gotaasswhoopin4u vs Indeph
 

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Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 02-04-05 at 10:24 PM

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gotaasswhoopin4u has ACCEPTED this battle on 02-04-05 09:25 PM.

Indeph has ACCEPTED this battle on 02-04-05 09:29 PM.

everyone knows you not a playa..you a bigger, fake pun
Your battle "threads" are dead,so I know where "throwback" came from.
your clothes,don't get a B,C, or D,I seen better dressed referes..
and you wonder why your style,graded with a letter E?
All of E style Get killed...its over,you now hear the whistle blow
gotasswhoopin..gonna get killed,like I got a pistol shown..
Homie your like my little Bro,envyin all my actions..
but you couldn't have pop on the map,even if pepsi got an atlas..*
after Soc Owned you,it seemed now you Bitin his nuts..
you still gettin hit,after you changed names,like in enough..

meh we know he's pop lotty right?and I aint postin his pics either..
sorry.

Wow, ok...I seen ya drops, and I've already had alot of you
Your the reason why topical heads, should stick to topicals
You called me out right? But what happened bitch
Half the personals were fake, and the others were wack as shit
Talk about ya life on RV...and to me, that shit is sad son
How could all that happen? When it's obvious you don't have one
Heard about how you got beat up, sad? nah, laughin instead
niggas in the hood got Deph on smash...when they cracked his head
Nigga prolly is on my dick, like 'Lotty, I wanna be right there witcha'
You can tell he in my shadow, his avvy is prolly a self picture

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This was feedback posted for gotaasswhoopin4u
 

good shit pop.....whenever u want to battle holla..

Voted For: Indeph

everyone knows you not a playa..you a bigger, fake pun
Your battle "threads" are dead,so I know where "throwback" came from.
-NICE WORDPLAY AND A PUNCH. PERSONAL TOO.




your clothes,don't get a B,C, or D,I seen better dressed referes..
and you wonder why your style,graded with a letter E?
-O alright nice punch with a personal. Decent



All of E style Get killed...its over,you now hear the whistle blow
gotasswhoopin..gonna get killed,like I got a pistol shown.
^^^^^^^^NICE PUNCH



Homie your like my little Bro,envyin all my actions..
but you couldn't have pop on the map,even if pepsi got an atlas..*
^^^^^^^^NICE WORDPLAY WITH A PUNCH




after Soc Owned you,it seemed now you Bitin his nuts..
you still gettin hit,after you changed names,like in enough..
^^^^^^^^^^ ALRIGHT NICE CLOSER



INDEPH-NICE VERSE WITH SOME GOOD DECENT PUNCHES. FLOWED NICLY. PERSONALS WAS THERE IN ALL BARS....9/10










Wow, ok...I seen ya drops, and I've already had alot of you
Your the reason why topical heads, should stick to topicals
-NICE OPENER.


You called me out right? But what happened bitch
Half the personals were fake, and the others were wack as shit
-NOT EFFECTIVE DECENT PUNCH, BUT IT HAD SOME EFFECT ON IT


Talk about ya life on RV...and to me, that shit is sad son
How could all that happen? When it's obvious you don't have one
-NICE PUNCH. PERSONAL.



Heard about how you got beat up, sad? nah, laughin instead
niggas in the hood got Deph on smash...when they cracked his head
-LMAO NICE PUNCH

Nigga prolly is on my dick, like 'Lotty, I wanna be right there witcha'
You can tell he in my shadow, his avvy is prolly a self picture
^^^ DECENT PUNCH CLOSER.


POP-ALRIGHT YOU STARTED OFF SLOW..THEN YOU'D PICKED UP....NICE FLOW, WITH SOME GOOD PUNCHES



OVERALL=NICE BATTLE, INDEPH YOU HAD SOME GOOD PUNCHES WITH SOME PERSONALS AND WORDPLAYS. POP NICE PUNCHES. I'MMA HAVE TO VOTE FOR INDEPH CAUSE HE STARTED HARD AND ENDED HARD WITH GOOD PUNCHES, HARDFER PERSONALS AND WORDPLAY. POP YOU STARTED SLOW AND THAT KINDA MADE ME VOTE FOR INDEPH, YOU HAD SOME GOOD PUNCHES, BUT INDEPH JUST CAME HARDER

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Voted For: gotaasswhoopin4u

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everyone knows you not a playa..you a bigger, fake pun
Your battle "threads" are dead,so I know where "throwback" came from.
5/10..ok opener..this could have been worded better

your clothes,don't get a B,C, or D,I seen better dressed referes..
and you wonder why your style,graded with a letter E?
6/10 Nice Personal

All of E style Get killed...its over,you now hear the whistle blow
gotasswhoopin..gonna get killed,like I got a pistol shown..
3/10...eh wasent really feelin this

Homie your like my little Bro,envyin all my actions..
but you couldn't have pop on the map,even if pepsi got an atlas..*
8/10...This was ya Best Punch...Bar Nun

after Soc Owned you,it seemed now you Bitin his nuts..
you still gettin hit,after you changed names,like in enough..
4/10 ..ok closer

Ya had nice punches..some could have been re worded
Nice Multis in this..they won u the battle
nice complexity...ok structure and good wordplay
came alot harder than your comp here
7/10


Wow, ok...I seen ya drops, and I've already had alot of you
Your the reason why topical heads, should stick to topicals
7/10...Lol nice Opener

You called me out right? But what happened bitch
Half the personals were fake, and the others were wack as shit
3/10....Uh no ...this was jus 2 damn plain

Talk about ya life on RV...and to me, that shit is sad son
How could all that happen? When it's obvious you don't have one
4/10..Uh this wasent really a punch

Heard about how you got beat up, sad? nah, laughin instead
niggas in the hood got Deph on smash...when they cracked his head
3/10...Um another No
Nigga prolly is on my dick, like 'Lotty, I wanna be right there witcha'
You can tell he in my shadow, his avvy is prolly a self picture
6/10...Nice ass Closer

Yea i can tell this is Mike by his simplicity
but u had some nice punches bout 2 of em
ya multis was ok
no wordplay really....U could have elevated
ya lyrix a lil...seemed 2 me as if u were jus
talkin instead of batteling...go AFTER Deph
and not jus throwin out words

No hate here Lotty u jus simply Lost this one
5/10

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Vote switched

I meant 2 vote 4 Indeph....Change that..............

Voted For: Indeph

Indeph- Verse was nice...so was your punches....Had some nice sick personals also....Structure was decent...easy to read n all...but overall your won this with a better overall verse and punches...8.6/10........

Gotaasswhoopin4u- your verse was nice a little, but your punches really didnt seem to connect hard enough...your structure was layed out nice...but you went weak on punches thats all...5.9/10.......

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