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Parallel 12-22-04 09:42 AM

Parallel vs WICKEDCLOWN
 
Battle Rules:

UNLIMITED Lines..try and do 10..dont matter tho
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting
only vote if you understand wordplay and punchlines
no fag newbies voting unless there off an other site and there skilled


Minimum posts to vote: 500

Check in by: 12-25-04 at 09:42 AM

Must drop verse in 2000 minutes after check in.

System 12-22-04 02:22 PM

WICKEDCLOWN has ACCEPTED this battle on 12-22-04 02:22 PM.

System 12-22-04 05:24 PM

Parallel has ACCEPTED this battle on 12-22-04 05:24 PM.

Parallel 12-22-04 05:48 PM

how many lines are you doiing?
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Parallel 12-22-04 07:33 PM

Wicked likes clownin with the pedophiles on the street
But I just aint playin wit cha, ill still drop ya to ya feet
You shook when I stepped up to you with the uppercut
Were you excited & trembling in fear to this young fuck
Well explain why you think you’re the best, or excuse it
Ur 18 & still ur rhymes are weak, elevate or don’t commit
A student in collage & always was incapable of criminal justice
Still unable to notice you use punches, I suppose they missed
I don’t think there is even one purpose for you to be around
Theres no use in you trying to beat me, cuz you goin down
Im so sick of you, I think you should not even bother me
Eather way im still gonna be annoyed when your in surgery

Parallel 12-22-04 07:34 PM

spit 12 lines...thats what i did...iight...............

Wickedclown 12-23-04 12:20 PM

haha! fuck this kid.... look

fuck this faggot, must be livin in a PARALLEL universe
hearin ya shit reminds me more of a plague or a curse
cause all of RV knows you cant spit a real ass verse
ya leavin in a herse, be prepared for this to be ya last battle
cause soon this kids gonna be shook harder than a babys rattle
ya just anotha little boy who cant drop hardcore hooks
i hear ya gonna do audio... musta learned from garth brooks
readin country music song books and aint gettin no looks
from anyone in the fuckin game you claim to love so much
cause no ones ever gonna respect you, ya have no touch
no tallent and no future, ya might as well up and quit
kill ya self faggot, go and get ya wrists slit
cause i know you cant deal with the fact you cat rap
deep down you know your just anotha prep that shops at the gap
so give up, gather ya shit and just move on home
dont make me up and split open ya emptey dome
ya brainles faggot, why do you even bother to try
fuck you bitch, ya been merked, run home and cry

Acuity 12-23-04 12:29 PM

Voted For: Parallel

Vote: Parallel

Opener: Clown
Closer: Parallel
Vocab: tied
Lyrics: Clown
Multis: neitha
Flow: Parallel
Punches: Parallel
Personals: neitha
Structure: Parallel
Wordplay: Parallel
Originality: Clown

Parallel - 7/10
Clown - 6/10

Acuity 12-23-04 12:29 PM

return tha favour -on realistik battle plz -links in sig

Wickedclown 12-23-04 12:50 PM

wow, nice unexplained vote! deleted is what this will be

Parallel 12-23-04 03:26 PM

lol lryics pretty much says he won lmao...w/e delete th evote i dont care

Macca 12-23-04 03:37 PM

Voted For: WICKEDCLOWN

This was a hard battle. Both verses came Played.Yeah. Structure goes to Parallel. Punches that weren't all that played go to Wickedclown. Uhm Multis go to Wickedclown. Sorry Parallel but his verse was better. Return an honest vote in my signature.
Peace vote=WICKEDCLOWN......

Parallel 12-23-04 05:46 PM

yo legend to inforum you no ahte tho...wickedclown did use punches...or wordplay

Wickedclown 12-23-04 10:34 PM

shit... people need to learn how to vote... thanks for the vote Legend but it will be removed.... uppin

JRoy 12-23-04 11:09 PM

Voted For: WICKEDCLOWN

ok battle....not bad not bad


Personals-Parralell,you didn't really "diss-him" you kinda just talked shit....its ok...but not what i was lookin for.....any wayz......Wicked you had some decent personals...i mean wit the gap line and a few others...

Punches-Ok Parallel you didn't really have punches it was pretty weak coming from "you" but w/e lol....and Wicked clown you had the harder hittin punches wit the Garth Brooks line thats what got this category....

Vocab-Ok both of your vocab was "eehh" you know it was shit i hear all the time when i battle some of the basic emcees at my school...but its all good....and Parallel you need to up like a muh fucka in this department..

Enjoyments-Ok i enjoyed Wickeds more..it was more complex and not as boring and played as yours parallel.....i mean this was not the best battle i've heard but it was "OK" and i'd have to say that Wicked came harder....

Overall-Overall Wicked took this one in my opinion...he had harder hittin personals and punches...his shit was more on topic.....and didn't go all over........

notes:Parallel you need to up on most aspects like Vocab and Multies and Punches....Wicked all i'd need too see from you is some more multies and maybe a lil bit better vocab....

overall it was an ok battle...big ups too both...pzz ~1~


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