Troublesome - Will I Ever Get To Heaven
 

Another track from my friend..

Check it out..

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Please keep any beef you have with me out of this thread..

Leave a link and ill hit ur shit up too..

Werd.

Ill go get my links now..

http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=170143
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=167417

yup pretty tight
is phoenix tight im fixin to move there

umm...is your friend too good to post here himself?

it sounds like a perfect track to me, I have nothing else to say because theres nothing bad with it, for some reason that dudes flow sort of reminded me of 2 pac

He only posts at one site..

He can barely do that..

He doesnt have internet at his house, and can only get on for a little time at work..

Hes chill though.. Werd.



Its alright.. The summers suck.. Buts s'all right..

flow is pretty dope, kinda does remind me of tupac too, and i dont know why i cant put my finger on it, i think its just the way he says some of his words, and the concept hes talkin about, but lyrically its an alright piece...and quality is pretty good.


peep my track
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=169832

^ Thanx for the feedback.. Ill hit ur track up in a few..

Uppin this yo.

nice track........

1st......nice verse nice quality...............nice emotions...i really do believe that this is yourlife..(prolly not oyur real life)

chorus....nice chorus...........nice chorus....

2nd...nice verse dont really here nay verses that catch my ear.......but decent...nothing spectactular..

2nd chorus is hella low .....volume is low


alll in all pretty decent...nice quality...

beat is dope, delivery is decent, I see where he was goin with the track, his emotion matched the lyrics, hook wasn't top ten hit style but it was cool, I think maybe a different reverb or something for the chorus might have helped the feel off the track, Sounds like he did his thing- 7/10- He was good, I just think a little more clarity with pronounciation- a little more presence but he sounds like he movin in the right direction, good shit for rv, keep droppin em... 1

^ Thanx for the feedback guys..

Uppin for more..

Werd.

if hes ur friend y dont u go to his house and grab a mic?

^ Cause hes my friend.. in Atlanta..

I live in Arizona.

Thats a long ass drive to his house. nahsayen?

ye cuz his words are kinda tupacish?...word.. u remind of him two... dope track.. nice lyricals.......dont see anything wrong with it.. quality is good... dope track(again)

yo this is the hottest song i've herd up here...........foreal.................

i want the mp3 give it to me...................