testin' my flow...feedbak wanted.
 

i drop't this in V.T.'s elevation room so i figured ,shit why not get some feeds from everybody on my flow.just a freestyle to test my flow.how'd i do?

i leave ribs broken,1 pokes holes in da lung,now this kids chokin'
breathin' stops,death wit' eye lids open,gangsta' huh?guess u died
str8 locin',
i ain't loafin',smoke blunts wit' str8 coke in,coke blunts jus' way potent,
pop gats at hate spoken,leave holes in,like old tokens,slam bodies like hulk hogan,
got janes hoin' and joes foldin',fire melts moldin's,ya' soul's in',
crush spirits ya' soul's holdin',knock u down like bowlin',
flows hot n scoldin',to obtain spits golden Grandz was chosen,
unweavin' webs woven,never sleep no eyes closin',V.T. niccas rides rollin' leave broads wit the thighs swollen,hit grand slams on web cams like ryan,nolan,
gun butt ya dumb fuks leavin ya lump'd up,ur flows go in a dump truck,
whack'd somewhat is ur skillz sum'd up,numb nutts,still alive u got dumb luck,
my rhymes like dirty sex when bumbs fuk,don' get stuck cause my guns' tucked
make u see da light n not the spot that the sun struck.
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shit was fire...
ya flow was HOT...
creativeness was good...
i felt the whole verse ran smoth....
9.0 outta 10...

V.T mother fuckers
WHATS YA THOUGHT WAS GONNA HAPPEN???

BANG-BANG-EARLY....

Flow was good, the structure seemed off, but reading it,i picked up where you wanted pauses and breaks, nice job..8/10..1

thank you for the feed peeps.the stucture i fixed how i wanted it then i posted and it went bak to that so i left it.uupppppppppppppppppnnnnnnnnnnnnn..............

pretty good drop...the content was there to..
id say bout 8/10......

thx daz.appreciate the feed.
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whoah, really good verse that, your multis and wordplay were good. 9/10 id say

damn..thx.i appreciate the feed goldeneye.
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yo loveliss where u stay in BK...
i no a girl that live out there...
she stay on montauk ave....
o yea nice flow kidd

good shit overall, no need to say wat i think da otha peeps took da words outta my mouth..but luvin ur shit....ur elevating more n more each day..keep it up...9/10

Thx For The Feed Ppl.lil C Wats Good Hommie.saw Ur Pics.
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damn right this was good!

nice wordplays and multi'z nice flow u got der


u messed up some parts but either way dis an good piece

8/10........word

thx for the feed d.
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