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Pop Lotty 01-14-05 03:30 PM

WICKEDCLOWN vs Pop Lotty
 
Battle Rules:

6 - UNLIMITED Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting

Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 01-14-05 at 04:30 PM

Must drop verse in 60 minutes after check in.

System 01-14-05 03:39 PM

WICKEDCLOWN has ACCEPTED this battle on 01-14-05 03:39 PM.

Wickedclown 01-14-05 03:45 PM

haha... aight look....

Mcdonalds is lookin for a customer of the year, you the only candidate
fuck this fat ass, lyrics makin me laugh like chris rock in head of state
its time to relate to the fact you aint shit in this world and there aint no debate
that all you create is bullshit rhymes, ya aint neva gonna make it in the game
aint no fame on the way to your front door lotty, ya lifes always gonna be the same
full of broken dreams and empty french fry boxes, its enough to make u wanna cry
i bet all you ever do is sit around and wonder why it is when at night u look to the sky
to find the answers to all ya problems you see ya lost in the 'RANKS' Shabba
fuck you bitch, no ones ever gonna know you, ya just a lyrical grave robba
stealin old ass lyrics and puns, rappin about nothin but gangstas and guns
when in real life your just a fucked up little nerd tryin to be a net thug
ya get beat up for ya change when u walk into the schools halls
run home hide in the corner cryin and poundin ya flabby fists on the walls
askin god why he made you this way, why he wanted you to fail
but no single answer to you will be givin once i prevail
comfort ya self with a Bigmac, i hear Mcdonalds is havin a sale

Wickedclown 01-14-05 03:46 PM



haha... aight look....

Mcdonalds is lookin for a customer of the year, you the only candidate
fuck this fat ass, lyrics makin me laugh like chris rock in head of state
its time to relate to the fact you aint shit in this world and there aint no debate
that all you create is bullshit rhymes, ya aint neva gonna make it in the game
aint no fame on the way to your front door lotty, ya lifes always gonna be the same
full of broken dreams and empty french fry boxes, its enough to make u wanna cry
i bet all you ever do is sit around and wonder why it is when at night u look to the sky
to find the answers to all ya problems you see ya lost in the 'RANKS' Shabba
fuck you bitch, no ones ever gonna know you, ya just a lyrical grave robba
stealin old ass lyrics and puns, rappin about nothin but gangstas and guns
when in real life your just a fucked up little nerd tryin to be a net thug
ya get beat up for ya change when u walk into the schools halls
run home hide in the corner cryin and poundin ya flabby fists on the walls
askin god why he made you this way, why he wanted you to fail
but no single answer to you will be givin once i prevail
comfort ya self with a Bigmac, i hear Mcdonalds is havin a sale

System 01-14-05 03:56 PM

Pop Lotty has ACCEPTED this battle on 01-14-05 03:56 PM.

Pop Lotty 01-14-05 04:06 PM

I'm gonna bring the toast to wicked, you know I'll cook em
Made his verse bleed...ready for an ass whooping
Fuck faggot, dickrider...how can you say your straight
You'll do anything for White, and it wont be cocaine
He knew you'd battle me in the future, and I'd whore em
and that i'd clown on him so bad...he made an alias for it
Wanna have 9494 lines,your verse is jus a run on sentence
I knewd this be a free win, verse look like the Declaration Of Independence
Someone needs to kill you, put u in the ground dog....
...cuz ever since May 5th, RV has been on a fuckin downfall

Wickedclown 01-14-05 04:10 PM

lmao half ya shit didnt rhyme... goddamn u suck hardcore ass... lmao omg... hahahahaha only way u winnin is with DR

Pop Lotty 01-14-05 04:14 PM

I know straight and cocaine ain't really rhyme, I just wanted to get over with this shit.
I didn't care at all.

Hoodz Prophet 01-14-05 04:22 PM

Voted For: WICKEDCLOWN

wow.....this iz so one sided shit ain't even funny let's see since wicked won this battle obvisously i'ma break down wut i liked about his

nice punchez flow wuz nice an structure wuz iight punchez were nice an had sum tight personalz in there had sum forced linez in there an sum perfect shit that flowed rite 2getha this iz one of ur best battlez or maybe it jus seem like that cuz lotty shit didn't rhyme but nice try lotty....wicked got this easily whoeva say he didn't iz dumb as hell no offense lotty

Wickedclown 01-14-05 07:50 PM

uppin............................................. .........

Wickedclown 01-15-05 12:15 AM

u p p i n ........................................

....Gone.... 01-15-05 02:17 AM

Voted For: Pop Lotty

I'm gonna bring the toast to wicked, you know I'll cook em
Made his verse bleed...ready for an ass whooping
Fuck faggot, dickrider...how can you say your straight
You'll do anything for White, and it wont be cocaine
He knew you'd battle me in the future, and I'd whore em
and that i'd clown on him so bad...he made an alias for it
Wanna have 9494 lines,your verse is jus a run on sentence
I knewd this be a free win, verse look like the Declaration Of Independence
Someone needs to kill you, put u in the ground dog....
...cuz ever since May 5th, RV has been on a fuckin downfall
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^ Nice punches fam, had some good wordplay, but barley rhymed. You had some flow, decent wordplay from your verse,had some personals in there too.



