Dep!ct vs DoContinue
 

Battle Rules:

6 - 10 Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting
blind spit
30 min check
30 min drop

Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 03-02-05 at 01:00 AM

Must drop verse in 4320 minutes after check in.

Dep!ct has ACCEPTED this battle on 02-27-05 01:01 AM.

DoContinue has ACCEPTED this battle on 02-27-05 01:04 AM.

should i be scared? should i care...or should i smash through the venue
after i shatter any chance before this fuck do continue
relize your wack, facts are facts and your bout to get shattered
its a matter of fact ur whole styles wack, but u dont matter
im so drunk, so drunk kid, lifted high, can you help
cuz right now your only change to win is strikin below the belt
wheres the wit, wheres anything to show i give a shit
its not there, and i do not care....why? cuz you aint it
and you wont ever be
cuz this dudes been wack since blacks been ebony...

lol@the drop date posted by you originally and when the system is set to accept the drops.

i hope you post ur verse kid.

uppin, mabye you will see this ish and drop somthing to beat my wack verse of drunkeness

If I upped ur threads for you, you still couldnt be 'elevated'
I'll 'skip the steps' for this battle to make sure your defeat is

'escalated'
I 'deflower' MC's, thought u made the crew but there's hidden tricks
like 'afro grass,' ur names the only way u gettin 'p!ct'
you cant be like me, but i let fake thugs chill in my fame
u wouldnt be dep!cted as a rapper if it was instilled in ya name
i'm ill wit tha game, you so soft, you put pillows to shame
ya sister's harder than you, and you dont have Reggie Miller to blame
you a wack 'herb'- im surprised you could stack any 'joint'
put an 'exclamation' in his name.... cuz his lines lack any 'point'

reggie millers sister is like a fuckin man...
exlamation point in his name...
pillows are soft... hahhahaha

Voted For: DoContinue

DoContinue takes this...but not by much...dep!ct had a real nice verse...but it didnt have as strong of punches as DoContinue...u had great multies...but ur punches didnt hit...and they werent as clever...

punches: DoContinue
personals: DoContinue
multies: Dep!ct
wordplay: DoContinue
flow: DoContinue
metas: DoContinue

v/ DoContinue

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ghoste... i cant find none of ur battles to return the favor, if you got one, then pm me or somethin...

Voted For: DoContinue

you both had strong points and weak points in ur verse....u were on and off with decent punches but u get my vote...u need to work on ur structure a little bit depict your verse waz elementary......u need to elevate on a lil bit of everything....get more creative and deeper wit punches then you will do iight thats all 1

Voted For: DoContinue

"cuz this dudes been wack since blacks been ebony"

^^^^^WHUT DA FUKK IS DAT??? SOUND LIKE SOME RACIST SHIT.........

opener-do...kind of a long line but it was way betta than dep's
structure-do
punchlines-do
creativity-do
multis-nun from both
personals-nun from both
finisher-do hands da fukk down..dep dat was a racist line fam
enjoyed-do he was way more consistant and he had some creativity...dep was just typin words 4 no reason dat wasn't even a battle verse fam



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you must be the stewpedist person ever kid,

how the fuck is that a racist statement u dumb fuck...

i will explain it...


dogame has been wack...

since black has been known as ebony...

im not racist...

Voted For: DoContinue

aiight, pretty good battle yo...
dOContinue - you had a good flow, good wordplay and some good vocab in there but it could be worked on... your opener was decent and you had an aiight finisher, ur flow was the better than Dep!ct and i thought u came out harder... 7/10

Dep!ct - you coulda come alot harder man, that was a pretty weak battle, ur opener was sorta weak n i thought ur closer was poor, ur flow was decent and had a good structure.. bad luck mayne.. 5.5/10

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^u'r just a dipshit and i dont giva fuck what u think about that excuse for a battle verse i wrote in 3 min. eat a dick, one of those imfamous black shlongs that weigh you down the second it enters your pink lips.

Voted For: Dep!ct

depict had the better verse his punches hit werent that good but still hit the metas that were there were ight flow was ight structre was good
best line-
should i be scared? should i care...or should i smash through the venue
after i shatter any chance before this fuck do continue
please return the vote in my battle aganist A_M_H in my sig

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