whewwwwwwww powerful piece. keep it real. this shyt was hott. uno

wow... powerful deep.... good..... can i show 'him' that? ok that poem had a great flow and a good format that i liked ... i was feeling it all the way through and hope that those feelings will soon change for the better..... he'll come around
but ur rite sayin ilove you is similar to sayin i trust you..... and he says the first one often....we'll figure it out....keep that head high~peace

synickle: thanks for the reply.... im glad u enjoyed... love to ya

mizz kitta: yea, u can show it to him but dont let him know that i told u u could... it was ur idea...alright? lol...ne way thanks for the reply and im glad u enjoyed...love to ya

please dont sleep! love to all

woah gurl...
 

blew my mind...i really felt this...if ya ever wanna collab...

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but great poem...i like the lil floe to it...was well written an thought out...an didn't get off topic like some of the other poems i've read since i've been back

k-d, id love to do a collab with u, ur an awesome poet... so i added ur name to my list, heres mine if u find me first... screaminmonkey22... so hit me up if u find me

and thanks for the reply, it really means alot to me.. love to ya

.....*speechless after reading ANOTHER great piece from Monkeypoet*......

*feels special at the fact that varentao is speachless at the fact of one of her poems*

THis was real powerful piece
monkey u did a superb
job on this one good flow
raw emotionz
can realate
^^^^^^^^^^^^^
got 2 uppin this one 4 u

much luv and respect

~illest~

the illestchick: thanks for the reply... it really means alot to me... im glad u enjoyed it... love to ya!

keep it up dawg that was a powerful drop!

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Dang gurl,
i can mos def relate to this,
dope poem,
much props,
diggin ur ish,
keep spittin!

~1~

top notch stuff, but i would be lying to think other wise before i even open the link. peace.

joey

Kstroyer: thanks for the reply... ill find some of ur stuff... love to ya

[*¤ÐîMêØñФ* ] : thanks for the props, im glad u enjoyed... ur comments are always aprecieated... love to ya

Joey: thanks for the reply... top notch; i never really thought of it that way, but thank u.... love to ya

I cant think of anotha word to describe this otha than beautiful... it flowed so well that it added to the message & point behind it which produced so much power it was just magnificant! WOW! you have a lot of skill gurl... keep it up!