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Massive 07-14-02 05:02 PM

WEEK 7 (2-0) •madd•Professor• VS (2-0) OFF~CENTER
 
30 LINE MAX..


VERSES DUE FRIDAY,TRY TO HAVE THEM IN BY WEDNESDAY!!


VOTE ON AT LEAST 3 OTHER BATTLES,OR VOTES WILL BE DEDUCTED FROM YOUR BATTLE.

OFF~CeNTeR 07-14-02 09:24 PM

I will leave you the solemn displeasure of signing in second.

•madd•Professor• 07-15-02 09:49 AM

damn the luck

aiight

signing in

OFF~CeNTeR 07-16-02 10:14 AM

Im not sure I'll be able to post up later this week so Ima put up a few bars to make sure theres no no show...


Madd Professor, Unique? I cant tell who's the real Stan,
Smack this clown so hard his name flips...DDAM! DDAM!//
to help you out I'll recycle a punch...you need it for real,
Hit his crew so hard the name flips...and they still not 'I.L.L.'//
Throwin you around, The canvas was the first girl you kissed,
I put those three holes yah name...I was shootin to miss//
The window of opportunity got slammed on your hands,
I point more infra-reds at yah head then fuckin Talibans!//
After the battle fans'll call the cops, 5-0! 5-0! Eminem, please,
Even my tongues murderous...Im 'armed to the teeth'//
madd professor? make up yah creature to battle me chief...
cuz you gonna be like the last two herbs...with a loss next week//

•madd•Professor• 07-17-02 04:04 AM

titled "open casket"
 
*waves a hand in front of OFF~CENTER's face*
yo dawg, weren't you supposed to diss me?
i saw my name but... oh well... the show must flow on...

i'll title this... open casket... in memory of off~center's defeat...

yo center, what was with the "DAMN! DAMN!"?/
1-800-CHARTER called, fingering yourself while typing is "BAD! BAD!"/
this kid couldn't get off near ill if he was at a nasty nas concert/
off center? more like off record, get yourself a fucking drug sponsor/
this kid couldn't be more off center if he rapped a hap hazard/
nor could he be more behind hiphop if he rhymed backwards/
i disperse twisted verbs to grapple herbs/
so off center couldn't win with a scrabble word/
talking about my name ain't even a battle verse/
even though his rhymes were off topic, i've handled worse/
with "look ma, no hands", off center coudn't be the dopest on the planet/
even if he became a manic-crack-addict sniffing sugar and aphrodisiacs/

aiight, i know i came weak but whatever, ain't my fault i can't rhyme, peace, i matched his 12 lines


signed,
~madd

sK!LLz 07-17-02 05:42 AM

umm ok in my opinion both verses where weak and did meet up to the llbl

but i have to vote for one here we go

wordplay=mad
punches=tie
flow=OFF
creativity=OFF
effort=from both

both verse where weak as i said but OFF came with beeta flow plus he was betta in more categories


my vote goes to OFF

100

vote on my battle against I.e

Illrhymephonetic 07-17-02 06:55 AM

i gotta vote off, slightly better punches and wordplay, u both did spit pretty weak though, shit ta work on for nex week.
VOTE-OFF CENTER
Peace.

VOte on me vs azace

OFF~CeNTeR 07-17-02 08:47 AM

To these clowns crying about "weakness:"

I keyed my verse in about fifteen minutes and Im sure Madd Professor didnt take much more...I wsnt sure if I'd be able to post so I threw up some stuff instead of writing for a week and then posting it...Chill out and vote accordingly...

And Illrhymephonetic...I just read your verse and I wanna know who on Gods green earth gave you the right to call other people weak...

2-0 OFF

i.E 07-17-02 11:10 AM

Vote - Off Center.

Average Verse, Nothing Great & Nothing That Wack. Flow Was Straight, Decent Lines. Madd, In Some Parts I Thought It Was Going To Get Better, But It Didnt.

Decent Battle.

Relentless 07-17-02 02:22 PM

this was a pretty dull battle, but i gotta go with off center on this one because his punches and stuff were a lil bit better then madd professor.
holla
~1~

DirtBoy69 07-17-02 04:06 PM

off center gets my vote sightly better punches and flow both need work on there volcab though

Intrin Sic 07-17-02 05:26 PM

OFF~CeNTeR

- Madd Professor, Unique? I cant tell who's the real Stan,
- Smack this clown so hard his name flips...DDAM! DDAM!//

First line was alright, but the second line was pure filler.

- Even my tongues murderous...Im 'armed to the teeth'//

Ill line. A bit played, but still ill.

•madd•Professor•

- yo center, what was with the "DAMN! DAMN!"?/
- 1-800-CHARTER called, fingering yourself while typing is "BAD! BAD!"/

This was a decent try. But it didn't really work.

- nor could he be more behind hiphop if he rhymed backwards/

Nice wordplay.

This battle goes to Off Center for a more complete verse. He took this kinda easy. Good luck to both MCs in the later rounds.

Dark Skyz 07-17-02 05:47 PM

I agree with everyone else. Off Center had the better verse, plain and simple. All other reasons have been said, no need to repeat.

Vote = Off Center

OFF~CeNTeR 07-17-02 09:43 PM

7-0.

DaLyricalWhiz 07-18-02 12:01 AM

vote off center
had better punches better vocab diss harder
madd shit was coo, but he gotta lot to work on for next week
wasn't 2 much to vote on
good luck to both for next week

peace


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