slut flame-Lady Fiya DIss
 

yea this bitch is ducking me so i drop this now and dont even wanna waste nomore time on the bitch hit the soundclick link:thumbup:

cant hear your songs yet..they haven't cleared...but as soon as it hits 12 pm PSF time i'm gettin to it..i wanna hear what "MR.EMPIRE" sounds like

lmao.....you do know that you don't need to put the beat in the background. You can put the beat on a seperate track in cool edit, that's why there are so many tracks. Anyway, you should try to ride the beat better. You kinda lacked emotion.....just sounded like you were reading. Anyway, this kinda sounded like a freestyle. Personals were there.....lol @ more threads about me than battles up. I liked that one.You can use a little help on the production side of things. I suggest reading a tutorial or two, or getting a mentor that will work with you. You might think that it'll take too long to get your songs/disses out, but once you get the shit down, it only takes like five minutes to mix the shit. Anyway, it wasn't that bad for a first drop....keep dropping, you can only get better :thumbup:

Gewt on aim u dick ^^

enygma this ain't his first drop!!!!!!!!! LMFAO... check the other thread.. and the only nice thing u said was me makin more threads than battlin'--was kinda funny, but empire-- u tell everybody else that they're off-beat but this was ridiculous (flow on beat!)... emotion was nice, but ur flow was like u were speaking to a child for a nap time book... i dun believe you rap outside of rv.. and if u do.. wow.. shit's surprising.. but still, it was aight-- fa a non-freestyle... u still off-beat since the Carson audio diss.. but this was a nice beat, i was expect much more-- seeing you had such a long time to write.. =/ no hate, real feedback... stop reading and flow, and breathe- at least u slowed down ur voice a lil' since last time.. but still.. needs a lil' improving.. nice written.. compared to that freestyle u did for Carson... good luck.. u'll see a come back.. lmao..

that was a freestyle and your still ducking me i called you out 2 days ago you still aint responde and yes i am still new to cool edit only reason the quality sounds bad and yes i will own you in audio

u don't get it do you, don't blame cool edit, and u never gave me a link.. u said u quit text, right after u called me out, don't be silly.. do i have to search under your four aliases to find the dayum link.. u called me out, MY RULES... understand that...

Your shits....iiighhhtt...i heard it on Lo-Fi...lol and it prolly sounds the same on hi-fi..its about 6/10...

Eh" 5/10................................................ ..............

that wasn't a freestyle, you can tell your reading right off your page...its laughable people lying about that...

another question...is this spoken word? sounded like it...

no hate...but you talk too much shit for skills like this

word yo...i was thinkin the same thing about the spoken word part...sounds like he at an open mic night reciting his "angry" poem.

da whole fuckin time u was talkin go back to fuckin text you bitch cause you aint no fuckin real rapper lol worst shit i ever heard in my life i give dis a .0000001/10
gone.

im bout to peep this shit........... wonders what he will here...?

aight...it sounds to me first off that youve just started using the audio equipment and havent gotten mixing and speeds down yet... but rhymes are....ok, was kinda expecting better... i listend to all the tracks but the one that stands out is "Still My", the accapella poem, that shit was pretty tight, i was feelin that one, kinds mos def like on that one... but the actual rap songs werent that hott... thought theyd be better... but could just be a lack of knowlage about the equipment......... no hate... PC

it sounded like you were reading.........you need to ride the beat and flow better......punches were aight.........lyrics wre good..........but work on flow and delivery