Eclipse vs Black Queen
 

Battle Rules:

6 - UNLIMITED Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting

Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 03-15-08 at 12:35 PM

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Eclipse has ACCEPTED this battle on 12-20-04 11:16 PM.

Black Queen has ACCEPTED this battle on 12-21-04 08:38 AM.

hey yo.. clispe would be "Insane-to-Show" similar to CRAZY ACTORS/
Cuz I'm dropping punchlines you "Can't-Throw-Back" just as Re-Tired Catchers/
You must be DYSLEXIC.."you'll-never-learn", it amazes me why you try to Rival/
You couldn't BLESS ME with a Verse even if you "Bit-From-The -Bible"/
Your Life's on the Shelf, against me you have NO PRESENCE(presents) like "Un-employed" elfs/
Wouldn't be Suprised to see you "Eating your own Flesh" cuz you "FULL-OF-YOURSELF"/
This Battle must be AMBIDEXTROUS......I guess it's Ready to "Switch Hands"/
Roped ya entire Neck and Hung you just so you could be "ABLE-TO-HANG".... man/
You could enscribe ya Verse on ya Fore-Head and still not be able to make "Head-Lines"//
Compare you to Busta Rhyme's aerobix instructor the way you try to "STRETCH-RHYME'S"//
While you have "Cyber Sex" with EXTACY.......my "RAPID TONGUE" is ceasing ya Battle Cries/
My "HI-TEK" lyrics draw "PRAIZ" "IN-SITE'S", now you Realize facing me wasn't wise/

Black queen is a bitch and her ego has shown
and a poor ass record that I could easily own
she is premature to have challenged the master
her rhymes are bad and her skills are a disaster
ya clothes are tacky,and you have too much makeup
and a dumbass record that my rhymes could easily rakeup
bitch your record is the same as mine but yours sound like a broken windchime.
your record is 0-0 and you cannot rap ya little fucker
go back to getting payed for being a dumbass dick sucker

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Voted For: Black Queen

Black Queen


hey yo.. clispe would be "Insane-to-Show" similar to CRAZY ACTORS/
Cuz I'm dropping punchlines you "Can't-Throw-Back" just as Re-Tired Catchers/
^decent opener...

You must be DYSLEXIC.."you'll-never-learn", it amazes me why you try to Rival/
You couldn't BLESS ME with a Verse even if you "Bit-From-The -Bible"/
^goodie goodie

Your Life's on the Shelf, against me you have NO PRESENCE(presents) like "Un-employed" elfs/
Wouldn't be Suprised to see you "Eating your own Flesh" cuz you "FULL-OF-YOURSELF"/
^hehe...2nd line was dope

This Battle must be AMBIDEXTROUS......I guess it's Ready to "Switch Hands"/
Roped ya entire Neck and Hung you just so you could be "ABLE-TO-HANG".... man/
^okay bar

You could enscribe ya Verse on ya Fore-Head and still not be able to make "Head-Lines"//
Compare you to Busta Rhyme's aerobix instructor the way you try to "STRETCH-RHYME'S"//
^hehehe...nice...

While you have "Cyber Sex" with EXTACY.......my "RAPID TONGUE" is ceasing ya Battle Cries/
My "HI-TEK" lyrics draw "PRAIZ" "IN-SITE'S", now you Realize facing me wasn't wise/
^bit of self-glorification but aight closer

Was def. feeling your verse, had nice wordplay in there n formed some good punches. Your vocab n flow was straight to the point...like ya style...keep on going girl...


Eclipse

Black queen is a bitch and her ego has shown
and a poor ass record that I could easily own
^weak opener

she is premature to have challenged the master
her rhymes are bad and her skills are a disaster
^wtf? Nah man...this is way too basic

ya clothes are tacky,and you have too much makeup
and a dumbass record that my rhymes could easily rakeup
^again the record thing... :confused:

bitch your record is the same as mine but yours sound like a broken windchime.
^uhm, decent i guess

your record is 0-0 and you cannot rap ya little fucker
go back to getting payed for being a dumbass dick sucker
^AGAIN??? Why u keep on using the record thing, 3 times in 9 lines???

Didn't like your verse at all, it was way too basic and mad played. Get some creativity in there, original punches, better personals and stop using the same thing 3 times in one verse!!! Get ya game up...no hate though...

*Please return the favor (link is in my sig)* Thanks...

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This was feedback posted for Black Queen
 

your stlye and strucher sux "this"/.// just makes me get head aches other than that it takes away form your punches to

damn....well im a noobie so what did u expect????i have to see how to rhyme lol

lol it didnt count my vote kinda pissed here i voted for elise i musta hit the wrong button if it comes down to it just pm strobe tell him i left feedback and to count my vote also that other vote is a striat d/r vote disqualify that

it not a structure damn why dont ppl get dat its wats in da verse dat matta no matta how da structure looks its still gon say da same fuckin thang

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