RealNess
 

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im writing this shit tonight..after I give the bong a hit,
even though it wont fuckin help me right the wrongs i did
I’m just an accident-prone kid, landing in tha worst shit
Tryna walk the straight & narrow, without any purpose
with these words i hurt with, goes ova ya head like subliminal,
i live where crooked cops & politicians make deals with criminals
authorities showed us no justice.. actin like they ran shit
everyday the cops bust us..cuff us..just for some practice
im trying keep away from bad habits.. im breakin my ways
knowin tomorrows never certain..im tryin ta make it today
cuz these days it seems life can so easily be taken away
provin on this tiny earth.. theres no room for makin mistakes
sometimes im chillin..wonderin why im breathin & spittin
should i give all this rap shit up..or is it the reason im livin
no needin for bitchin.. i wanna leave my mark on this earth
im just eager & itchin..to accomplish shit i started since birth
sittin here hopin my rhymes last.. watchin the time pass
hearin the nine blast.. am i headed on da right path?
wisdom..im tryin to find that..its the knowledge i seek
decipherin through bullshit of the garbage you speak
niggas scared & crawl up a tree..that shits appaulin to me
just gotta keep ma head up..i cant be fallin asleep
focused.. dont need an optometrist to see my vision is fine
just look into ya heart, soul, mind..then ya decision is right
corporate agendas propagate fakeness in the newstands
collaborate millions of people across the land to make a movement
and while readin this dope flow..im sinkin the cloned hoax
yet left drownin in my sorrows for thinkin my hope floats
in battle peeps talkin too much..that'll cost you a crutch
cant expect to be felt when ya punches soft to tha touch
yall lost it as much..its mighty humor..ya just hype & rumors
lyin losers.. evading your wack text.. by typing maneuvers

FEEDBACK

wow, dat blew me away, dat was fantastic. u had great flow, ur message was brought about and u representin' dem females. y is every1 in strikly hood is it any good? but anyway it was a great song, keep it up!

damn dat's a hell of a drop..................punches bac ta bac..............mervalous wordplay........tha veable usage was great.......keep droppin dat fire

yo ma when we goign to colab that shit was hot really not on some tryin to get at u jockin u cu zu a girl hot but on some real shit u spit harder than any nigga on here ma besides me of course yeah but u rbough tit be sure to vote on some of the battle imin because they been up for a week holla

thx fo da feedback uppin

I’m a thug straight clear Bud make beer I drink pour
Up a hardcore cup difficult to bail out a failed route matters soar
Like legal eagles with wings face lots of feeble things that shatter doors
Balance the blame and silence the flame like an Olympic torch
Got crime on line with tech nines Knowledge try pimp it I get scorch
MC’S fail on these scales their true weight not to great
Trash my plan no cash on hand being broke is my fate
Prevail canny with my male vanity go down trails to find sanity

^^^wtf leave feedback next time not a fuckin verse

madrapper b doin shit like dat all tha time just 2 piss people off but anyway damn gurl who done pissed u off? lol i could tell u musta been heated bout somethin from tha way dis piece sounded. see drops like dis impress me because it shows ya presence of mind in a way. it shows u can be mad as hell but be able 2 contain that anger n put it into ya rhymes in a way that lets people know exactly wut u mean. keep doin ya thang. much love n rtf.1

thx fo da feed.

look Queen lot of hate on the board so i don't get feed back well anyway let me drop this one

SEXUAL HIP HOP #1

MADD I calculate numbers while men gets cake in Hummers
Make mistake during summers get caught with my panties down drummers
From the Ghetto With hot cocks be right there, from the hood with heat
Says my coochee good to eat, very red lips, threads rip in my bra sweet
MADD I was on the loveseat with a thug in heat but this was unique
In the house sincere sex arouse fear should dowse clear liquid
On my hot body and tits before he party wit it know how they kick it
Not psychotic but its hot and exotic how he wants to swat it and lick it
Sex appeal is like a vex deal don’t know when to cash in fast men
Want some bad, well I guest with my dress and breast it’s a task then
Have the power to attract; milk nipples tower with fact men suck them
Can’t duck them, MADD I’m hot a bitch in heat need a switch unique
So I can turn off circuit coochee burn soft and perfect oh he want to go deep
With the meat and go crazy in my flow gravy and yell out baby sweet!
“Aw girl your ass terrific” just a kiss task specific I’m about to freak
My panty seams like candy creams waiting to be licked “give me some
Of that yum yum” oh I played dumb like what? Aw girl I grabbed his thumb
Oh he wants to get under my skirt and holler while I hold his shirt collar
“Aw girl I’ll take it easy know your cake is greasy I’m an alert sex scholar
Cums to sex I’m mentally dumb essentially one of us will cum
And spill some cream on the rug in love probably will be the thug after rum
I feel support like an appeal to court let him judge my fudge
Like a jury in fury, Panties like sludge now my chocolate candies are smudged
With sweat my body part coated hidden remarks quoted like baby
I love you Be a lady to a thug true boo let me plug you girl going to go crazy
Hug your stew He threw true tongue with sudden jerks try unbutton my skirt
I was alert but I was hot down there, he rubs thighs and loved my pies continued to flirt My coo-chee damp and sound like a campground he wanted to clamp down on the kissing Found myself listening to him, he manage to take advantage reminiscing
My cookie sandwich he jest got my wet tongue and the sweat cum
My body cook great I took the bait now shook in fate dang he wanted some
His hand Slides and glides up my thighs looked into my eyes with a plan
“Aw girl you so soft” oh he wanted me to twirl my panties off coochee in demand MADD my legs crossed but on an edge false to give it a toss he hold my hand
“Aw girl your booty round and brown like a basketball a drastic call
For me to do a lay up with you, and fantastic fall in the bed yall
While your lips are red” oh he want to stick his cock in my box fiddle and dribble

stop fuckin droppin shit ne my thing IE tell dis bitch to stop droppin verses n my thread

uppin fo feedback

once again queen......you dropped some hotness.

nice job as always. your dope girl, keep the drops coming.......they're only getting better. word. one love.

s.v............c.s.

thx SV peciate it

aiyo u wanna collab?