paramik vs Empire
 

Battle Rules:

6 - 8 Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting
no links
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Time to show how much ive improved and merk you accept dont run cuz i will chase you down


200 posts to vote

Minimum posts to vote: 200

Check in by: 09-18-04 at 06:17 PM

Must drop verse in 4320 minutes after check in.

huh?? blah you shud have asked me first... lets make this due tonight

nah.. 10 lines iight???

naw cuz i just came out retirement and i got madd battles going up tonight rules are good just accept its 200 posts to vote anyways ill drop either tonight or tommorow morning :thumbup:

Empire has ACCEPTED this battle on 09-15-04 06:34 PM.

iiight, but we straight though cos i don't like net beef its really dumb shit...
have it by tonight at at least if possible, 9:00pm... but i'll post mines first

Paramik has ACCEPTED this battle on 09-15-04 06:36 PM.

wat?? you made a mistake it says 20 posts instead of 200...
ima tell strobe to close it cos you set the post to vote wrong...

naw leave it ill have strobe fix it drop in battle forum problems cuz it says 200 posts to vote on the rule thread

Empire wants to impress me, claiming he elevated and improved…
But like uncertain science theories, his claiming is fully unproved.
Claims he smokes Mcs?, the only smoke you make, is from a cigar.
Fuck the force you provide, cause ya line drive is just a toy racecar.
So back off, you been text-injured so much that you feel the pain.
But mostly by your own punches and your malfunctioning brain.
This shit’s always clinging to a loss, I'd say Empire’s just like moss.
I mean his style and personals are fake, like the T-shirts at Ross.
Can’t get through this battle, the win’s blocked from him like a clot…
Ya hope to win, and the wins ya got, come empty like ya sig spot.

Ross is a clothing store…
He doesnt have a sig…

Ya record is unimpressive i went to checked not a single vet
On R.V you hardly a 'STAR' like the 'BEATLES'when Ringo left(1)

No hope you couldnt be dope if you was a addict drug user
I can tell you whack ass from 'FL' yous a fraudalent loser(2)

Bunch of gay guys repping A.I dont understand how you brag
Get ya dicks rubbed in homo strip clubs damn yall some fags(3)

Dont write great you lightweight fact is that you ameatuer champ
Heavyweight elevation levatate you shouldve been warned in advance(4)


EXPLANATIONS-(shouldnt be needed but just in case)-
1)little wordplay RINGO STAR was a beatle they fell apart when he left
2)his sig says hes from F.L that must be FRADULENT LOSER
3)his crew is A.I and they are gay
4)his sig says lightweight champ so hes way outta his league cuz im a fucking heavyweight

iigiht upping this battle

Voted For: Empire

Ayo this was a close one. I saw some good punches from both of you, and some good structure as well. Empire you came with some multis that were aight, they fit with the bars but didn't come off very impressive, since I only saw them in your last bar and they were kinda simple. You did drop a line about being gay, a pretty blatent one at that. I think all of rv can agree that direct lines about homosexuality are played. I do like how you played off where he's from though, yet in your explanation it didn't seem like you actually knew what F.L was lol. Correct me if I'm wrong Paramik, but are you from Florida? Lol no hate Emp, you had an aight opener too.
Paramik you had the vocab in this battle, I was feelin' your opener. The thing with your drop though was that you set up some bars good, but they didn't hit like I was expecting them to, like the "toy racecar" line. You made up for it in the next bar though, "your malfunctioning brain" made me laugh. But truthfully I've seen you come harder than this, so I though you could've put some more effort into your verse.
Overall my vote goes to Empire because he came with harder punches and some better wordplay. No hate, keep doin' ya thing y'all...
Vote - Empire

Voted For: Empire

mmm well just cause he lightweight and u heavyweight doesn't mean he couldnt have beat ya! MMMM i put it in th nicest form possible......Empire had a beeter flow, word play, vocb., and just a better rap altogether! The other kid did iight but needs to elevate sum!

VOTE----Empire

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Voted For: Empire

k man u got this by your punches 10/10 but your rhyme was aight its a 8/10 and paranic your flow was wack but empire u flowed tight 9/10 so overall i vote for........

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