Dio Deus vs Jay Kal
 

Battle Rules:

8-10 Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting

Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 02-01-05 at 04:03 PM

Must drop verse in 4320 minutes after check in.

Jay Kal has ACCEPTED this battle on 01-29-05 04:03 PM.

Yo, saying you a wack emcee is an understatement/
It's understated, when I say you're face belongs deep in fresh pavement/
Yo you just got baited, you're rhyme I assassinated/
Im gonna make your face bleed like your dick when you masturbatin/
You call yourself Deus, but you're really a bird/
Should call yourself deuce cause your bout to get served/
I could write you out of existence like you never even deserved/
A minute that your jaw wasn't disconnected, your rhymes'll be even more slurred/
Anyway you pretty much sound like Black Eyed Peas backup artist/
So Hey mama, Dio Deus just got retarded/

Dio Deus has ACCEPTED this battle on 01-29-05 04:16 PM.

I make you sick with my "ill" lyrics

You just a raper, a rapper without P's (punches)
You fuck your own rap up, by battling me
I won't even take the time to see what you wrote,
I only need to go to google type: 'Dre lyrics' and read 'fuck you' whole
get the subliminal? you got prewritten shit
fag you suck dick and all, you're not P. diddy bitch
Don't say you rap, cause your name's jay kal
I'll make you scream, but nobody listens to gaycalls

I'm sorry it's bad, but I didn't have much time, sorry

and prewritten needs to be bitten, sorry y'all, but I just wasn't focused

and once again, P's need to be P, just P and nothing more, (I'm not really awake, am I?)

uppin' .................................................. .for votes

uppin'......................

^Ditto what he said, uppin for votes

too few characters and I dont spit periods/
This here is a rappin myriad, of lyrical iliads/
poems drop on your ass like bombs in baghdad/
5 line freein for no reason/
Hope the crowd is what Im appeasin/

Uppin!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

This was feedback posted for Dio Deus
 

yo...dio, come harder next time, this was good. i can see u elevating, but just get more creative, and work on ur structure...

thanks................And now people vote!

Uppin! >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>