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..Galieth.. vs DopeMan
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6 - UNLIMITED Lines No Crew Votes No Recycling No Biting Minimum posts to vote: 100 Check in by: 12-21-04 at 04:08 PM Must drop verse in 60 minutes after check in. |
Dopeman has ACCEPTED this battle on 12-20-04 04:12 PM.
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..Galieth.. has ACCEPTED this battle on 12-20-04 04:32 PM.
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Slanging Rocks Is The Only Way You'll Be A "DopeMan" Coz When It's Time For The Mic, You Choke Man, I >ShottaBoy< And Left The Hand Gun Smoking(Smoken)* I Thought I Retired This Bitch? Who Left The Door Open** How Are You A New Breed? When You Started Off Whack And Now You Coming Back?? Shit Here, Your Skill Is Lacked, Leaving Your Bars More Stretchen Then A Giraffes Neck That's Why Like A Nike Shoe You Came Up And Got Cheched, DopeMan Hopes Man That He Will Win This Fucking Battle Chances Of Winning Is like Bull Riders NOT Falling Of There Sattle Your Flow Couldn't Be Help If You Had Water And A Paddle |
dogg, i'ma nice guy, thats why i filmed your mom with her legs spread..
i'm smarter than ever since she gave me head... or do i mean brain? i dont know, lemme rhyme bout somthin else instead... i got an enquiry about your sexual desires... claimin your hot? psssh, a flamin faggot lightin fires... wouldnt get recognition for those rhymes even if u handed em out as fliers.. try sellin that shit at a garage sale... ...you'd have 1 buyer... an thats your own momma out of pitty... i think u came out the wrong hole as a child, cause your so shitty... here i'll let u hit-me, it'll have no effect... if this was for the prezidency, it'd be history, cause we know who they'd elect... the first black prezident an as my first decision.... u look like u need a brake from the battle.... ...so i took the liberty to add an intermission.. ................................... .............now back to the flow but make this quick, i gotta go pronto.. matter fact, i'm the underdogg, an i won, so save-it... cause we already know goliath was beaten by david... |
This was feedback posted for Dopeman
Checkin Tha Polls HaHa This Battle Funni As Hell Koed Hommie
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Do You Want To Get Merked,Lol J/K Upping
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Voted For: ..Galieth..
good battle punches- Gali, overall your punches hit harder, Dman, u actually said u were an underdog, so u complimented him. personals- Gali, basically u had em and they hit a lot harder. Dman, u had a nameplay, but that wuz it. metas- Gali, had em basically. multis- Dman, overall u had more of em. Gali, only one set, though it did flow well. word play- Gali, nice wordplay and decent vocab. Dman, not much wordplay, decent vocab. structure- Gali, overall easier to read, except for the white colorin damn. Dman, work on your structure. flow- Gali, never fell off heavily. Dman, hard to follow wit your breaks, fell of more than Gali's humor- Even, i felt like ya both had nice humor. Gali, nice drop overall. Good personals, and good punches. Overall keep it up. Dman, decent drop, but i felt it wuz more like a song. try some personals next time, and better wordplay. No Hate Just An Honest Voter v/..Galieth.. px |
You Gonna Merk Me? HaHa Dont Fa Get Ya Taught Me How Ta Spit Cus So What You Taught Me Might Backfire On You.....
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This was feedback posted for ..Galieth..
checkin poolls............dont write shit in white..its annoyin..Peace
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Upping This Shit..............................................
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Voted For: ..Galieth..
aight good battle here...... imma break it down for u 2...here we go: Galieth: for starters fuckin lose the white font, goddamn that hurts my eyes tryin to read that sorta shit.... any way, the structure was aight except the font color was ass but that dont matter... flow was good and was consistant throughout the verse which is good, punches and personals suprisingly were good, ive never read ya shit so i thought it wouldnt be good in the punches and personals department but it was pretty good..... vocab was good, u used a couple of complex things which will always help a verse out a bit.... shit was creative to a point so all in all this was a pretty tight verse, not the best ive seen but it was good.....overall i give this verse a 6.5/10 Dopeman: aight you also had a pretty good verse.... your structure on the other hand actualy hurt you in this one... the structure was kinda ass... flow was pretty good but would have been better with a better structure... so work on that shit dawg (no hate).... punches and personals were pretty good, some had me laughin like ya opener was good... your vocab was pretty good throughout the verse which is always a good thing and can only help a verse out... your shit was creative man, i liked it all except the strucuture.... all in all a good verse... 6/10 aight this was a close battle.... both of yall did very well here and much respect to the both of you... you both came and did ya thing and ya gotta respect that... but galieth is gonna take this one and i hate to say it but this one came all the way down to strucuture.... Dope man no hate homie, just work on the strucuture and u got it dawg.... good battle from both of you...................... VOTE- Galieth |
Voted For: ..Galieth..
shit this was a funny ass battle, opener and closer= dopeman multi=dopey punches=galoth meta=galioth structure=goalith some good shit best lines fom both matter fact, i'm the underdogg, an i won, so save-it... cause we already know goliath was beaten by david... And Now You Coming Back?? Shit Here, Your Skill Is Lacked, Leaving Your Bars More Stretchen Then A Giraffes Neck |
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