Parallel vs 50Cent_MurderInc
 

Battle Rules:

6 Lines
10 minutes to spit
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting

Good luck you two....

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Closed - Expired / old battle win

50Cent_MurderInc has ACCEPTED this battle on 12-05-04 04:02 PM.

Throw 2 by 4 a punch....watch him snap
Think he'll respond? nah! boards don't hit back
Maybe he's good....kids just pulling our rope
He was quoted in Mike Hawk's sig...he must be dope
Herbs hopeless.....just searchin for e-nookie
Bitch cant be tough...I mean he beefs with a cookie

Parallel has ACCEPTED this battle on 12-05-04 04:12 PM.

if you dont understand wordplay and punches dont VOTE!!!
Here:

50cent_murderinc who do you think ur “pullin”, Michel Jackson
Only posers do shit to “grab” little baby boys dicks to win One
Fuck it you always pull a “fancy-pants” and grab children Anyway
Like an “illusionist” to are planet, & wears “short shorts”, How Gay
You asked bigchase to help with your “rhymes” on the Computer
Newbies don’t deserve better “phrases”, it don’t get any Cuter


...good luck

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This was feedback posted for 50Cent_MurderInc
 

wat a wack battle wf watta wack name fukin change it dawg its wack gud shit frm parrell aight

This was feedback posted for 50Cent_MurderInc
 

this battle was hella short...

multies: no1
wordplay: 50
punches: 50
flow: 50
structure: 50
metas: 50

parallels punches were hella played...*MICHAEL JACKSON*...
his flow was off a little...but u can never get flow exactly how its meant to be when u read it...n e way...both good structure...
both need elavation...but i think yall both got potential...

best line: Maybe he's good....kids just pulling our rope
He was quoted in Mike Hawk's sig...he must be dope
^^^only because i hate mike hawk

worst line: Herbs hopeless.....just searchin for e-nookie
Bitch cant be tough...I mean he beefs with a cookie
^^^wtf...


ne way...hay 50...thx for sayin i need elavation when i even said it was gonna b basic...obviously the guy has a reading problem...lmfao...

but u took this 1 honestly...


~1~

*werd*...^^^...

Voted For: 50Cent_MurderInc

vote/50cent_murderinc..

he actually had personals and punches.. just make it a lil longer...

paralell.. mJ = played, no real personals.. punches didnt hit at all.. elevate...

good battle. pz 1

Voted For: Parallel

you you had hardder punches and personals even though there were only 6 lines but still it cool. good flow and style.

murder sucked... nuff said

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lol@ the unexplained vote....people explain them...

This was feedback posted for Parallel
 

you both suck.....................................