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Im Back(bitch)
whooo hooo im bak only the real old cats will remeber me syntax no me, djx and ryuu do lil south do no me, some other kids mite but this is muh first post since i been bak kids watch and learn .......
its down rite remarkable the way that i spray // clippin kids dignity when i enter the game/// my skills against yalls, fatality yah got none// thats why when i step in yall scream the games done// my blades swung , look at the name son// the nicest.... decapitation..... leave yah mamed son// im back u stoopit newbies move it im spittin full clips// back up out my way or youll b face down on the floor next tah that pila a bullets// why u shakin stop waitin i double dare u tah pull it// niggas lay dead with they heat from me cause they hesitated tah kill me// im back mutha fuckas im the best i forever will be....BITCH:mad: |
it was aight....there was an okay use of vocab
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upping the fuck outa this shit
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solid piece, when will ppl realize vocab isn't everything..but solid piece, good flow...keep dropping, make it longer tho, i got more time than 4 minutes to read a piece...late
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LOL that was my last text post EVER so i wont keep droppin lol uppin
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TIGHT...BUT IF YOU WAS GONNA END TEXT OFF THAT YOU SHOULD'VE CAME HARDER AND WENT LONGER BUT THAT'S ME
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nice shit work on ya vocab
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maybe if i look at some it can get this up//....
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solid flow.. kinda feelin this one.. keep writin dun..
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^I agree wit that...Keep it up kid...~1~ |
PEOPLE FORGET WHAT RHYMING IS ABOUTE THESE STYLES WORDPLAYS AND SHIT AINT ANYTHING THE IDEA AND EXPRESSION IS WHAT COUNTS I THINK THE ONLY FLAW THIS HAS IS ITS SHORT OTHER THAN THAT I LIKED IT
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i wish i could get mor etehn just o tight what ever can i get some qouutes and isho
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sameold sameold here
your flow really didn't do anything for me it was bit simple but it did have it's moments keep workin' on your skills -1- |
MASTER BLASTER IS A BITCH!!!
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^^^^^^^^I agree i cant stand when niggaz say work on ya vocab half of the famous rhymers dont have vocab and most of them is pretty ill so stop lookin at the vocab and pay more attention to the meaning behind it |
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