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FReestyle.....
ppl want marvjay lose im sick of dez dudes plottin.....
if they bars is so sickly why niggaz be crew hopin..... ya'll take my marvs name n password but lyrically u not him...... u'll be sicka than dis cat see jay is just betta,peeps hatin da fella cuzz i speak da truth plus im da most creative and clever..... oh yeah & my crew is gutta...so be calm dont lose it brotha my lines 2 sick da bite shit they even made "ruban-studar(d)" my bars' r even felt by a 80 old bastard..even ya lady go rap it..... T-WRECKS if u took ya "cd 2 a power plant" u wouldn't b "radio-active" lol..my flows is sick as fukk,ur name no 1 knows ya spittin suck he "drop trash" songs....shit u'll have da hold ya "nose 2 pick it up" while ya fags debatin & crabs is hatin...im in da lab just patient.... u got no flows in da studio they turn ya "beat-off" like "masterbation" ya punchlines is totally old da me fam try doin poetry....... im focus b!...type of guns i got only dem iraq soldier's see..... fukk if u respect me ya mc's textin is all blind..im destined 4 more shyne u'll neva travel no where ya faggets only gon see "america-online".... nuff said...just a lil freestyle |
oh dam this was dope.. people need to stop sleepin on his pieces... that last bar was just sick.. if that was the first bar i would have stopped reading it... good flow.. multies well youre one of the best at em... good shit
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datz whuts up fam goodlookin...and yo whuts good with dat text mixtape joint
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Sick Shit Cant Complain About It,,,,,,,,,,stay Up
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wack wack wack...stop flowin...find a notebook and draw a picture of somethin cuz flowin aint you right now cuz...you garbage kid...retire
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goodlookin fam....WUN |
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umm okay how many karate points u want 4 hatin fam???...n chill i will destroy u real easy |
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u see why i don tlike this site that shit^^^ is pure HATE i mean that nigga is sick man he camed to my site and put it down and every body showed him love i know i did yo u did ya thing man an du betta get in that tourney nigga s show niggas where u really at MarvJay 4 real...oh yeah and SR$ i want to see u spit sumthin for real |
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http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?p=1891788 ^^^^there go ya link |
if yall aint know...SR$ is dead fam...~1~
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word fam but all da hatin shit is nothin nahmean....and yeah im in dat tourney ima show niggaz whuts up....but goodlookin on da feedback tho..WUN |
in otha words he is no more...im takin over...tha hate i threw wasnt real...dis shit is hot as hell kid...8/10...no hate, but i thought i could get banned for it...i didnt so i wrote "annoucement to everybody"...SR$'s last post...he is gone 4eva...~1~
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whut??? ya niggaz got da same ip number fam..but im still callin u out 4 a battle |
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Length of rhyme strength is mine duration like Samson devastation // Cats lack intensity with whack density scripts no sophistication // Alleviate pressure, create a treasure to keep hope alive // Deep with the dope jive, turn about is fair play scope and strive // I’m a thug about to put cats in the dugout I’m above suspicion // Love the mission, a scrub stand trial in this edition key in my the ignition // Thug on the verge while my blood surge, pleasing picture be squeezing // Scripture like economic recovery, Ebonics discovery of street lingo seizing // Ironic to draw gun like Johnny Ringo, atomic when I sling verse yo // Crew can’t figure my renewed vigor, glued the gun trigger now holster flow // Bolster those rap by rhyming, critical about to cook wit a political out look // Onstage, MADD it’s whack how facts stack like books cats are shook // On how you rap stag, slap a *** wearing a dew rag while crew brag they mistook // Your rhymes and hardcore lines, yeah kid even more times I’ve manage to cook // Bread and feed cats sandwich spread and bandage their head with cotton because // They’re misled and rotten belong to the bottom I twist and anoint but cats pause // And miss the point mad classy rap in a nasty joint kid, but MADD why cats play a joke // And delay folk and postpone a microphone? Kid cats prevail but fail in their quotes // Curtail smoke and nails all the females choke with tongue are their antidotes? // Madd stuff get shabby we glad to call PUFF DADDY he didn’t get time now he’s // Starting a wet SHYNE in the game trying to lay low kissing on JAY LO but kid MC’S // Got a lot to say doe, if it don’t fit you must acquit like ****RAN pay high fees // It’s hard to keep a club card in a love affair make you want to shoot up in the air // But you can get handcuff like PUFF so I’ve had enough putting grease in my hair // |
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