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Triple_N vs AutoMATIK™
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6 - UNLIMITED Lines No Crew Votes No Recycling No Biting Minimum posts to vote: 100 Check in by: 10-27-04 at 12:49 AM Must drop verse in 4320 minutes after check in. |
AutoMATIK™ has ACCEPTED this battle on 10-24-04 01:00 AM.
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Triple_N has ACCEPTED this battle on 10-24-04 01:05 AM.
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Ah'ight son here's my spit...............Good luck to ya
You are the apparent spokesman for all net-thugs and I despise your sight Cuz Only way u bust slugs is not watchin' ya step in moist folliage at night U try tirelessly to give off this thoruoghbred thug pimp persona in ya rhymes When only time u "clockin' hose" is trying to beat your previous lawn time I spent 15 minutes peepin' ya tracks & your alicia keys parody was booty Now....I want my "quarterback" to "audible" his "plays" into silent movies You wack, and I'm a make u "see the light" like albinos lookin' in the mirror Punches quake gon "shake dat shit" like dance lessons by a showerless shakira So don't waste time & money droppin a CD...seriously dawg whats the use? Cuz it wouldn't be rotational by itself playing a game of duck, duck goose |
It's a Known Fact Clowns Like This Will 'Never Be Nice'
I Spit In All Angles Quick ... So I Should Of Been Named A 'Veteran Twice' My Rhymes Are Too Blazin To ‘Hold It’ Imma Rip Ya Face Till ‘It’s Folded’ You’re Done Kid … Watch As I Smash Triple Like the ‘Bases Is Loaded’ So Raw, Are Your Having-Flow? But Who Cares Since ‘The Fashion-Blows’ I’ll Drive Nails In Your Heart And Really Leave Your Life Screwed Like The ‘Passions Show’ I got this ‘Stranger Owned’ as I Replace Ya Brain With Air To ‘Change Your Dome’ My Spits efficient to Leave Ya Drifting Off Into Thin Air Like Sailors In ‘Danger Zone’ It’s nothing … This Battles Over,Either You In Or You 'Out Son' ... I Spit illness So I'll Probably Be Too Sick To Remember the 'Out Come' |
uppin for some honest votes>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>
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wooooooooorrrrdddd
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Voted For: Triple_N
first off Automatik: normally u come harder than you did.. the opener was str8 self-glorification, keep in mind this is a battle.. i was disappointed with; It's a Known Fact Clowns Like This Will 'Never Be Nice' I Spit In All Angles Quick ... So I Should Of Been Named A 'Veteran Twice' My Rhymes Are Too Blazin To ‘Hold It’ Imma Rip Ya Face Till ‘It’s Folded’ ^u should stop puttin' apostrophes thru ur verse, it's easy to see ur wordplay and etc... BUT after the beginning portion, u did have some hard-hittin' punches like the baseball line with the bases loaded, not bad :), u had sum aight couple of lines UNTIL the last bar another self-glorification: It’s nothing … This Battles Over,Either You In Or You 'Out Son' ... I Spit illness So I'll Probably Be Too Sick To Remember the 'Out Come' ^no good, nice flow, aight structure but quit mentionin' urself throughout keep attackin' him like he stole a million dollars from ya ass.. not bad but i'd say 6/10 :( next, Triple N: better metas in urs.. kinda funny too.. u had the better opener and closer- using rotation and duck, duck goose lol... original, u didn't need the quote (") marks either, ur wordplay was also very clear.. ur best lines were the quaterback and the lawn time with- clockin' hose.. ha ha, not bad, ur flow was alright ur structure was mo' stretched than usual but u delivered harder punches and had better vocab.. 7/10 :) u both did a good job, g'luck with this and hit up my open battle.. :) |
Voted For: Triple_N
Personals Personals Personals. Automatik shit was aite punches here and there but i could find a decent personal.... and i found 2 on triple's I spent 15 minutes peepin' ya tracks & your alicia keys parody was booty Now....I want my "quarterback" to "audible" his "plays" into silent movies ^^This one was the nicest but played on some ways..but made me laugh and the other one about the cd at the end.... V/T why: personals + Punches = Win Simple math. |
Uppin>>>>>>>>>>>>>>can We Get Some Votes !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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This was feedback posted for Triple_N
just checking polls....................................
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Uppin for some votes on this.......................
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Voted For: Triple_N
yo one sided battle automatik i expected more from you kid,your punches were wack,but u did have some nice wordplay and flow,and your structure was coo....but man u did not have any punches at all in this battle man...what happened?:( triple N you however had some nice and witty punches i liked that man,you had okay wordplay,and your flow plus your structure were decent,i think you won this man you came creative... overall-triple n won this with better punches,creativity,and flow and structure,auto u did ok with the wordplay,and flow etc....but you didnt have hard hitting punches....and i seen better battles from you man....but yeah triple gets this v/triple n |
yeh yeh ... Triple took this one . i had like 5min to key up some shit ... it would of been alot more interesting if i had more time ...
but good battle ... |
Voted For: Triple_N
good battle right here...real close... Auto, ya verse was straight...the structure was on point so the it had a nice flow to it...punches were coo, the concepts behind them were good, but they it seemed like they coulda hit harder...but i didnt like your opener/closer cuz they were both self-glorification... Triple, i liked ya verse too...structure was decent, but the lines were a lil stretched so the flow was hurtin a bit...but your punches were good...i was lmao @ some of them like the 'hose' line...some punches werent entirely original, but they had a different twist to 'em like the shakira line...which was coo i guess...overall, u had better consistency cuz u hit Auto in everyline...anyways, V/ Triple N, for more consistency... |
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