Kyleon vs the kid 523
 

Battle Rules:

8 Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting
No hate votes
and no dickriding

Minimum posts to vote: 400

Check in by: 03-27-05 at 08:15 PM

Must drop verse in 45 minutes after check in.

the kid 523 has ACCEPTED this battle on 03-27-05 07:17 PM.

Kyleon has ACCEPTED this battle on 03-27-05 07:18 PM.

OK after the comma,Ima leave expelled like school drama
I told you to stop goin to Neverland,now ya lost ya pajamas
Dawg,ya punches like scratches like newborn kittens
Really hommie ya not decent,not even ya writtens
And I would spit personals on you,but you're a nobody
So i 'Murder' ya and and leave red 'Inc' like Irv Gotti
And still ya like grabbin the mic and spit some lyrics
Look at the guy,another look alike of Jimmy Hendrix

Already prepared, blurring your name so no one knows it's you when they see
How badly you got beat by a motherfucking noob.
Reading your lines makes my eyes hurt, i start to squint
Bitch you couldnt spit fresh if you overdosed on a box of mints.
My words will cut you in half like"Leatherface" with a chainsaw
Leave you speechless, cant talk back like u got lockjaw
Your raps you style your flow all a fuckin shame
Ill turn my back on yo ass like 50 did Game

This was feedback posted for Kyleon
 

I Aint Gon Vote..Cuz U Battlin Herbs Man..
Battle Some Talented Niggaz..

yo slob fuck u .. u battled me 2 bitch dont be a fuckin hipocrit

slobk the only battles ill give you credit for is the one against Lyrical Flowz,Kordozar and Mistah Authentik..the rest are wack herbs....werd...uppin for votes...

Voted For: the kid 523

kid- i'm impressed youve gotten alot better someone has been doing his homework .... but yea i thought you actually had a better verse(did i just say that?) but seriously though you had alot of good wordplay and your punches actually sorta packed a punch.

kyleon- um you need some work ... you had alright wordplay it was just that you didnt really come hard enough. your punches were sorta lacking it thought. come join first floor we will help you elevate. but work on your punches ... your wordplay was alright like i said but you just didnt use it ... you talked to him you didn't really diss him...

Vote//The Kid 523

rtf WITH A HONEST VOTE LINKS IN THE SIG

yo thanks turban.. yea i have been gettin a lil bit betta.. wen i get even betta ill battle u n see what happens lol

didnt know you were gonna come this hard so i took it easy...you won no doubt...ima want a rematch you no that right?....

Uppin this shit

uppin..........

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UPPIN yo cmon vote on tihs shit