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Seven Deuce 03-20-05 06:43 PM

Hammer vs Seven Deuce
 
Battle Rules:

6 - 8 Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting

Minimum posts to vote: 200

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System 03-20-05 06:51 PM

Seven Deuce has ACCEPTED this battle on 03-20-05 06:51 PM.

Seven Deuce 03-20-05 06:58 PM

Hammer

i 'slam' this kid, putting the 'hammer' down on em
once he accept this battle, his career is a gonna
yall hammers aint got a face how can you see me man..
and the deuce deuce'll make ya legs collapse like a TV stand
kids whacker then his name yo just come out the closet
homo, the kid got more losses then money in his deposit
5 wins and four losses, your post will even the score....
maybe i own you now, and fuck ya girl that whore.......

System 03-20-05 07:00 PM

Hammer has ACCEPTED this battle on 03-20-05 07:00 PM.

Hammer 03-20-05 07:06 PM

Out to catch a fish believing it makes him a net pimp
Cant swim so battles wiv an alias ……the wet wimp
He knows me beating him will make his rep stink
Seven Deuce is imitation leather, im the best mink.
Tickle me pink, Pickle my drinks, Split up my sync
Still spit on you like a boxer and bottle of drink.
You’ll be Tyson to my Lewis and lay on the mat
Cos I aint gotta prove it, Im Scooby you’re the cat

morse code 03-20-05 10:22 PM

Voted For: Hammer

haha, not a good battle at all, but heres a quick breakdown-

hammer-

"Out to catch a fish believing it makes him a net pimp
Cant swim so battles wiv an alias ……the wet wimp"
4.5/10....first line okay, second wack
"He knows me beating him will make his rep stink
Seven Deuce is imitation leather, im the best mink."
2/10...dissed yourself and second line was kinda wack
"Tickle me pink, Pickle my drinks, Split up my sync
Still spit on you like a boxer and bottle of drink."
2/10...wack
"You’ll be Tyson to my Lewis and lay on the mat
Cos I aint gotta prove it, Im Scooby you’re the cat"
3/10...bad closer, coodve been worded better and improved
29%/100%


seven duece-


"i 'slam' this kid, putting the 'hammer' down on em
once he accept this battle, his career is a gonna"
2/10....wack opener
"yall hammers aint got a face how can you see me man..
and the deuce deuce'll make ya legs collapse like a TV stand"
1.5/10 first line wack, second prettt gay too
"kids whacker then his name yo just come out the closet
homo, the kid got more losses then money in his deposit"
2/10....played
"5 wins and four losses, your post will even the score....
maybe i own you now, and fuck ya girl that whore......."
1.5/10.........terrible closer
18%/100%

my vote easily goes to hammer

rtf....link in sig

v/hammer

Vote switched

Hammer 03-21-05 10:11 AM

uppin............................................. .....................

Dirty Nigga 03-21-05 10:23 AM

Voted For: Hammer

Seven, ya opener didnt rhyme, an your closer wasnt even a diss, i dunno what it was LOL..

Wasnt feelin the deuce deuce line neither, like a tv stand?
be more creative hommie....

The money in his deposit line was your best shit, n it still wasnt up ta that much at all

Elevate dogg.........1st floor is an elevation crew, if ya intrested, holla at me..

Hammer? never heard of you before hommie..
but ya got some alright stuff goin on for ya..

the wet wimp line LOL, Dunno, it was kinda so stupid it made me laugh, not very creative leadin up too it, but still, both lines connected which was alot more than Sevenz opener..

best minc line was neither here or there, maybe could of worded it better, is seven an alias? who is he.....a talaentless alias? lol...naw, but if he did hide behind an alias cause he knew he'd lose, thats sad...

could of worded the boxer line a little better, nice idea tho mayn..

closer alone got u this win...

well if the alias thing is true, an seven is hidin behind one for the reazons stated in this battle, then the personals alone give hammer the win.....

punches certainly go too hammer also, may not have hit hard, but he had more creative ideas, an maybe could of worded a few lines a little better, an they would of had even more of an effect, but it wasnt needed in the end, hammer wins this by a landslide in my opinnon

Return the favor in any of my battles ya see floatin around

Peace out (dont return the favor if its just gonna be a hate vote because i voted against you @ seven)

Nephew J 03-21-05 11:47 AM

Voted For: Seven Deuce

For tha boy Hammer here

7x2:
i 'slam' this kid, putting the 'hammer' down on em
once he accept this battle, his career is a gonna
-no rhyme scheme,tried personal on name
yall hammers aint got a face how can you see me man..
and the deuce deuce'll make ya legs collapse like a TV stand
-.22 are weak so that makes a aight punch, so iz tv stands
kids whacker then his name yo just come out the closet
homo, the kid got more losses then money in his deposit
-nice use of his doe, aight hit
5 wins and four losses, your post will even the score....
maybe i own you now, and fuck ya girl that whore.......
-assumed victory, probably best punch

Hammer:
Out to catch a fish believing it makes him a net pimp
Cant swim so battles wiv an alias ……the wet wimp
-like dat, like dat, good punch, made me smirk
He knows me beating him will make his rep stink
Seven Deuce is imitation leather, im the best mink.
-nice, said tha boy fraud, good line
Tickle me pink, Pickle my drinks, Split up my sync
Still spit on you like a boxer and bottle of drink.
-not givin' a damn attitude, like that
You’ll be Tyson to my Lewis and lay on the mat
Cos I aint gotta prove it, Im Scooby you’re the cat
-weakest line

overall this goes to Hammer for his creativity an' imagery, liked his verse, i'm blowed so i laughed a lil, thanks for tha laugh peeps

hit this up homie
chyld v. me(0-3)
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=119109

Vote switched.

Seven Deuce 03-21-05 03:44 PM

Lmao Okay, Let's Playi Niggas.............................

Lyriclesolja 03-21-05 04:08 PM

Voted For: Seven Deuce

SEVEN DEUCE DID OK AND SO DID HAMMER IN THIS BATTLE

SEVEN DEUCE YOU HAD A OK CHOSE OF WORDS FOR YOUR PUNCHES THEY WERE WELL BALANCED BUT SOME PLACES FELL OF YOU DIDN'T REALLY HAVE VOCABULARY YOU HAD SOME NAMEPLAY IN YOUR VERSE AND THAT TV STAND LINE WAS FIRE SO YOU GET MY VOTE

HAMMER YOU DROPPED GOOD IN THIS TO YOU WOULD OF WON BUT HIS TV STAND LINE WAS HOT AS I SAID YOUR VERSE WAS WELL BALANCED HAD SOME OK PUNCHES NO PERSONALS NOR VOCAB

OVERALL SEVEN DEUCE TOOK THIS HE CAME HARDER WITH A DECENT PUNCH AND DECENT NAMEPLAY

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Seven Deuce 03-22-05 01:37 AM

Upping This Shit My Niggas Come One...........................

Seven Deuce 03-22-05 04:14 AM

Yea Okay This Was Whack As Hell Cus, You Had Me DQ'ed On Our Other battle Which I Won So What The Fuck is This

Hammer 03-22-05 05:52 AM

wat???????

your talking jibberish........................................u p

Hammer 03-22-05 10:32 PM

uppin again.

i hate it wen peeps dont vote but post


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