..:Logistic:.. vs RED BEAM
 

Battle Rules:

6 - 12 linez
No Recycling
No Biting

Well Lets go! :thumbup:

3-0 = Knocked Out

Minimum posts to vote: 100

Check in by: 10-21-04 at 08:22 PM

Must drop verse in 180 minutes after check in.

..:Logistic:.. has ACCEPTED this battle on 10-21-04 07:53 PM.

RED BEAM has ACCEPTED this battle on 10-21-04 07:53 PM.

**Trip Red Beam as he walks on the stage...**
**I Pick up the mic ... RED starts shaking!**

Your record sucks, it's about to suck worse, I'm not done,
Even if I was your dad i wouldn't call you my son.
Light you up like a candle, Somethin you can't handle,
Control yourlfow better than a fucking roman candle.
My Fam Can't stand ya face, its a discrase to my race,
Keep your soul packed in a bottle in mah briefcase.
Whys Six afraid of Seven? Because Seven "ATE" Nine,
Whys "Red Beam" afraid of me? Cuz, he knows he cant rhyme.
You aint worth a video tape, I Spitt a famous mixtape,
Last year I heard that you were filed for man rape.
You smell worse than mace, I already won the hunam race,
I took your own medacine and gave you a little taste!
Your found Guilty, for sucking, I just closed the fuckin case!

I think that was 13.... Sry... oh well...
I think that was pretty good.. i guess....
Peace!!

(decided to try something new...every bar is a different style of flow)


Yo, after i win, put me in yo respect list
just cause you a safe driver dont mean you wreckless/

check it, i flow with a cause, you flow like a hobo
always begging for rhymes, shouldve just been a no-show/

yo, Going against me, i'll put yo name on the map
Make this the worst lost for a nigga droppn verses in a rap/(you)

your a pusher, but dont push your luck
cause if you think too hard against me, yo brain might get stuck/

...kid, "You gotta feel me" as i "Flip" this "Gameover"
I'll "One take" it like "Hov'" and i'll show this flamethrower/

yo, lets not make this a "Kontroverzey" when i rip
your a 12 year old DOPE ANGEL,who said that's a "myth"

fuck it, "angelz of destuction", is that what you bring
all you niggas is wack, none of yall niggas got wings/

aiyo, go grow some nuts, its well past yo bed time
take advantage of the choice, and dont cross the red line/

dawg, ur not on my level, you 12 year old bastard
I just owned you like a "slave", start calling me "master"

BIOTCHHH....i aint done this in a while....holla back youngn

You just made 12 yr old bastard, merk you alot faster!
Ha Ha!!

Nice shit dude....
I like it!!

Respect~~~

Peace..... lets get some votes on this shit!!!!~~~~~

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Voted For: RED BEAM

ok............ not a really good battle...... Red Beam u got this man b/c of personals and punches even tho i wasnt really fealin any of em....... not much more to say, no one had a hot verse and neither of u two hit really hard with me......... both used elementary languauge...... both are prolly in elementary school......... but keep doin wat ur doin, ull get good..... both of u...... i liked the "dont cross the red line" thing if u were talkin about ur name

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i was..and good lookn for vote...i return HONEST favors...l8r

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Voted For: ..:Logistic:..

punches were the thing that got him this battle. punches flow and medium personalz.
your verse was excellent logistic.
red you need to elevate but not as bad as me lol but i thought your verse was sorta played.
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Voted For: ..:Logistic:..

Aight Good battle but Logistic got this..But only Just...
L's Structure was better and the flow was aight except some lines were a bit too short...
Red Beam u had a good verse but u were tryin ta use evry one in AOD as disses....But ya verse was a bit too basic..especially for sum1 at your level...Overall Logistic came just a bit harder ..but not by Much...No hate..
V/Logistic....