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Artemis 10-10-04 04:06 PM

Socrates vs SPuL
 
Battle Rules:

30 lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting

Minimum posts to vote: 500

Check in by: 10-13-04 at 04:06 PM

Must drop verse in 30 minutes after check in.

Logic The Goonie 10-11-04 10:25 PM

ill be ready whenever you are...
..........................................

System 10-11-04 10:48 PM

Socrates has ACCEPTED this battle on 10-11-04 10:48 PM.

Logic The Goonie 10-11-04 11:12 PM

Nah fuck this prewriting bitch gotta wait till Wednesday just cause your in Canada? sorry ho, that doesnt make sense. Get sonned.

First off, SPuL aint spit a hot line in so long
And now the bitch is gassed, thats just an oxymoron
jumbo shrimp for a dick, never gunna be fuckin
Most girls would mistake it for a really low belly button
you are shit to me, something mist be wrong in your skull
so here goes nothing bitch.........................SPuL
man im better and thats how it will always be duke
of course my verse is whack man, its all about you!
and youve been banned already, dont forget that b
wanna joke around with you but youll use it against me!
for real SPuL bites so much youd figure hed be full for days
Iight ill put away the jokes, i dont need personals anyways
fuck ill be even nicer in my lyrics, prolly wont even curse
his name in my lines is the closest he ever gets to a freakin dope verse
come on all, watch SPuL get his ass beat, everyones invited
but please dont say i fucked him, he might get a little excited
plus im sorry for calling you nothing, i must have mistaked shit
Cuz you ARE challenging according to your coach for the special olympics
god damn contradictory bitch really you fuckin dummy quit
wanna have beef but still have me on your buddy list
nobody likes your whack lines so ill be the one to stop it
bitch you couldnt CURRY a tune with a vase on your noggin
Dont know SPuL? heres a quick bio: everybody fuckin hates him
While others continue to raise the bar, he continues to take them
of course you dont have ghostwriters, too good for help
youre dope as fuck man
......oh sorry for talking to myself :rolleyes:
feel sad for your grandpa? fuck ill leave you in worse health
say you put my L'S uP? nah thats just you twisting yourself
man i wanna finish you off for real so just gimme some time
.................................................. .............................

Damn SPuL you sure are quick with jacking my tight lines^^^

*Socrates drops the mic and bitchslaps SPuL*

Goodbye. :)

Artemis 10-11-04 11:36 PM

aiight, so I guess you dropped yo verse, cuz it says you checked in. and NO I can't see yo verse. So fuck off wit that feeding shit. But yea, when I get back tommorow, night I'll start writing. pc

Logic The Goonie 10-11-04 11:39 PM

oh yea, try to refrain from using a ghostwriter....looch told me bout that :thumbup:

Artemis 10-12-04 12:55 PM

nah, I don't do that shit. Don't kno what the kids problem is. But yea, he ain't votin' though, like he did last time. :thumbup:

Logic The Goonie 10-12-04 03:04 PM

fine. just quit talking and drop, i wanna see if you can match me :)

Logic The Goonie 10-13-04 01:37 AM

*looks at time and scratches nutsack*

you can drop sometime soon, dont no-show, if u do im using the same verse :)

Artemis 10-13-04 10:52 AM

IF YOU DONT GET ANY PUNCHES DO NOT VOTE!!! :thumbup:

Better not change yo sig, fag.

