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i need help to elavate!!
k from wat u have i want everyones help plz no hate!! heres a rap i used to diss some one tell me wat i need to elavate on the most and rate everything!!!!
sayin nigga when your ass is probably white bitch u aint shit when im done with u u think uve seen da light like i say all u got is gay faggot jokes im so good makin soljas to have strokes callin me a ho when u need bettah flow my metapores are stronger then your punches as i say again im da bully takin pussies lunches |
lmao, sorry man
anyways, this was way too simple,use some wit for God's sake instead of just saying things straight out, be creative most importantly work and i mean work on your punches & personals you didn't have any... forget about "flow" and multies that wont help you win, concentrate on strong disses...and dont talk about yourself..the best thing you can do is battle as much as possible and you'll get the hang of it or not |
Silence is a virtue.
It's good advice. |
lol,
but actually patience is a virtue... silence is golden :thumbup: |
hmm...ur such a dumbass why u gon say "sayin nigga wen ur ass iz probly white"...U R WHITE!!! no racism but u make no sense....itz so basic put sum utha stuff all u do iz rhyme basic wordz no complexity at all...need structure work an flow work...u need single aspect of ur rap elevated....listen 2 sum cassidy...or sum game...over an over till it getz impounded in ur brain but don't use any of their linez i kno like all of 'em an i kno most of every1 in dipsetz linez
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to elevate it takes time.. your starting to sound like sinner...
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lol at sinner..... damn hes in his own catagory of wackness..
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lol word to that but sinner started his wackness by constantly askin everyone for help and this reminded me of him so i bought it up
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lol yeah...... but siiner aint never gonna mprove...
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Ask your big brother empire on how 2 elevate..........well.
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lmao.. nuff said... |
lol..... i beat they dickride haard out
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^^ lol true that.. n the thing is they're not even brothers.. one works at wendies n the other wears other peoples football jerseys... despite the name change thuglife you'll always be a wigger...
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i wouldn't be suprised if empire decided to ghostwrite for his mini me one day
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you need to hop off Empire dick..
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