Escobar vs EyeDEA
 

Battle Rules:

6 - 10 lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting

Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 02-24-05 at 02:37 AM

Must drop verse in 20 minutes after check in.

i will ecpet once oyu do....................................

hello
except it..............so i can post my verse ...........

Escobar has ACCEPTED this battle on 02-24-05 02:16 AM.

EyeDEA has ACCEPTED this battle on 02-24-05 02:25 AM.

QUIk spit.for this alias name changing bitch

My tongue moves like hindu belly dancers performin tantra
I'll blurr you vision like slow setter speeds on the camera
fuck you up,……And get all up in that ass like colon cancer
My mental blows will hit you in the dome like clenched fists
Because my Telepathy Bench presses more than a forklift
You thought you had me hemmed up against the ropes back to the wall
I got more Punches than an Boxer and now its time to take the fall


look fuck this battle becuase this niggas got more name changes then i got wins..

my record is 9-1

lmao that was wack................................

Voted For: Escobar

easy easy.. Result came wit harder punches.. no personals really from either.. but structure and flow go to result.. damn eyedea.. change ur name cause ur nothing like him.. u came pretty wack.. with played punches.. lmao result came with that comical shit.. and actually had me laughing.. and i read his verse to a beat.. soo although some of ur lines are stretched it still flowed.. but this wasnt a very good battle to read.. neither came with anything special result just had enough to win tho.. no hate elevate..

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Voted For: EyeDEA

eye you took this easily better punches metas

result your structure was nice but i wasnt feelin the "punchlines?" "when i say whack" questions before the lines are whack

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Voted For: Escobar

STYLE:
EyeDEAs done an alright job, nothing out of the ordinary tho; Result, u got a lot of arbitrary words in ur piece, and when they're not forced, they dont really pack much

PUNCH:
Result, ur close to writing a book explaining each of ur punches, figure out what ur hittin ur opponent with, and cocentrate on that; EyeDEA ur punches were almost there, but stiLL rather weak

FLOW:
Results got good beginning, seems like ur verse got cut off n never got a closer tho; EyeDEA's toying wit a 7 liner but i dont think u quite made it, i also suggest extending the word "tantra" to spit as a 3 syllable word like "camera"

TECHNIQUE:
Result u needed to end off with an explosive punch, that wouldve given u the edge, but wit ur current closer its like a slap on the face... ur own face; EyeDEA ok job, lines were somewhat played out

S: =tiE=
P: Result > EyeDEA
F: EyeDEA > Result
T: EyeDEA > Result
OVERALL: u both need to work on better wording to deliver clean but hard punches, urs edged him this time Result, but just barely
VOTE: Result

Voted For: Escobar

OK EYE GOOD FILLERS LOL THAT WHAT I GOTTA SAY CUZ YOU HAD NO FUCKING PUNCHES AT ALL WTF PERSONAL IS MADD PLAYED SINCE I LOOKED IT UP AND YOUR BATTLING VIRTUE EVERYONES USED THAT SHIT VOCAB WAS GOOD SET UPS AND WORDINGS WAS GOOD ALSO STRUTURE AS WELL BUT PUNCHES AND PERSONALS AINT EXIST AND THATS WINS BATTLES3/10
RESULT YOUR SHIT WASNT MUCH BETTER BUT YOU HAD SOME PUNCHES AT LEAST EVEN THOUGH THEY WASNT HOT NO PERSONALS EITHER STRUTURE AND FLOW OK VOCAB GOOD BETTER PUNCHES WON YOU THIS BUT BARELY 3.5/10
BASICALLY YOU BOTH SUCK BUT WHILE EYE HAD NO PUNCHES AT LEAST RESULT HAD SOME

Voted For: Escobar

punches-result
persnals-result
metals-none
flow-tie
stuck-tie

result came a little hard on the punches and a lot harder on the persnals eyedea had hardly any unches that landed no persnals so my vote gose to result

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