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Skriptz vs Dopeman
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8 Lines No Crew Votes No Recycling No Biting Minimum posts to vote: 150 Check in by: 02-13-05 at 04:25 PM Must drop verse in 30 minutes after check in. |
Dopeman has ACCEPTED this battle on 02-10-05 04:34 PM.
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Call me 'Director' Cause i'm ''Flippin Skriptz''...
I got you 'torn apart' like 'Rippin Pics'... Your Hittin Dicks like Tricks In Porno Flicks... ya dry Spits dont Mix well with others like Chicks with Dicks Matter fact, ya Skill wouldnt even Fill a Christmas Stockin... So i'ma slap you with the mic then ya ''Left Hangin' like a penis Floppin... Ya look like a 'Dead Body Shakin' cause i ''Touched a nerve''.. I'm pickin at you like food... ....an this is all i can eat so you just been SERVED ! |
Skriptz has ACCEPTED this battle on 02-10-05 04:55 PM.
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Dopeman’s never goin to elevate, so you might as well give it up
Your lines practically need to pick up, cause you got shit in your clutch I think he’s afraid of fear, but that’s really not a factor Dope thinking he rollin on dubz, but he’s only driving a tractor Cover your punches in manure, so you can say that their the shit Looks like a retard removed your punches and put whack ness replaced it My punches will get rid of you, cause it seems you plan to fail You think you’re an emcee? All he delivers is my fan mail don't get it? ...don't vote then... |
Voted For: Skriptz
dag this battle was mad weakconsidering yall both r supposed to b so good, but i think skriptz took this battle a lil more. basically i was feelin his flow more and he had punches that hit harder in my opinion. also his verse was more creativity and easy to read. dopeman had some ight multies but no real hot punches and an ight flow so based on that ima give it to skriptz RETURN THE FAVOR http://community.rapverse.com/showb...ad.php?t=174890 |
i didnt need to try...plus i'm tired but uppin anyway
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Conceited little bitch lol
Ya verse wasnt even nothin, ya vocab was off, you had not one punch, ya didnt have nothin, i dunno why that kid voted for you, an i dont really care, but to be real, he must be dick ridin cause, ya verse really was horrible, mine wasnt all that, but it was certainly more consistant than yours... |
Voted For: Skriptz
Skriptz - Good drop man. Structure was a bit off in this, but it flowed nicely so that really wasn't a big factor. Good use of punches and personals. My favourite line that you used was your closer. Made me laugh. The vocabulary in this was allright. Had some wordplay. Pretty good drop. 7.5/10 Dopeman - Your verse was okay. The structure was off, and the flow was kind of choppy, but you still threw some punches. But in my opinion you didn't really come as hard in this battle as Skriptz did. I have seen better from you. You had some multies in there, but it got to the point where it looked like you were just trying to use multi after multi. Not a bad drop, but you could fix some things. 6/10 Vote: Skriptz |
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^lol maybe in ur view i had one-punch but w/e mayn just a battle...you can complain another time... |
Voted For: Skriptz
Skriptz Decent, You Had Some Decent Vocabulary In This Verse, One Of The Bests From You, But Anyway, You Hade Some Nice Punches, Personals Was There, Good Play Of his Name, I Felt You Could Do Better Though, But This Verse Came Decent From You Multi's Could Be Added But They Was Cool....9/10 DopeMan Alright Nicely Done, Good Play Of His Name, But You Have To Basic Vocabulary, You Need To Improve On That, Also, Your Punches Wasn't There, Shit Changed Since You Left, Get Some New Material Kid, Anyway, Meta's You Need To Start Using more, It's The Only Way You'll Win Stop Using Similies All The Damn Time....7/10 Vote=Skriptz Return The Favor, Link In Sig... |
LOL, This is kinda weird, i just posted the link to our battle ta 3 diffrent chat rooms, on Yahoo, on BP, an on Winmx, an only 1 person out of them 3 rooms said Skriptz won....
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Becoz, On Different Prespectives Ppl Have Different Battle Resources, And This Is Rap Verse's Style Of Battling Kid, Learn It |
uppin.........[3]
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Uppin for some votes...........
Leave a link n the favor will be returned Peace |
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