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Da Point vs Fiya Spitter
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12 Lines No Crew Votes No Recycling No Biting Minimum posts to vote: 20 Check in by: 09-27-04 at 11:36 AM Must drop verse in 30 minutes after check in. |
Da Point has ACCEPTED this battle on 09-26-04 11:39 AM.
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okay make dis quick for dis herb
flya spitter nothin but a bull shitter thinks he's a nigga fuck you i'll pull ya da trigga admit it your shit when I see your shit it's gonna be liek a fuckin singer you don't got good verses only herbish start spittin like some ger man you fuckin bitch ass gerbal i'll slit your fuckin wrists u sound like my gran! this punk is shitless and he got a problem wid MENTAL SICKNESS! just a ignorant dipshit talkin about suicide m8 is just plain thinkness! this hoe is dickless he has no intrest thinks hes da best he's a rap guest someone unknown he's got no talent unblessed This boys a cock muncher whos gonna get bullet hole punture don't worry i'll hunt ya i'll rip your ugly face and stun gun yer you migit your a pissed boy on computer who's growin 2 be a loser a microphone abuser wid no punches but pussys about me and accuses |
Fiya Spitter has ACCEPTED this battle on 09-26-04 11:57 AM.
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Ok, this bitch ass hoe, hates everyone includin' him self
If he had self pride, why would he ask EVERYONE and their cousin for help? When I look at yo verse, I choose to jus remember "Sticks and stones" You do that too.... but yo gay ass begins to bone (1) Don't get excited, cuz those lines were jus the start If I wanted to hear from an "ass", I'd jus let out a stinky fart Yo lines all suck, why you rap still is a mystery Jus like my social studies book, I'm gon make yo ass history Every time you spit yo shit gets worse and even worse Jus like the Red Sox, I'm gon leave yo ass cursed My verse will have you out of breath, you be thinkin' you Darth Vader I'll make you start to dissappear, like you were set on fader (1)- Sticks and stones-Dicks and balls (fuckin' fag :) ) |
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Voted For: Fiya Spitter
ok~ SPuL~your verse had me laughin,i liked the sticks and stones line, and the history line,actually your opener was good too, nice way to start off.. and your flow was on point, some nice punches and personals,this was good, yours was easy to read, your structure was perfect...... DaPoint~your verse was good too, but you had some trouble with the flow of this verse, you should have seperated your pauses and breaks, as well as punches, and corrected your spelling, but you had some good punches too, but this might throw readers off...but nice job both.. |
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