys pussy, I’ma respell it for you okay
Replace the K with the y, the e with the o, the l with an r, and the s with an a
Let me ask you a question, why do you drop crap when you spit
Yeah you’re the most def…initly shit
I’ma end this shit now cause I already whored you
Let me give you a tip, get someone to write shit for you

Tha Phoenix has ACCEPTED this battle on 09-08-04 01:52 PM.

You lost when you posted “I’ll battle” Lost wit one Verb
I quit doin drugs, but yo I’m still smoking this herb
Two X’s but you missin one so you know you can’t get the triple
I’ll be doin RV a favour when my punches leave you a cripple
Ya punches are like pillows so you know you can’t get in this bout
Why did Rabbit invite you to my crew, if it was my decision I’d kick you out
Say your from Kellys pussy, I’ma respell it for you okay
Replace the K with the y, the e with the o, the l with an r, and the s with an a
Let me ask you a question, why do you drop crap when you spit
Yeah you’re the most def…initly shit
Ya rhymes are wack played, like Banderas’s guitar
Ya like like a rock, destined to neva go far
Change ya name to stone cold, ya like WWF
Fake acting, fake lines, wack and weak is what you rep
I don’t ever want to meet you if you ever go to jail
You’d probably drop the soap on purpose, and get free bail
I’ma end this shit now cause I already whored you
Let me give you a tip, get someone to write shit for you

huh u posted to verses

It was an accident, I didn't understand the new rules u see

Uppin This Shit For Votes!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Uppin for votes, Don't sleep on this shit people!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!1

Voted For: Tha Phoenix

Phoenix~

Shit man Phoenix come nice in this battle, flow was nice
with a dope opener. Punches hit hard with decent personals
also the close smashed it.

Best bar~
Two X’s but you missin one so you know you can’t get the triple
I’ll be doin RV a favour when my punches leave you a cripple
^^^Lol dope man

Boy~

Come okay but I think you really stretched your barz
you shouldn't underestimate newbs, open was ok but
but predictable, some punches was ok but again the
stretching killed the effectiveness. Close was bad sorry.

Best Bar

hes thinks his so bluff but he has to show a fake pic//
and hes trying to act hard but he nos he has no dick//
^ Reason I picked this one was coz it flowed nice and
hit with the desired effect...

Vote ~ P

Yo, peeps have looked at this 76 times, vote people!!

Voted For: Tha Phoenix

umm okay...i aint even read all of boy verse verse y a fukk u spittin a album in a battle dogg lol who's gonna read all dat shit

structure-phon...both of ya'll shit was fukked up but his was way betta
opener-phon even tho it was type corny
punchlines-phon
creativity-phon
multis-nun
personals-nun
finisher-phon..yo boy ya shit was terrible lol
enjoyed-phon ofcourse...his verse was easier da read cuzz of his structure n he didn't need a 100 lines da get his point across