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TitoBronsky 12-15-04 06:10 AM

Back wit a new joint.....*PEEP*
 
finaly got some free time to record.....

peep the link in my siggy..... its the first joint on the top.....

...untitled... flow.......


drop some feed.......



"ez"

Know-Gimix 12-15-04 10:36 AM

haha, beat is a little crazy... intro sound skitzo- im liking it.... flow sounds like it comes off a little weird at the very start, but sounds solid afterwords--- damn, im really feelin the flow on this shit. multies are constant-- you came with a flow on this shit nobody can say is weak- laid back as you always are, lyricals on point, all in all good shit-- foreal I think this one of the best tracks I've heard from you- decent quality too... good job kid, holla. 1

SmokaJoka. 12-15-04 04:34 PM

-Listening

Beat starts off ok...not feeling too much, but it's alright...quality is decent.....intro is coo though....emotion needs work pretty badly...delivery is ok....but vocabulary and everything is good as well....overall nothing much else to say...just emotion needs work..you sound pretty monotone the whole time...

Rating:
5/10

TitoBronsky 12-15-04 07:24 PM

uppin..........

Enygma 12-15-04 07:31 PM

I think your flow improved on this one a little, but you sound like you're just reading it off your screen. Put a little emotion into your shit and let people know you stand behind what you are saying. There is a such thing as a laid back approach, but you seemed a little too laid back. Lyrically, the shit was nice, just put some feeling into it :thumbup:

Phenom-in-all 12-15-04 08:31 PM

I like ya flow man. Beat is SICK. Hella different, but hella nice. Hook me up with it. lol. Flow is good, lyrics are pretty good too. Like Sev said - quality is pretty good. On the second verse, I swear you came off like Calamity. (no diss to either of you) Mos def keep droppin man. 1

TitoBronsky 12-15-04 11:22 PM

good looks on the feed

to address the emotion issue....... i flow wit out the anger our energy most put into they flow... cuz i feel my style doesnt call for it. I juss flow...... nahmean????? i aint gonna scream into the mic and bark at it on some i need mental help ish...... i juss do me on the mic...... this is my style.... relaxed and chill.......

but put it this way..... i'll take the constructive criticism on that and work on the above mentioned in my next drop.......

good looking out all those that dropped feed



"ez"

ILLigitt 12-16-04 12:00 AM

LOL, I liked the beat; it was unique. Lots of hard multis. Some good wordplay at points. I'm diggin it dude.

LOL@the clips

btw check out "Smack Down" if you get around to it :cool: it'd be appreciated

TitoBronsky 12-16-04 05:29 PM

looks on the feed........


to the top

TeamOne 12-16-04 08:45 PM

i like that beginning but not that ending all that much.... i actually believed ur flow was fine from the begginin and it sounded alil layed back which is good for this beat, except u almost had no emotion....... the flow is better than usual and got some decent lyrics....... pretty dope man! :thumbup: but work on that emotion

7/10

-RKS- 12-17-04 05:17 AM

beat is nice tito flow and delivery are str8 lyrics were pretty coo quality is betta then ya past stuff mayne over-all nice ish keep at it

TitoBronsky 12-18-04 08:27 PM

upping.......... looks on the feed

TitoBronsky 12-18-04 08:34 PM

upping.......... looks on the feed

50Cal. 12-19-04 05:00 PM

ok flow and beat is dope you need a hook and to lengthen it do it over so i can put it on the album;)

TitoBronsky 12-20-04 07:42 PM

looks on the feed.......

i'll see what i can do bout recording this joint over again.....

upping for more responses


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