HOLLOW_TIPS vs Mc_BaD_bOy
 

Battle Rules:

6 - UNLIMITED Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting
all you gotta do is say yes

Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 09-19-04 at 03:26 AM

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HOLLOW_TIPS has ACCEPTED this battle on 09-19-04 02:58 AM.

:S were'd this battle come from

Mc_BaD_bOy has ACCEPTED this battle on 09-19-04 03:04 AM.

yo wack ass cunt im ur worsed nightmare ever//
ill kick ur ass till u die u will never beat me never//
ur wack rhymes cudnt beat a flea hollow dont u mean wacky//
u will never get me out u nightmares coz i am da best nacky//
u cunt u suck dick u need to get a rap brain be4 u can come here//
my rhymes cud break ur nose o look i made u bleed o dear//

yo comon nigga battle me ill take everything your ass GOT/
from ya muney,to your chain,and ya diamonds on tha SPOT/
fuck with me then look in tha mirror now you got a red DOT/
on your HEAD/im like aids nigga nobody want my style but i SPREAD/


oh you think im FRUNTIN/try me nigga come againts me ill be forever STUNTIN/nigga find another talent cuzz this aint workin your worst then GIN/pm'n ppl and telling them to vote for you will bee tha only way you could WIN/

if you dont like what i SAY/hommie run AWAY/like fat joe ill lean you back/dont need no clock or MACK/my fist is like a bullet get hit in ya FACE/guaranteed to to put you in a mental PLACE/(brain damage)im forever allive like TUPAC and EM/
you talkin tuff tell me who what where and WHEN/

dont speak nigga please dont TALK/before im done with this rhyme ill have you laying in CHALK/so you wanna be MC_BAD_BOY/how you gone be a BAD BOY?/whne my gurl saw your prayin in CHURCH/dont tha truth HURT?/sonny boy you made tha wrong move fuckin with SMURF/

my rekord is NINE TO ONE/you bring out ya knife and its my turn now its TIME TO GUN/im not like you i dont take it personal i RHYME FOR FUN/after one minute of SHINE IM DONE/

all my rhyme is hot SHIT/you think you spit underground SHIT/but youll be spittin durt underground BITCH/thats all imma say for now nigga have FUN/its you hide and i seek ready or not nigga here i COME/

Voted For: HOLLOW_TIPS

Easy to vote on, hollow took the battle basically in his first 2 bars. You could both stand to elevate a bit with personals and more complex rhymes (eg, assonance, multies, etc) but this battle wasnt even a competition.

Vote- HOLLOW_TIPS

yea i feel you but i dont look at ppls rekord or nothin or profile i just call uhm out they wanna battle they batlte

Voted For: HOLLOW_TIPS

come on dude ur wack as shit give me a break son okay here me out hollow came harder on this way harder his vocab and structure was more decsent

Voted For: HOLLOW_TIPS

hollow_tips clearly hollow_tips............no denyin to tight.........to good wit da punchlines

vote up on this yall keep uhm comin to tha break of don lol

uppin on votes^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^................ .

This was feedback posted for HOLLOW_TIPS
 

i cant vote cuz im in his crew

punches- hollow
personals- hollow
multis- neither
metas- hollow
word play- hollow
flow- hollow

Hollow nice verse man. u won it wit the punches. get in some more personals is all i can think of.

BB u need to elevate, weak punches, and no personals. Also use wut u got, dont go minimum. No wordplay and make your rhymes make sense, dont make up or just throw in words that rhyme.

Hollow:
"dont speak nigga please dont TALK/before im done with this rhyme ill have you laying in CHALK/so you wanna be MC_BAD_BOY/how you gone be a BAD BOY?/whne my gurl saw your prayin in CHURCH/" only personal i found but a good one.

BB:
"ur wack rhymes cudnt beat a flea hollow dont u mean wacky//
u will never get me out u nightmares coz i am da best nacky//" wtf is a nacky?

v/hollow if i could vote

yo vote up on this mayn keep it comin like tha alchol over flowin tha cup lol

This was feedback posted for HOLLOW_TIPS
 

i gotta give it my homie hollow but i cnat vote so i'll leave some feed back hollow you need to work on ur structure and flow...
mc you need serious work nuff said...