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insomniac insights
this aint hip hop this is poetry with a purpose
find power in these words when things aint working whats the definition of perfect? when the worlds a circus we all wasting time like its worthless no knowledge of what hour it be self knowledge im empowering me regardless to they western philosiphies... contradicting thir culture..expose em for the fact that they vultures if life is what you make it..then wahat if u made it by destroying the world and coming back to save it? and if mnoey make the world go round.. who gonna be maiking money after it twirls and goes down? who's my friend? who's my enemy? who do YOU pretend to be? mentally..whats gonna be the end of me? they say without no good..there can be no evil.. so am i justified if i decide to murder people? and if lifes a 'test'..what u gotta do to pass? who decides when you fail and what's the name of the class? how many credits is it worth? im ahead of my verse.. if heavens u in the clouds...why they put us in the dirt? why we ride in a hearse when they put the nail in our casket? why we gotta die? why am i asking? why do women inject they body with plastic..living a lie when real beauty cant be seen with eyes..it comes from inside and why..why we never see the wolf in disguise? most of the time..the wolf's the one we trust with our lifes but why even ask why? cuz lifes a cancer.. it'll KILL YOU before you find the answers......but keep living... (p.s. no way a form of why..i wrote this in 1999) |
yeah kid im just feeling like posting throwbacks...feedback
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Nice piece man. Nice struture, nice wording, I'm feelin' dat. 9/10
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vocab was good and all words flow'd well.9.5/10
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uppin for more opinions...........................
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that was good nigz..
fix the structure and change the font now so people will realise that. sometimes people judge by how pretty it looks and not how good it is.. I give it a 7/10 jus cuz the structure peice BK-----sorry bout the Chi nigga R.Kelly givin BK beef |
no doubt^^^ struc wouldve been better but i rushed it
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7/10
1.bit long 2.struckture the rest was ok |
damn can u give more feedback?
uppin for ops..... |
nice man...i was feeling it...do an audio with it...it would be dope
Keep Writting...9/10 Peace |
yeah that was good man...9/10...do an audio with it...it would be dope
KeeP WrittinG Peace |
been tryna tell these motherfuckas for a long time..thanx for the compliment
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Look I go to a soul bazaar in an old car dubbing on twenties
Rubbing plenty of babes loving with many craves so linty Cats confront me boldly junk is solely for the birds best To have a greeting or remark needing to see art to express Myself, accompany friends on shopping trips be popping Script rolling tall carts strolling in Wal-mart no stopping |
^^wtf? type of feed back is that?
leave your OPINION not a verse.... 2nd u did that...do it again and i got a hit em up just for you |
Yall Ignore Me And My Shit The Rawest
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