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TennQuakes 02-11-05 02:14 PM

TennQuakes vs Acuity
 
Battle Rules:

6 - UNLIMITED Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting

Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 02-14-05 at 02:14 PM

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System 02-11-05 02:15 PM

TennQuakes has ACCEPTED this battle on 02-11-05 02:15 PM.

System 02-11-05 02:18 PM

Acuity has ACCEPTED this battle on 02-11-05 02:18 PM.

TennQuakes 02-11-05 02:19 PM

yo yo check u need to stop lookin like lilo and stich u ugly bitch try yo luck and u will be founded in a ditch
i spit rhymes to damge yo frame im the newcomer but i kill yo brain aint no stoppin these rhymes i the new kid with any anger mangement problem that u can't solve
so i suggested u stay back or yo body will be founded in Iraq because yo action plus my solution equals yo death

TennQuakes 02-11-05 02:26 PM

[QUOTE=TennQuakes]yo yo check u need to stop lookin like lilo and stich u ugly bitch try yo luck and u will be founded in a ditch
i spit rhymes to damge yo frame im the newcomer but i kill yo brain aint no stoppin these rhymes i the new kid with any anger mangement problem that u can't solve
so i suggested u stay back or yo body will be founded in Iraq because yo action plus my solution equals yo death im the one who made u lose you health
need i say more my words are louder than yo actions

Acuity 02-11-05 02:54 PM

TennQuakes retarted but please dont laugh, i see his rhymes and start yawning
His skill is a negative value on a graph, battling me the king has fallen
Don't understand why this punk stepping to me, I sed no fuck wasting battle credits
I'll "shake him in ten", leave debris, kids wack its fact know i've said it
Why did I keystyle ten on this bitch made wannabe, His rhymes are so fuckin wack
His structure weak like hes got depleted vitamin C, so its easy to break his back
I bomb on this herb you cant run for cover, you'll be left sonned and whored fool
Like a ship with a broken your rudder, your sinking to the bottom of RV, drowning in the pool
TennQuakes sees me and gets "shook", and hes left confused and dazed
Look i dont lie: this punk ass herb posting battle callouts in the wrong place

*made a thread sayin "the king has arisen"
**posting open callouts in open mic..lol idiot
blazed fooo.....THE JURY........
-AC


Acuity 02-11-05 07:35 PM

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Technical 02-11-05 11:35 PM

Voted For: Acuity

what the fuck was this...this was one sided.....pucnhes personals, flow, creativity, wordplay, vocab and definitely structure goes to AC.....MISMATCH

....Gone.... 02-11-05 11:39 PM

This was feedback posted for Acuity
 
.................................................. .......damn

Cekret 02-11-05 11:42 PM

This was feedback posted for Acuity
 
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Acuity 02-12-05 04:14 AM

bump..............................................

Pion 02-12-05 05:55 AM

Voted For: Acuity

Why did I keystyle ten on this bitch made wannabe, His rhymes are so fuckin wack
His structure weak like hes got depleted vitamin C, so its easy to break his back
TennQuakes sees me and gets "shook", and hes left confused and dazed
Look i dont lie: this punk ass herb posting battle callouts in the wrong place

VS

yo yo check u need to stop lookin like lilo and stich u ugly bitch try yo luck and u will be founded in a ditch

well acuity wins hands down, try not to have the lines so stretched though. Acuity had the better and some funny punches, and he had nice structure and decent flow.

Tenn: keep elevating your punches didn't hit that hard, concentrate on dissing your opponent and work on structure

So overall I voted for acuity

please return the favor please.

SQUAD-UP 02-12-05 09:31 AM

Voted For: Acuity

well this is an easy battle to vote on nah mean.
Acuity took this in every catergory i think. Tennquakes didnt come hard at all. his verse was way to juvenile n he aint really have no punches or multies or nehtin to vote on really. he just needs to get better so he can come harder
opener=acuity
closer=acuity
punches=acuity
structure=acuity
vocab=acuity
yall both need to work on ya flows tho, alot of acuity's punches were a real stretch to connect.
RETURN THE FAVOR
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Acuity 02-14-05 06:56 AM

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Acuity 02-15-05 10:55 AM

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