Mcdonalds is lookin for a customer of the year, you the only candidate
fuck this fat ass, lyrics makin me laugh like chris rock in head of state
its time to relate to the fact you aint shit in this world and there aint no debate
that all you create is bullshit rhymes, ya aint neva gonna make it in the game
aint no fame on the way to your front door lotty, ya lifes always gonna be the same
full of broken dreams and empty french fry boxes, its enough to make u wanna cry
i bet all you ever do is sit around and wonder why it is when at night u look to the sky
to find the answers to all ya problems you see ya lost in the 'RANKS' Shabba
fuck you bitch, no ones ever gonna know you, ya just a lyrical grave robba
stealin old ass lyrics and puns, rappin about nothin but gangstas and guns
when in real life your just a fucked up little nerd tryin to be a net thug
ya get beat up for ya change when u walk into the schools halls
run home hide in the corner cryin and poundin ya flabby fists on the walls
askin god why he made you this way, why he wanted you to fail
but no single answer to you will be givin once i prevail
comfort ya self with a Bigmac, i hear Mcdonalds is havin a sale
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^Ok clown, you came a lil weak on this. You had good punches,flow,multi'z, and some wordplay but not decent.



overall= This battle was close,Both threw some hard punches and some decent personals. In my opinion i think pop won this with some decent wordplay and some hard punches along with personals, I aint hating on wicked clown your punches was kinda played out. Talking about fat and his habit of mcdonalds, i give you points for that fam, they were personals and some good punches, but i felt that pop had the upper hand with punches.

peace

Wickedclown 01-15-05 11:01 AM

uppin............................................. ........

Sik Wit It 01-15-05 11:43 AM

Voted For: Pop Lotty

Mcdonalds is lookin for a customer of the year, you the only candidate
fuck this fat ass, lyrics makin me laugh like chris rock in head of state
its time to relate to the fact you aint shit in this world and there aint no debate
2nd lines was played here, weak punch, plus I hate 3-line rhyming
that all you create is bullshit rhymes, ya aint neva gonna make it in the game
aint no fame on the way to your front door lotty, ya lifes always gonna be the same
decent multi’s here…decent punch
full of broken dreams and empty french fry boxes, its enough to make u wanna cry
i bet all you ever do is sit around and wonder why it is when at night u look to the sky
wtf?...no
to find the answers to all ya problems you see ya lost in the 'RANKS' Shabba
fuck you bitch, no ones ever gonna know you, ya just a lyrical grave robba
weak punch, but decent here
stealin old ass lyrics and puns, rappin about nothin but gangstas and guns
when in real life your just a fucked up little nerd tryin to be a net thug
decent mutli’s…an okay punch
ya get beat up for ya change when u walk into the schools halls
run home hide in the corner cryin and poundin ya flabby fists on the walls
decent
askin god why he made you this way, why he wanted you to fail
but no single answer to you will be givin once i prevail
comfort ya self with a Bigmac, i hear Mcdonalds is havin a sale
same as the 1st comment…”hate 3-line rhymes”…but decent

I'm gonna bring the toast to wicked, you know I'll cook em
Made his verse bleed...ready for an ass whooping
decent drop here…
Fuck faggot, dickrider...how can you say your straight
You'll do anything for White, and it wont be cocaine
decent punch on him…
He knew you'd battle me in the future, and I'd whore em
and that i'd clown on him so bad...he made an alias for it
kinda good, hardly landed though
Wanna have 9494 lines,your verse is jus a run on sentence
I knewd this be a free win, verse look like the Declaration Of Independence
nice…
Someone needs to kill you, put u in the ground dog....
...cuz ever since May 5th, RV has been on a fuckin downfall
…kinda decent here

Overall Pop Lotty took this one though

Why u say?...just read the bold hoe

1. . .

God 01-15-05 03:50 PM

Voted For: WICKEDCLOWN

well this is easy to judge. , WICKED took this one easily he ripped pop Lotty , nuff said for that , now for the break down

pop
I'm gonna bring the toast to wicked, you know I'll cook em
Made his verse bleed...ready for an ass whooping
Weak, opener
Fuck faggot, dickrider...how can you say your straight
You'll do anything for White, and it wont be cocaine
weak
He knew you'd battle me in the future, and I'd whore em
and that i'd clown on him so bad...he made an alias for it
?????
Wanna have 9494 lines,your verse is jus a run on sentence
I knewd this be a free win, verse look like the Declaration Of Independence
decent
Someone needs to kill you, put u in the ground dog....
...cuz ever since May 5th, RV has been on a fuckin downfall
Nice closer but....you lost

Wicked
Mcdonalds is lookin for a customer of the year, you the only candidate
fuck this fat ass, lyrics makin me laugh like chris rock in head of state
decent opener, but could have been better[/n]
its time to relate to the fact you aint shit in this world and there aint no debate
that all you create is bullshit rhymes, ya aint neva gonna make it in the game
[b]not feeling it

aint no fame on the way to your front door lotty, ya lifes always gonna be the same
full of broken dreams and empty french fry boxes, its enough to make u wanna cry
i bet all you ever do is sit around and wonder why it is when at night u look to the sky
lol nice!
to find the answers to all ya problems you see ya lost in the 'RANKS' Shabba
fuck you bitch, no ones ever gonna know you, ya just a lyrical grave robba
weak
stealin old ass lyrics and puns, rappin about nothin but gangstas and guns
when in real life your just a fucked up little nerd tryin to be a net thug
decent
ya get beat up for ya change when u walk into the schools halls
run home hide in the corner cryin and poundin ya flabby fists on the walls
not feeling this
askin god why he made you this way, why he wanted you to fail
but no single answer to you will be givin once i prevail
comfort ya self with a Bigmac, i hear Mcdonalds is havin a sale
lmao , decent closer, funny

nuff said vote- WICKEDCLOWN


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