Most vs Quick Witted
 

Battle Rules:

10 - 15 Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting
No DR

U spit first

Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 09-14-04 at 05:51 AM

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Most has ACCEPTED this battle on 09-14-04 05:22 AM.

Quick Witted has ACCEPTED this battle on 09-14-04 05:28 AM.

like memories of past trances~ya lyrics are played out like mc hammer dances
with lack of any skills~my punchlines will end ya career faster then hanson's

ya lyrics are sustaining structural damage~have ya record falling apart like the twin towers
i know u think ya big but ya not~devastating lyrics leave u living in a trailer like pierre bowers *

ya shot of winning is off~kinda like parapalegic's trying to play golf
i know ya lyrics come cold~ya probably what they meant by putting ice in smirnoff

like a news reporter~i wait around for the night cap (votes)
u beating me is unlikely~cause their's a better chance of stevie wonder getting his sight back

like specific design patterns taking from a blueprint~my lyrics put a studda in ya words like ruben **
punchlines shipping u through customs~while personals put u under my command like i'm fidel and ya cuban

with lyrically explicit arsenals of quick witted words~i release from my tonuge
ya going for a reach ya trying~but ya punchlines don't land...not even one

i know ya prewrite ya shit~unlike wedding vows ya words ain't connecting
like the court ordered ja i put a statment out and you'll need an order of protection ***



*a football superstar from my high school
**ruben studdard
***the 50 cent and ja beef

Quite simply Quick Witted, ya loose fitted rhymes got me agitated,
ya shits trifle, this battles mine before u got time to contemplate it,
rhymes are constipated, they burstin out with hammeroids,
i manifest raw logic, pre programmed into me kinda like multiple androids,
i cross u out- ya signatures void, my lyrical weapons against u i just deployed,
as for woteva contingent or crew u rep for consider it destroyed.
chop off ya fingers n slit ya throat, at the mouth u foaming,
put an end to yer wack text battles, its obvious ur just cloning,
some other shit rapper as im zoning, on this rap shit im growing...
my verse is tight n flowing, unlike ur mediocre attempt tho u not knowing,
ur wackness is showing,a deep lesson to u unlearned im now bestowing,
plus dick riding aint acceptable here, is that clear?.learn from my quotes,
next thing u b askin 'Poet' for votes,i hope ur takin notes
peep this shit as i teach ya the ways im condensending on ya,
check the lesson i taught ya, i'll scorch ya bringing torture

uppin for this

Quite simply Quick Witted, ya loose fitted rhymes got me agitated,
ya shits trifle, this battles mine before u got time to contemplate it,
rhymes are constipated, they burstin out with hammeroids,
i manifest raw logic, pre programmed into me kinda like multiple androids,
i cross u out- ya signatures void, my lyrical weapons against u i just deployed,
as for woteva contingent or crew u rep for consider it destroyed.
chop off ya fingers n slit ya throat, at the mouth u foaming,
put an end to yer wack text battles, its obvious ur just cloning,
some other shit rapper as im zoning, on this rap shit im growing...
my verse is tight n flowing, unlike ur mediocre attempt tho u not knowing,
ur wackness is showing,a deep lesson to u unlearned im now bestowing,
plus dick riding aint acceptable here, is that clear?.learn from my quotes,
next thing u b askin 'Poet' for votes,i hope ur takin notes
peep this shit as i teach ya the ways im condensending on ya,
check the lesson i taught ya, i'll scorch ya bringing torture

sorry for postin this twice.....my bad...........uppin for votes

Voted For: Quick Witted

most:
dope vocab. Got mad potential with ya raps, but you gotta learn content. Your shit was good, but it was a lot of self glorification etc. and not really many punches.. ya know what i mean?

Quick:
nice punches, flow, metas n wordplay.. until the last 3 bars where you fell off n lines got real bad.. but you took this one cos ya punches were good

btw most.. i reckon when u get a bit better youll be a topical kinda mc.. like poet :) .. cos ur style is similar

one

thanks band i hear u...................uppin for votes

uppin again................lets get this shit in the bag.

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Voted For: Quick Witted

u really shouldn't include a local celebrity in your verse...otherwise your verse was all around just better with the punchlines...MOST, you had nice wordplay but that was about it...try to include more punchlines and meta4's.

no punches? i thought my punches were obvious. uppin for this..........if u gonna vote against me dont say i didnt have ne punches.