Aiight these are needed for my verse :) :
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v...7187/better.bmp

^there's the herb Phantom.


http://img51.photobucket.com/albums....O.D/MY45_8.jpg
http://img51.photobucket.com/albums....O.D/MY45_3.jpg

^E Looch and his gun. (he on yo dick fashos. Whether you kno it or not. :thumbup: )

Aiight, now to the verse:

*Steps on stage, and grabs mic*

Prolly a verse full of bitin' shit, and really not much more
...Yea, I DO bite... but only at Empire's store
Your verse is so "soft", like it was "sealy" lit
Peep yo last verse, now who's the one who really bit?
Why use a ghostwriter, cuz ain't nobody here better than me
Fashos not you, compared to my "A", you're a letter "D"
Man, look at yo verse, you're "ass", you only spit "shit"
the only way you get yo wins, is wit yo newb-infested dick
I merked yo ass up, but you opened it up again
Pullin' a JT, "Cry Me a River", is yo only way to win
Say I like to joke? I guess for you I'll boast love
You wanna see a joke?... Then look at the post above
Got a "watermelon" for a head, and no brain, don't be deceived
Yea, you can spit good.... but only when usin' seeds
You're a "pedofile", you'll rape that kid, to see us lose
But yo rhymes are more misleadin' than yo stash of "Jesus Juice"
To butt sex you are open, like the shirt of the lil kid
What you got a crush on me? Got my name repped in yo sig
You're also fuckin' fat, ears big, nose jus like Nomar
Fuck Phantom of the Opera, you're the Shadow of the Oprah
Better rumble back to the jungle, he look like a chimpansee
Like windows on limousines... me~him~can't~see
He takes his "lil friend" and runs, cuz he knos that I shook them
Cuz his verse blows more times, than a hoe living in Brooklyn
We all kno you're a pussy, you're 1/4 my skill, only a quarter
When I come, you hold up more "flags", than the U.S.A boarder
Oh, no! It's Phantom on E-looch's dick. Shit, I better run!!!
Scrap that, it's only fruit head and V-Ice wit a water gun
Go to witness protection, you pussy. Change yo name jus like Calamity
Have you behind a "Bush"... like yo name was Sean Hannity

*Flicks Phantom off, grins, then drops the mic and leaves*

System 10-13-04 11:00 AM

SPuL has ACCEPTED this battle on 10-13-04 11:00 AM.

Artemis 10-13-04 11:00 AM

IF YOU DONT GET ANY PUNCHES DO NOT VOTE!!! :thumbup:
Better not change yo sig, fag.

Aiight these are needed for my verse :):

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v...7187/better.bmp

^there's the herb Phantom.

http://img51.photobucket.com/albums....O.D/MY45_8.jpg

http://img51.photobucket.com/albums....O.D/MY45_3.jpg

^E Looch and his gun. (he on yo dick fashos. Whether you kno it or not. :thumbup: ) Let's see how your protege does. -_- (hope you kno this means you can't vote on yo protege's battle too -_-)

Aiight, now to the verse:

*Steps on stage, and grabs mic*

Prolly a verse full of bitin' shit, and really not much more
...Yea, I DO bite... but only at Empire's store
Your verse is so "soft", like it was "sealy" lit
Peep yo last verse, now who's the one who really bit?
Why use a ghostwriter, cuz ain't nobody here better than me
Fashos not you, compared to my "A", you're a letter "D"
Man, look at yo verse, you're "ass", you only spit "shit"
the only way you get yo wins, is wit yo newb-infested dick
I merked yo ass up, but you opened it up again
Pullin' a JT, "Cry Me a River", is yo only way to win
Say I like to joke? I guess for you I'll boast love
You wanna see a joke?... Then look at the post above
Got a "watermelon" for a head, and no brain, don't be deceived
Yea, you can spit good.... but only when usin' seeds
You're a "pedofile", you'll rape that kid, to see us lose
But yo rhymes are more misleadin' than yo stash of "Jesus Juice"
To butt sex you are open, like the shirt of the lil kid
What you got a crush on me? Got my name repped in yo sig
You're also fuckin' fat, ears big, nose jus like Nomar
Fuck Phantom of the Opera, you're the Shadow of the Oprah
Better rumble back to the jungle, he look like a chimpansee
Like windows on limousines... me~him~can't~see
He takes his "lil friend" and runs, cuz he knos that I shook them
Cuz his verse blows more times, than a hoe living in Brooklyn
We all kno you're a pussy, you're 1/4 my skill, only a quarter
When I come, you hold up more "flags", than the U.S.A boarder
Oh, no! It's Phantom on E-looch's dick. Shit, I better run!!!
Scrap that, it's only fruit head and V-Ice wit a water gun
Go to witness protection, you pussy. Change yo name jus like Calamity
Have you behind a "Bush"... like yo name was Sean Hannity

*Flicks Phantom off, grins, then drops the mic and leaves*

Mad Dog 10-13-04 11:34 AM

Voted For: SPuL

Well a long ass battle needs a long ass vote...so here it goes...

