Quick Witted vs upfront
 

Battle Rules:

10 to 15 lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting

Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 09-18-04 at 06:23 PM

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Quick Witted has ACCEPTED this battle on 09-15-04 06:27 PM.

u gonna accept battle

upfront has ACCEPTED this battle on 09-15-04 07:36 PM.

i'm here to leave upfront left out back in the yard
u ain't famous but u swear u got peeps so i'm clapping ya guard
check to see if ya bodies still intact put it back in the car
ya rhymes are nothing i done seen better shit before
lyrically my rhymes cut ya brain and have it split before it hits the floor
u claim to be shooting niggas but u ain't gripping nothing kid
blow u away with one bar like wind with a girls wig
u couldn't come sick if ya threw up last night's dinner
ya got ya hopes up high for nothing cause u know i'm the winner
my punches connect everytime like lennox lewis hooks
rednecks wouldn't even vote on ya battles if ya was garth brooks
i don't think bitchset is able to come to ya rescue *
i'll disband ya whole group you'll have to start on ya next crew
ya rhymes are fake i'm classifying them as a hoax
everyone knows u couldn't come 'nice if u was helping out old folks




*his crew dipset

ayo..

lyrically insane shoot words through ya mind like bullets through ya membrane/
u not even a lightweight ya lighter than cocaine/
erytime u start to get hot u rememba that i "rain"(reign)/

s0o ya names quick witted but u aint shit wit it i stay gettin m0 head from ya grl than ya "lidz" fitted/

ya rhymes aint nice all u do is descriminate ill put my shoe s0o hard to ya nuts u could call em ya soul mate/
i text tate then run ya ass round and debate on whose punches hit harder straight to tha face ill knock u to da south do u like tha sho me state?/
what happened to ya body ya bloods risin.. ridin ya heart rate if u ask me i think quick witted is afraid cuz he knows i can make his blood coagulate/

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~closer~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

well ima speed things up and try ta accelerate cuz after i murda ya ass ima celebrate/u were born in 1986 ill blow ya brains out like ya candles on ya birthday/

u a faggot who rocks nothin but khakki capries/
u swing on dicks u faggot like chimpanzees/
erytime i roll through ya hood my glock shines makes ya squint like ya chinese/
slice and dice ya like grated cheese show ya how to perfect ya craft wit my expertise ill leave ya wit this las line screamin i dont wanna die please ive touched ya wit da "rap plague" now y0o ass got da disease...~peace~////////

no beef or hate but i think u want a bit over

the limit on ya lines, that's what it looks like

This was feedback posted for Quick Witted
 

qiuck witted came a slight harder with his personals and puches with better bflow and strcutre

ya structure is what threw me off, reagrdless i guess we uppin

nah i got tha riight amount y0o i checked uppin!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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