SubtleTee vs 40Cal
 

Battle Rules:

6 Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting

Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 09-30-04 at 08:49 PM

Must drop verse in 15 minutes after check in.

SubtleTee has ACCEPTED this battle on 09-30-04 08:32 PM.

Killed with a Keystyle Son

Can’t son a bitch, man I’ll daughter this nun. I’ll straight up slaughter you son./
I’m so whack? When this cat packs the same “caliber” as plastic water guns?/

Worthless! You’re expendable bra, my lines ill, I’ll just stay dependably raw!/
Fuck a wolf! My lines slice jaws and leave an MC cut up like extendable claws!/

Bout to get ~wrecked, damn~, already had a battle but you didn’t ~check fam~/
Quitting is the ~best plan~, because you’re about to lose, just like ~X, man~!/


Explanation:

Line 2: Caliber is the strength of a gun
Line 4: Wolverine is his avvy and Wolverines power is extendable claws
Line 5: He didn't even check into our last battle
Line 6: I'm battling X-on. Wolverine is an X-Man. Get it? X, Man?

40Cal has ACCEPTED this battle on 09-30-04 08:44 PM.

Be “Subtle” while I “Tee” off and bang ya moms in tha cock//
Yer as ferocious as vanilla ice and tha new kids on tha block//

40cal claps lungs wit his lyrical guns causin ya breathin to stop//
People treat ya albums like newly caught fish kuz they ready to flop//

U real baby like playin around wit mic’s as if they were rattles//
Jot this down as a loss on ya record and for everytime that we battle//

Voted For: SubtleTee

SublteTee:
Yo punches were hard & they connected..
tha flow was pretty decent & it didnt fall..
and yo strucuture was aight..(try to not stretch yo lines..*use dif. fonts to make it smaller or sum shit*)

40Cal:
Yo punches were good too..could've been a little harder..
Decent structure ur lines wasnt stretched out..
and yo flow was pretty nice too..elevate a little more

Nice, you've elevated but not enough son. Opened up for votes peopel!

i definately respect anyones vote as long as it's valid ya kno, it's all about opinion so i respect it, keep on keepin on tho i'll be battlin 4-eva

Voted For: 40Cal

ooooooooooo dis nigga ripped yo good battle guyz but damn ma nigga 40cal took dis by a mile no hate tho u ripped it too tee but ima hav to say dis is da best battle ever

vote/40cal

Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation.

^ Not Explained, can we get some explained votes? Please?

This was feedback posted for SubtleTee
 

k of carse 40cal lost hes gonna get KOed he was so wack lol whata herb lol

it was wack? be 4real i used tha kids name maybe i shoulod explain it at tha bottom for those who don't kno what "subtle" means or what it means to "Tee" off on someone Tee had one good line but he was mostly rhymin 4real if u had of said that i lost then koo but KOed? Chill tha fuk out dik ryder take ya 14 year old ass to bed it's 8pm

Voted For: 40Cal

damn wack battle lol

like really really bad lol
but I see you all are new so i want get on ya

both wordplay was very bad
either terribl;e or none in there

punches were basically insult of mothers
or self glorifiaction and weak metafors

I believethis is an explained vote

though 40cal had flow and was easy to read
so he gets my vote

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peace
both of you will soon get better

Voted For: SubtleTee

Vote for subtle other nagger is just too simple nothing at all hard hitting pretty weak battle...

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Voted For: SubtleTee

Average Drop

Intro : Subtle.. Pretty Good Like The Calliber/plastic gun line
Punches: Subtle.. Punches Hit Harder.. 40Cal U Were Talkin Bout Bangin His Mom.. Stay Away From That Shit..
Word Play: Subtle.. U Had Ok Word Play But Keep Elevatin.. 40 Keep Tryin Urs Was Pretty Plain..
Multis: Weak Multis.. Draw
Vocabulary : Subtle.. Much Better Showed that your educated haha :thumbup: 40 u should work on this.. u kept it too simple..
Ending: Subtle.. Much Better.. Used Word Play Here Nice.. Keep Elevatin 40..
Winner : Subtle.. 1 sided Battle here..
Keep workin on ya shit.. no hate.. rtf..