Socrates...um i wasn't feelin ur verse overall ya know infact i seen both spit b4 and ya both coulda came better but anyways...sum lines were a lil sefl-glory in places but some seemed like filler jus makin up the numbers and ur flow was off a lil u need to work on that it did fall off in a few places but u did have sum aight punches u mainly used personals which were used effectively...structure, flow and consistancy is all i say u could've improved on in this battle...

SPuL...definitely had him on flow and structure kept it aight...some punches weren't as strong as others but u looked more focused for this battle...the links u used in the verse was funny & also the pics helped understand the punches betta good lookin for that...overall i'd say it was a good verse but u have put out better before...

V/SPuL for more consistancy in his rhyme...RTF in ma sig

Dirty Nigga 10-13-04 11:40 AM

Voted For: SPuL

aiiiight
pretty close battle.....
lets analyze all this huh...
aight...

First off, SPuL aint spit a hot line in so long
And now the bitch is gassed, thats just an oxymoron
jumbo shrimp for a dick, never gunna be fuckin
Most girls would mistake it for a really low belly button
^^^
not the tightest opener or punches socrates..

you are shit to me, something mist be wrong in your skull
so here goes nothing bitch.........................SPuL
^^
pretty humouress 6/10

for real SPuL bites so much youd figure hed be full for days
Iight ill put away the jokes, i dont need personals anyways
^^^
pretty damn tight too, 8/10

Cuz you ARE challenging according to your coach for the special olympics
^^^
nice idea, but the usage of the olympics is just a lil played..

of course you dont have ghostwriters, too good for help
youre dope as fuck man......oh sorry for talking to myself
feel sad for your grandpa? fuck ill leave you in worse health
say you put my L'S uP? nah thats just you twisting yourself
man i wanna finish you off for real so just gimme some time
^^^
dope, dope, dope, very creative
8/10

overral verse....8.5/10

spul...........................

Prolly a verse full of bitin' shit, and really not much more
...Yea, I DO bite... but only at Empire's store
^^^
not a bad opener, 7/10

Your verse is so "soft", like it was "sealy" lit
Peep yo last verse, now who's the one who really bit?
Why use a ghostwriter, cuz ain't nobody here better than me
Fashos not you, compared to my "A", you're a letter "D"
^^^^
not really feelin them bars 5/10

Say I like to joke? I guess for you I'll boast love
You wanna see a joke?... Then look at the post above
^^^
real nice, very witty n humouress 9/10

You're a "pedofile", you'll rape that kid, to see us lose
But yo rhymes are more misleadin' than yo stash of "Jesus Juice"
^^^
it was aight, it was aight 6.5/10

You're also fuckin' fat, ears big, nose jus like Nomar
Fuck Phantom of the Opera, you're the Shadow of the Oprah
^^^
hat off to them lines! hahahaha! humouress, witty, sarcastic, personal, a punch, 10/10, highlight of the battle right there..

He takes his "lil friend" and runs, cuz he knos that I shook them
Cuz his verse blows more times, than a hoe living in Brooklyn
^^
pretty tight, not as creative but it connected well...

