MC IgGY vs onestepbeyond
 

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6 - UNLIMITED Lines
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No Recycling
No Biting

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MC IgGY has ACCEPTED this battle on 01-26-05 11:56 PM.

OneStepBeyond has ACCEPTED this battle on 01-26-05 11:57 PM.

Guess who's back?

Wanna buck up? hahahahaha.. Try it and one day you bastards lay,
this faggots comin at me 'weak' as fuck, like sunday to saturday,*
So how you gonna beat me, you can't so just hold me back bitch,
Or you'll get wrapped up in plastic, like a bologno sandwich,
This is like my fourth or fifth post, bitch im sure your scared,
Me not sick is like seein M. Jackson, and sayin theres no perverts there,
On the bottle it said take two, but instead I took fifty,
Thats why I don't need no vibrater to have you 'shook quickly',
Look Iggy, you can hate me, but if you ever try to touch my shit,
I'll stomp ya face flat with timbs and start yellin "suck my dick!"
Then i'll fuckin eat it for breakfast and pretend its a pancake,
You can't rap for shit, and im not syain that cuz you match a bandaid..**


*- get it? a week is sunday to saturday.. be hes also weak as fuck..
**- im sayin he sucks wether i throw a race card or not, nah mean?

My words lethal like aids, to them u won't find a CURE
My punches hit u harder than 50 to Jada in "THE MASSACRE
I'll strip~your~skin, pick~up the~win, while commiting only one SIN
take ur prewritten verse but to where you found it, in the recycling BIN
You'll never see the SIGN, all you see are lyrics that RHYME
me ripping your brain is the only way, u be expanding your MIND
Dawg, ur still on the ground, i'm in the ABYSS
I'm hitting your balls from side to side like we playing TENNIS
what kind of name is Onestepbeyond
u'll be one step beyond life cuz 6 feet underground is where u'll be found.

Voted For: MC IgGY

ok, basically iggy killed one step
flow-one step
multies-iggy
punches-iggy
word play-iggy
vocab-iggy
iggy over all

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Voted For: OneStepBeyond

i give myvote to one step beyond he had that one punch in there about the weak/week shit was hot. he coulda got hte battle wit that one right there cuz punches like that KO niggas. but he had better structure n way better punches. good opener n ight closer work on puttin some multies in there for variety
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good...........

Voted For: OneStepBeyond

damm dis was a good i aint gon front..i gotta go with one step tho he came with some cleva shit and he had a good ryhme scheme...datz whuts up iggy ya verse was good fam u just weren't dat creative like he was...nun of u spit any personals but good battle overall....from both ya'll

opener-one even tho it was type played...iggy ya second line was weak

structure- a tie i could read both ya'll shit good

punchlines-one step he had some hott shit i was feelin it..iggy u had a couple but nu n really stood out like dat

multis-one step had like 1...iggy u had nun

creativity-one step takes dis 2...iggy u had some but not more than him

personals-nun from both

enjoyed-onestep....took dis battle..iggy good shit tho just try da be more creative and use personals

RETURN DA FAVOR YA'LL LINKS R IN MY SIG

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My vote fo iggy ok lets try this,
Like some of the lines that i likd bout one step was the sandwitch part n the week part, n i really liked iggys line bout expanding ur mind

one step had betta structure but i liked iggys punches betta, one step had good punches but iggy had it better, i liked iggys flow a lil better, iggys had a lil bit of vocab but one step didnt, iggy had better multies eventtho one step had none
It was a preety good battle, but my vote is fo iggy, i think onestep should have better vocab n multies, n fo iggy should have a lil better structure, but iggy has my vote

Voted For: MC IgGY

ima have to give dis one to..iggy he had betta wordplay so there for i could read his shit betta and made me think he had betta flow and shit...Punches came decent in dis battle..Personals i thought were lackin but that doesnt matta when kats be usin multis...

v/Mc iggy

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Voted For: OneStepBeyond

i like diz battle cuz lyrical punches were swung repeatedly by both contenders but it goes:
opener: 1stepbeyond
punches: both
personals: 1step
vocab: both
structure: 1step
closer: 1step
mc iggy u need 2 elevate more in ur rhymes but 1step just came harder so he gets diz 1

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uppin for votes.... keep them comin people........

Voted For: OneStepBeyond

V/onestepbeyond......he gets my vote cause he had creative punchs an good vocab they were original....MC u had a good verse in sum parts it lacked consistent diss's u werent as creative wit ur punchs an u didn't use much vocab a lil basic i seen better from u no hate juss elavate...good battle to both......
punchs=1
structure=tie
vocab=1
opener=1
closer=1
multi's=MC
overall=One stepbeyond....
*RETURN THE FAVOR*

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Voted For: OneStepBeyond

OneStepBeyond

Wanna buck up? hahahahaha.. Try it and one day you bastards lay,
this faggots comin at me 'weak' as fuck, like sunday to saturday,*
^good opener

So how you gonna beat me, you can't so just hold me back bitch,
Or you'll get wrapped up in plastic, like a bologno sandwich,
^no real punch...

This is like my fourth or fifth post, bitch im sure your scared,
Me not sick is like seein M. Jackson, and sayin theres no perverts there,
^good but bit self-glorification

On the bottle it said take two, but instead I took fifty,
Thats why I don't need no vibrater to have you 'shook quickly',
^decent

Look Iggy, you can hate me, but if you ever try to touch my shit,
I'll stomp ya face flat with timbs and start yellin "suck my dick!"
^not feeling it

Then i'll fuckin eat it for breakfast and pretend its a pancake,
You can't rap for shit, and im not syain that cuz you match a bandaid..**
^nice closer

Your opener and closer were best things in your verse in fact. Didn't have too many hardhitting and bold punches or personals,you did have some good wordplay in there though.Flow was straight on point,vocab was good and structure was nice to. Just get the punches lil harder...


MC IgGY

My words lethal like aids, to them u won't find a CURE
My punches hit u harder than 50 to Jada in "THE MASSACRE
^self-glorification...

I'll strip~your~skin, pick~up the~win, while commiting only one SIN
take ur prewritten verse but to where you found it, in the recycling BIN
^2nd line was okay

You'll never see the SIGN, all you see are lyrics that RHYME
me ripping your brain is the only way, u be expanding your MIND
^good bar...liked it...

Dawg, ur still on the ground, i'm in the ABYSS
I'm hitting your balls from side to side like we playing TENNIS
^decent decent

what kind of name is Onestepbeyond
u'll be one step beyond life cuz 6 feet underground is where u'll be found.
^had potential but could've set it up better

You used a lot of self-glorification, always bringing yourself up instead of bringing the other one down (which is the main principal of a battle). Try to focus on your opponent instead of yourself, more hardhitting punches and personals. Wordplay was good, vocab n structure were tigh and I was feelin your flow but get more agressive in the punches and such...No hate...