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H!T-sT!Ck 02-28-05 02:56 PM

H!T-sT!Ck vs .:BlazE:.
 
Battle Rules:

5 bars
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting

Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 02-28-05 at 03:26 PM

Must drop verse in 4320 minutes after check in.

System 02-28-05 02:57 PM

H!T-sT!Ck has ACCEPTED this battle on 02-28-05 02:57 PM.

System 02-28-05 03:05 PM

.:BlazE:. has ACCEPTED this battle on 02-28-05 03:05 PM.

Kamikazee 02-28-05 03:09 PM

Dawg u couldn't make da crowd explode, even if u was throwin gernades,
The lines u spit would neva be sweet, even if they was mixed up "Kool-Aid"
Cuzz battling me was really dumb, i think u "H!t-Da-St!ck 1 to many times,
Im bout to roast ur ass like a red lobster, and set a "BlazE" to all ur rhymes
Ill have u choke'n off my verse thought u knew, only thing i spit is dope lines

Weak verse i could have done betta but it took me like 3 min. to drop

Kamikazee 02-28-05 03:10 PM

ahh shit 5 bars i thought u said 5 lines......shit!!!!! my bad fuck it i prolly jus lost by DQ or u will prolly win cuz i only wrote a 5 LINE weak verse

Kamikazee 02-28-05 05:43 PM

Dawg u couldn't make da crowd explode, even if u was throwin gernades,
The lines u spit would neva be sweet, even if they was mixed up "Kool-Aid"
Cuzz battling me was really dumb, i think u "H!t-Da-St!ck 1 to many times,
Im bout to roast ur ass like a red lobster, and set a "BlazE" to all ur rhymes
Ill have u choke'n off my verse thought u knew, only thing i spit is dope lines,
Dis kids a dud he will neva explode, like da damn Vietnam Land Mines
Im bout to blow dis kat off da map, and bout to relocate him in anotha location,
My punches will hit u like a Ali hook, and make ur head spin in a Exorcist Rotation
I'm down strictly for my independance, your flow is like one big run on sentence,
I should've counted u absent on da attendance, ur skull is wut ill be splittin

There is my 5 barz......sorry 4 tha mix up.....Pz

H!T-sT!Ck 02-28-05 08:46 PM

This wigger on a rap site *bitch outta place*...../
gangsta pulls outta nine millimeter...get ya *dick out my face*....../1
Blaze is soft on the inside he doesnt *carry tools*..../
beating me is ''not a-loud'' like following *library rules*..../2
Watch in amaze as i blaze ,blaze with my *blazin bars*/
the only time he pull a ''vic-out'' is when trading falcons *trading cards*.../3
only far u did 5 lines so i did 6............

Dirty Nigga 02-28-05 09:04 PM

Voted For: H!T-sT!Ck

Aight.......
Shit was a pretty nice battle, Blaze ya had some aight lines, wasnt feeling the closer, seemed a little forced, but it was aight, some potential there, just gotta learn ta connect punches a little better, an be a bit more creative, but you aight, still decent stuff

Stickz, nice shit, that Libary line killed it, it was the highlight of the battle, the opener was pretty witty too, some nice shit there man...

Stickz was more creative an witty, his punches hit harder so i'ma have ta go with Stickz, that libary line was some dope shit lol, Blaze, you know i aint gonna hate, cause you y boy, but ya verse wasnt as solid an your closer really let you down, keep elevating dogg, good drop both, keep 'em comin

Return the fave if ya see any of my battles floatin around

Peace out

H!T-sT!Ck 02-28-05 09:10 PM

thanks for vote...and buck if i see any ill check em out...... 1-0 still uppin

Kyleon 02-28-05 09:13 PM

This was feedback posted for .:BlazE:.
 
checkin pollz...and by da way yall dumb ass fuck..no hate at all just sayin both of you should get DQ for not following da rules..

it said 5bars..and blaze wrote 2 1/2 barz and hitstick wrote 3barz...

2lines=1bar...

Kyleon 02-28-05 09:15 PM

ok now i see blaze wrote 5barz...you should DQ hitstick if ya want a win..cuz at this rate you going ta lose....~1~

::..:$lobK::..: 02-28-05 09:20 PM

Voted For: H!T-sT!Ck

Lol..Yo For Me This Was One-Sided...

Punches- None Of Yall Really Had Punches...Like WOW..But Hit Stick's Punches Were Really Affective..

Personals- None Of Yall...HS You're Verses Consisted Of No Personals..And Blaze U Used Self Glorification In one Line Homie..

Wordplay- HS Got This..I Liked His Library Line...Good Creativity..

Flow- Tie...Both Flows Were Pretty Consistent Yo...

Vote- H!t sT!Ck

H!T-sT!Ck 02-28-05 09:26 PM

This wigger on a rap site *bitch outta place*...../
gangsta pulls outta nine millimeter...get ya *dick out my face*....../1
Blaze is soft on the inside he doesnt *carry tools*..../
beating me is ''not a-loud'' like following *library rules*..../2
Watch in amaze as i blaze ,blaze with my *blazin bars*/
the only time he pull a ''vic-out'' is when trading falcons *trading cards*.../3
\/\/\/\/[filler bars not to be d'qed]\/\/\/\/
even though his lines are written , his *defeat will be sweet*...../
Blaze couldnt ''cum hard off the top'' if he was *beating his meat*...../4
My lines are extremely funny everyone will be *laughing with sT!Ck*...../
Blaze is a math geek te way he gots *Grafh on his dick*...../5

intensify effect 03-01-05 02:42 AM

Voted For: H!T-sT!Ck

Blaze is soft on the inside he doesnt *carry tools*..../
beating me is ''not a-loud'' like following *library rules*..../2

that right there took it for me...

creative punchline, good flow, good connection and preety much better then the rest of the noobs holla...

CODE STEEL MANG 4-REAL....

blaze u had un-even bars which aint help u, ya flow was aight, creativeness was weak and ya punches was also, try harder next time and focuz more, and even ya bars up 1 bar = 2 lines......

M-Eazy 03-01-05 10:37 AM

This was feedback posted for H!T-sT!Ck
 
nice shit....hit sticks, check out tha NOk forum fam....drop a tryout in our new talent thread. buck.shot referred you...


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