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Method. vs WICKEDCLOWN
Battle Rules:
15 lines No Crew Votes No Recycling No Biting TOPIC- Prophesys (seeing te future) goodluck Minimum posts to vote: 20 Check in by: 11-28-04 at 02:03 AM Must drop verse in 100 minutes after check in. |
WICKEDCLOWN has ACCEPTED this battle on 11-28-04 12:27 AM.
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visions... abstract veiws run through my mind i see visions of pain and anguish from deep inside as i go through the daily grind i know my fate has been signed for i am someone unlike the rest of the human race a prophet, a teller of the fortunes of ones grace my mind clouds over and life becomes a giant blur and thus i know a secret vision is about to occur peoples failiors and fates rampatly burst in my brain visions of rage and innocant people being brutaly slain what a shame it is, this curse of my minds eye why was i cursed with this, why must i cry for when i see these visions of pain and death i say why not me, what is differant that kept me alive this day and then as i lay my head down at night, the clouds clear before i begin to dream, i think of it all and shead a lucid tear |
Method. has ACCEPTED this battle on 11-28-04 12:53 AM.
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-Topic-Prophecys superior thoughts predictions inflecting everything got me distrot... critera gods gift i was taught everyday restrictions so answers i saught... in my situation years intervene with my everlasting destination... to my gift i bring dedication never passing my united nation... i see destruction copin pleas to corruption bein forever incripted... i see bodily harm as in lipo suction word erruption problems over seas scriptured... predict the apocalypse along with apostles drugs bein exumed through nostrals.. conflict rising egos brings war along with citizans as hostals... sept 11th shall bring an explosion worlds crust begins erotion... diplomatic words spark war implosion kerry camp sets out for a closin.. Intelligent minds gather information to be unknown for the worse... 2004 brings irelevent joy of all kinds a team searching for victory breaks a curse... intelectual individuals break patterns for contrasted scriptures... bisexual lectureal views planet saturn revokes the 2 mona lisa pictures.. last view before black out was people mass reduction with no found iraqie weapons.. |
Voted For: Method.
wow..bad battle..good on one side..makes it worse lol Wicked CLown:fix the rhyme scheme!!god damn its sooo basic. jesus christ..and remember when you start off wack..most of the people don't eve bother to finish it..so start if with a BANG!..shit you aint continue with a bang lol rhyme scheme basic..content not very interesting..all in all bad peice..I expected more from you.. Method:gooooood Verse..very good vocab..a bit much..but hey I just might be stupid :)..and nigga you had good flow too most ppl overload vocab..and make it flow VERY bad..so big ups..and structure was good..need I say more you win Method |
Voted For: WICKEDCLOWN
mmm.... my vote has to go to wickedclown, i found your verse a lot more.... intense... deep... it was real mate and i liked it... it flowed well, method, your verse was good but your lines were stretched so it didnt sound as good.. soory mate.. both verses had equally good content bit wicked clown takes this from good flow and a nice use of vocab return the favour k Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. |
yo an retrun the favour k and drop a vote on the battle in the sig k... thx
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lmao@that vote.....................................
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Voted For: Method.
ok u had better vocab wicked urs was basic topicals arent ur strong point buckaroo lol work on ur vocab structure both were ok not feelin puttin it in the middle like a poem so it looks better lol so tie there complexity definately method urs actually had me thinkin had visions runnin through my head so im givin it to method for better complexity and vocab all wicked really had was good flow good drops to both though Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. |
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ok this is fuckin retarded... this kid took 2 hours to drop a fuckin 15 line verse... and if 4fils vote was dqd those other ones should be too, same amount of feedback... fuckin christ
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Voted For: WICKEDCLOWN
WICKEDCLOWN: for such a deep dark name, you have a light side.. your multies and force was dramatic. and this piece was an instant classic.. hit really hard Method.: Your Drop Was Clean, You Just Came Across A Better Verse.. Good Job To Both Though.. Please Return The Favor With An Honest Vote In One Of My Battles? Thanks.. Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. |
this is fuckin wack you fuckers dont even know how to vote! an clown stfu...
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