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Shadow74 12-07-04 04:39 PM

again dissin sr$ and youngkilla
 
keep thinkin ur amazing wen ur gettin 6 outta 10
sleep on me coz u cant dream of bein me n a pen
writin like crazy dont matter if its whack or triflin
tha clock has run out on u both get ready for doom
tick tock tick tock....................................BOOM!
as soon as i bust through tha gates of hell u bail
tune ur brains in im shuttin u down dont frown
like clowns at a circus laughin sayin u merkd us
lil tyke dont think u better u jus got a head start
mark ready set go now im on a roll to say wuteva n let go
try and sustain tha shit that comes from my brain
fry ur lame ass for even speakin my name
my lyrics break ur back everytime u come back u get sacked
slap tha black off u till u get tha facts..u lack
tha skillz to compete so i slap u not once but twice
i hit chu harder than crack im on fire like tha piece that i pack
lay ya ass out tap u out like kurt angle on a wrestling mat
i told u im physcopathic an addict to this rhymin n killin
im sick i'll keep ya ass in an attic fo not sayn my shits ill-mattic
in fact its like static tha hairs on ya body jus raise up
sumn like that u lack it coz my mind is a crime
u sit at home thinkin of words that rhmye
jot it on ur pad of paper naw nigga jus stop
thinkin u better than me i think not
on my block talkin shit you'll hear one sound..POP
but since we here i still have u trapped in my maze
dazed and confused coz i come hotter than bob marley blazed
dissin on me son must be a faze..r u lookin for your manhood
u should crawl back in tha hole where u came from son
coz i came back to stat tha facts but for now im done

Shadow74 12-07-04 05:04 PM

uppin^______________^

Shadow74 12-07-04 05:24 PM

^___________________________^

Ill-Grammatix 12-07-04 05:36 PM

ooooooo000f!!!!

Kawn Flixx 12-07-04 05:37 PM

why do people keep usin my ^___________________^

that fuckin pisses me off too much...fuck ya for usin it again

Shadow74 12-07-04 06:01 PM

well damn i didnt kno u were so sensitive bout it...lol

Shadow74 12-07-04 06:11 PM

uppinn w/o this ^___________^....lol

Shadow74 12-07-04 06:34 PM

uppinn this shit coz it needs to be

Acuity 12-07-04 06:46 PM

yo at least uve elevated n atken advice from yo last drop it showz...but still not quite bangin.....................some of ur lines have been played.......... afew originals kurt angle and marley linez etc but oterwise average but betta diss, sumin that they will actually hav 2 respond 2 so they dnt look like punks...........overall 7/10

Shadow74 12-07-04 06:59 PM

finalllyyyyyyyyyyy sumn better than it sux..lol thanx yo..uppin

Shadow74 12-07-04 10:56 PM

killed em wit this shit

kid Knockout 12-07-04 11:18 PM

nice
 
you used ill lines...nothin bad about it

kid Knockout 12-07-04 11:19 PM

nice rhythym....good stuff....write more shit like that

Shadow74 12-07-04 11:19 PM

werd up thanx yo....uppin this muthafucka

Shadow74 12-08-04 07:05 AM

uppin yeaaaaaaaaa


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