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Critic 09-27-04 07:38 AM

Free and needing a crew!
 
Sup people I'm new to this site need to roll with a hott crew holla @ me

Topical Key:

Simplistic words adjacent to others with profound meaning
Feeling to express in tongue,.. Impossible minds still racing
Muted by my captures, circulation cut, legs tightly fastened
Blinded by them, by gunpoint I was taken felling frightened
The atmosphere is damp, like I’m trapped in a tiny dry sauna
Airs really musky, smells of urine, this is slow mental torture
Voices getting stronger, dialect in verses I can’t comprehend
I don’t want to be interrogate or torture unconscious I pretend
Footsteps enter my hell, I hear the safety click out of position
I need to reaction now,,. or will this be my last final decision
I need to unleash my rage to brake out of the hell I’m hidden
The primal instinct explode as I brake out, my actions forbidden



Take it easy

iamthatdude87 09-27-04 08:17 AM

yo go drop that verse off at the c.s try out thread......the links in my sig.....o and if u didnt already know we the dopest crew on this site......so go figure....peace

Critic 09-27-04 08:43 AM

Sup yeah I will drop a try out tonight not really feeling this verse.


PC.

Status 09-27-04 11:55 AM

that verse had mad potiential just make so the words rhyme a lil better...becuase the way i read it that shit didnt rhyme but yeah kid just elevate and hit us back

Parallel 09-29-04 08:29 PM

that was fuckin dope man tryout for psa pot smokers alaince aight man no tryout needed that was the best newb ive ever heard in my life:D

-Eternal- 09-29-04 09:27 PM

come tryout for 50th Brigade

G Deuce 09-29-04 09:30 PM

PSA is where its at man. Come join the Dynasty. Its your destiny.

Scenario 09-29-04 09:32 PM

try out for the 50th Brigade, we looking hot

e-dubz 09-29-04 09:34 PM

CS..we the dopest on the site

BIGPAPPA76 09-29-04 09:38 PM

50th brigade is THE place to be. peep our roster and youll know why, peace

Implicit 09-29-04 09:46 PM

ayo man come to 50th Brigade. i like that verse and i like ur style

runway 09-29-04 11:08 PM

need a hott crew
 
yo i need a hott crew so help me out


its like a slam 2 da face
tell me hows this 360 taste
now u jus anotha posta, yomamas disgrace
trus me, ull get dropped, wen u go against my team
lose yo self-esteem, when i thro anotha screen
when i perform anotha dream
its reality ofcourse
i b rokin da goggles, horace grant use 2 sport
u comin up short, like spudd webb
jus start walkin
ill pull a mutumbo and let my finga do da talkin
cuz im only 14, but my rhymes r fo real
dont b surprised if shady recordz offers me a deal
if u interested in ne single word i got2 say
jus put me on yo crew and u b hearin me all day


if uz like wut uz heard holla bak........e-mail me or sumthin

God 09-29-04 11:13 PM

A.I All you need

50Cal. 09-29-04 11:15 PM

lol you dont see under his name we got him already this is closed

-Eternal- 09-29-04 11:17 PM

^naw... join up 50th Bridage fam lol


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