Lil C vs Invektive
 

Battle Rules:

6 - 8 Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting
3-0 KO

Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 03-06-05 at 01:25 AM

Must drop verse in 15 minutes after check in.

Lil C has ACCEPTED this battle on 03-06-05 12:56 AM.

bitch, you scared of this -illness- like an AIDS examination;
my flow's residue'll leave you wit a -sore lip- like herpes patients//1
so whore i'll beat your lyrics -straight- to the right, the mic's off limits;
you're what's left: a -dyke- outta jail with dick-licking experience//2**
hoe, you're fucking delerious, i'll reverse Klu-Klux-Klan you;
hang you and leave the noose hanging looser than your labia do//3

come on!, i rape bitches, slutbag, you're no different;
plus that wigga in your picture looks queerer than richard simmons//4***
and i only need half the time to rip a bitch rather than niggas;
so i can use half the lines to kill free time on the fillers//5
but this hoe dont want it wit me, my lyrics roll with speed;
you're like a Philly -Freeway- hoe, and i'm Cassidy in a GT//6

Invektive has ACCEPTED this battle on 03-06-05 01:20 AM.

Voted For: Invektive

Invektive - nice vocab, real good flow, nice punches-my favorite was :
"never elevate...in fact your skills gone down...she's a waste of life space!
thats why youve been here for seven months and your still a light weight"
nice metas...favorite was
"you'll always stay a newbie as long as you attempt to rap...you lame fuck
could run up a flight of stairs with monopoly...n still not step your game up"
good personals too...ur pretty dope

Lil C - first of all, clearly had more than 8 lines..but u had good punches..like
"come on!, i rape bitches, slutbag, you're no different;
plus that wigga in your picture looks queerer than richard simmons//"
ur personals were good too..nice flow, ok vocab

overall, inverktive came nicer IMO...real dope battle tho..keep rhymin, both of u...

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Voted For: Invektive

chea chea, im votin fo Invektive. he had betta punches, and betta multies. thas really tha only thang im basin my vote on. but both yall wuz pretty koo. no hate Lil C.

can u return tha favor?

http://community.rapverse.com/showb...018#post2005018

thanx, werd

Voted For: Lil C

Dam..I Don Even Care If You Went Ova Da Fuckin Limit..You Won..Close Battle Though..

Punches- Lil C...He Had More Affective Punches..

bitch, you scared of this -illness- like an AIDS examination;
my flow's residue'll leave you wit a -sore lip- like herpes patients//

^^Good Punch..

Personals- Invektive..Of Course...He Always Has Personals..

Wordplay- Yo..Lil C Had Betta Wordplay..

and i only need half the time to rip a bitch rather than niggas;
so i can use half the lines to kill free time on the fillers//

^^Nice Execution Of Wordplay..

Vocab- Both Was Very Basic..Try Expandin Yall Vocab Yo..

Closer- Invektive's Closer Was More Hard..Lil C Ur Closer Was Gay As Fuck..No Hate..

Vote- Lil C..Punches And Wordplay Won It For Him..No Doubt..

Yo Invektive..U On My List..I Wanna Battle You..So Set It Up 2-6 Lines..

lol @ the call out in the vote....and i definitely wont be battling your ass if you were herbish enough to put a vote like that up.....examine the wordplay more....Personals > wordplay n punches......cause if you have a personal....it is also a punch at the same time....learn how to vote

uppin for the win.........................................

upp............................................... .

Voted For: Invektive

well little c you went past the 6-8 line max so by default invektive wins .. but either way he did have a better drop

invektive- your structure was perfect.. nice metaphors. nice vocab .. some witty as shit in there haha you'll always stay a newbie as long as you attempt to rap...you lame fuck
could run up a flight of stairs with monopoly...n still not step your game up" that line was funny as hell i liked it alot..

lil c-condense your shit its soooo long.. you could say half of what you want to say with out having so many words.. overall i thought it was a decent drop.. i jus thought invektive came harder..no hate jus elevate

vote//invektive

rtf thx

uppin............................................. ........................

This was feedback posted for Invektive
 

poolllllllllllssss...

have to say, invek took this one, punches were harder, not played, wordplay and vocab were better, although your last 2 bars man, dont think they were as good as the first two..but stellar drop still

lil c....alot of your shit has been played before, so your punches were pretty weak, plus your wordplay and vocab made your verse less appealing, so upp that....but i liked the libidoe line, haha, if thats what you were talking about

uppin............................................. ........