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Shittin on Twizted Goverments diss
Twizted Goverment Diss...fuckin herbs
Flamin Barz hello fellas - just shut your crew down - ur doin nothin special- since yall wanna be Twisted - heres a gift - a box full of preztels- i'm pimpin RV - so aint no gettin at me - ur whole crew is just history- the mystery is interesting - why yall stick around an act like ya spits is heat- TG is shit to me - jus comes out at the bottom and tries to fight it- say ya crew's the tightest?-I'd pull ya card but ya dont got a drivers license - ya whole crew is wack-or its probably full of AKA's aliases on one computer- you know why spit tha truth broa?-cus your whole crew is actually manuever- please just die - TG tha best crew? - that's just what AKA believe and tries- a net crew is where ya heart lies until the spark flies an ya finally leave our lives- C-Bo i'm finna let u burn like Usher...cus Establishment on top is permanent... turn to shit...and not even dimes can dickride the best...you gotta earn it... TG's in the need for hope...yall gettin offended off the things we've spoke... I'll ring ya throat squeeze an choke so hard u wont be able ta spit a single note... my raps cum natural like bread and corn...NV wont battle me and he said it's on... like floridas coast ya gettin stormed makin TG soft as if they seen AKA givin head in porn... so homie please...how could ya be respected reppin a crew of heads we rejected?... I'll leave ya Government infected leave no evidence on the fuckin scene detected... fuckin scary ass bitches!!! |
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yea - dissin them faggots - uppin dont sleep on this shit - |
lolz nice verse homies u got them foolz..... this is reloaded on his other account... :thumbup:
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sound kinda wack i mean look at all the breaks.; lolol that burn like usher i heard it ten times. i guess establishment got some big teeth cause they biters
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yall could work on using better stucture and shortening the words you use each line try using around 10 i use about 6-14 thats what i do depends on the stucture gotta make it all work ya know...but yea i usually see C bo with good stucutre but flamin bars just work on that ight...
flamin bars your verse was alright nothing great in it ive seen alot better form you i guess its jsut that TG aint really anything anyway...lmao...but try workin on that flow and stucture i said jsut up there and shit and then try being creative with metaphores n shit then you might drop good next time....keep doing yo thang you were better then me when i was a newb 5 monthes ago. CBo you know it was good i liked your lines n shit but i just thought you rushed your stucutre so it lacked there and shit but it flowed all your creativty was pretty good n shit i just didnt feel the stucuture....keep doing yo thing good OM... return the fav i droped a new OM links in the sig...peace |
^^yea..i jus keyed it up real quick..................
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HA HA....TG did git shitted on but they onli got like 2 gd ppl dere NV n' BQ..dats it
solid drops from both of u...injoyed readin dat. |
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Some tight as shyt ya'll dropped, feelin it man ive read it like 4 times jus sittin back n laughin how bad u jus tore all them up good diss bro.
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ΒΈ hi,my name is mister i cant admit that my verse sucked hi my name is mister imma kinda blatter dat if i loose imma say i made it i ten minute bubt if i win imma say it was to easy hi my name is mister dat says dat Damian is right |
Pretty hott.... I like it.....
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it was aight could use some improvement doe vocab flow punches everythin else was ight doe
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oh shit its lil nae...haha what you been doin...as for the tg diss we'll have betta because we simply are betta haha peace
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