Oh, no! It's Phantom on E-looch's dick. Shit, I better run!!!
Scrap that, it's only fruit head and V-Ice wit a water gun
^^^
LMFAOOOO, That was nice, the boy killed it! 9/10

Go to witness protection, you pussy. Change yo name jus like Calamity
Have you behind a "Bush"... like yo name was Sean Hannity
^^^
haha, aight pretty decent, 7.5//10...

on the whole spul had the better verse, better structured, personals hit harder, both had witty humouress punches, but the opener an finisher from spul came harder

tight ass battle, yall keep em comin n return the fave

p e a c e

Recluse 10-13-04 11:57 AM

Voted For: SPuL

Prolly a verse full of bitin' shit, and really not much more
...Yea, I DO bite... but only at Empire's store
lol nice one
Your verse is so "soft", like it was "sealy" lit
Peep yo last verse, now who's the one who really bit?
lol another good one
Why use a ghostwriter, cuz ain't nobody here better than me
Fashos not you, compared to my "A", you're a letter "D"
good punch
Man, look at yo verse, you're "ass", you only spit "shit"
the only way you get yo wins, is wit yo newb-infested dick
good
I merked yo ass up, but you opened it up again
Pullin' a JT, "Cry Me a River", is yo only way to win
good
Say I like to joke? I guess for you I'll boast love
You wanna see a joke?... Then look at the post above
good
Got a "watermelon" for a head, and no brain, don't be deceived
Yea, you can spit good.... but only when usin' seeds
good
You're a "pedofile", you'll rape that kid, to see us lose
But yo rhymes are more misleadin' than yo stash of "Jesus Juice"
lol...nice
To butt sex you are open, like the shirt of the lil kid
What you got a crush on me? Got my name repped in yo sig
good
You're also fuckin' fat, ears big, nose jus like Nomar
Fuck Phantom of the Opera, you're the Shadow of the Oprah
nice
Better rumble back to the jungle, he look like a chimpansee
Like windows on limousines... me~him~can't~see
lmao...
He takes his "lil friend" and runs, cuz he knos that I shook them
Cuz his verse blows more times, than a hoe living in Brooklyn
roflmao
We all kno you're a pussy, you're 1/4 my skill, only a quarter
When I come, you hold up more "flags", than the U.S.A boarder
good
Oh, no! It's Phantom on E-looch's dick. Shit, I better run!!!
Scrap that, it's only fruit head and V-Ice wit a water gun
good
Go to witness protection, you pussy. Change yo name jus like Calamity
Have you behind a "Bush"... like yo name was Sean Hannity
lmao..

[overall:10/10



First off, SPuL aint spit a hot line in so long
And now the bitch is gassed, thats just an oxymoron
okay??
jumbo shrimp for a dick, never gunna be fuckin
Most girls would mistake it for a really low belly button
not there
you are shit to me, something mist be wrong in your skull
so here goes nothing bitch.........................SPuL
wtf...
man im better and thats how it will always be duke
of course my verse is whack man, its all about you!
okay i guess
and youve been banned already, dont forget that b
wanna joke around with you but youll use it against me!
could of been better
for real SPuL bites so much youd figure hed be full for days
Iight ill put away the jokes, i dont need personals anyways
okay
fuck ill be even nicer in my lyrics, prolly wont even curse
his name in my lines is the closest he ever gets to a freakin dope verse
good one
come on all, watch SPuL get his ass beat, everyones invited
but please dont say i fucked him, he might get a little excited
good
plus im sorry for calling you nothing, i must have mistaked shit
Cuz you ARE challenging according to your coach for the special olympics
aight
god damn contradictory bitch really you fuckin dummy quit
wanna have beef but still have me on your buddy list
okay
nobody likes your whack lines so ill be the one to stop it
bitch you couldnt CURRY a tune with a vase on your noggin
okay
Dont know SPuL? heres a quick bio: everybody fuckin hates him
While others continue to raise the bar, he continues to take them
not there
of course you dont have ghostwriters, too good for help
youre dope as fuck man......oh sorry for talking to myself
okay
feel sad for your grandpa? fuck ill leave you in worse health
say you put my L'S uP? nah thats just you twisting yourself
wasn't there
man i wanna finish you off for real so just gimme some time
.................................................. .............................
overall:9/10



v/spul


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