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OneStepBeyond vs Limited Edition
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6 - 12 lines No Crew Votes No Recycling No Biting Minimum posts to vote: 20 Check in by: 04-02-05 at 01:13 PM Must drop verse in 4320 minutes after check in. |
OneStepBeyond has ACCEPTED this battle on 03-30-05 02:58 PM.
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you must be stupid as them cuz to beat me ya need you and a friend,
you no showed on my alias and i won't blame you if you do it again,* im bringin punchlines when its crunchtime till your ass is all depressed, Limited Edition?!?! yeah right.... when lyrically your just like all the rest, read this and be pissed off...oh well.. but i just want it took all intense, you bein seein more 'posts against you' than bein pushed on a fence, i don't about you votin for skriptz.. meh.. so i'll be takin both ya lives, us battling is 'point'less... like 2 men... both with broken knives... lemme finish it real quick... i bet ya callin me a herb... i don't care... but no need to give you the best of luck, cause ya battlin a noob for wins or losin to a noob, either way your rep is fucked.. |
Limited Edition has ACCEPTED this battle on 03-30-05 10:04 PM.
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A'yo...
Bringin' heat with you..? Bitch you just best begone... I will say you ain' wack at all...your 'OneStepBeyond'... That's fact, ain' opinion...thats just your evalutation.. 'Cause bein' dope is one step beyond your imagination... You pursuin' a dream...well let me enduce a nightmare... Only if I was as wack as you, would make this fight fair... What the fuck is 'S-Bury'? Oh wait...I get it that's great... The only beef you could bring...is a fuckin' Salsbury steak... Dawg before you step up...better get some practices... Because your losses like ya name...'JustAsPackedAsThis'... Blah quick ten... |
Voted For: OneStepBeyond
aiyo....what i saw limited edish >Bringin' heat with you..? Bitch you just best begone... I will say you ain' wack at all...your 'OneStepBeyond'... -nice play off the name, set up coulda been better 7/10 >That's fact, ain' opinion...thats just your evalutation.. 'Cause bein' dope is one step beyond your imagination... -kinda already did a name joke...not bad 4/10 >You pursuin' a dream...well let me enduce a nightmare... Only if I was as wack as you, would make this fight fair... -meh, played concept, set up was nice 6/10 >What the fuck is 'S-Bury'? Oh wait...I get it that's great... The only beef you could bring...is a fuckin' Salsbury steak... haha, i laughed....8/10 >Dawg before you step up...better get some practices... Because your losses like ya name...'JustAsPackedAsThis'... -meh, not feelin it 5/10 overall: 30/50....not bad, thought some of your lines coulda been better, different wordplay woulda made them more effective, but overall, you came with some decent, creative punches, this was close, one of the reasons you lost some, because you played off his name twice, in two bars, it was kinda herby, ahha, no offense........but pretty good verse man OSB >you must be stupid as them cuz to beat me ya need you and a friend, you no showed on my alias and i won't blame you if you do it again,* -set up was whack but personal was nice 7/10 >im bringin punchlines when its crunchtime till your ass is all depressed, Limited Edition?!?! yeah right.... when lyrically your just like all the rest, -decent 6/10 >read this and be pissed off...oh well.. but i just want it took all intense, you bein seein more 'posts against you' than bein pushed on a fence, haha, i laughed here, creative 8/10 >i don't about you votin for skriptz.. meh.. so i'll be takin both ya lives, us battling is 'point'less... like 2 men... both with broken knives... bahh, not feelin it 4/10 >i bet ya callin me a herb... i don't care... but no need to give you the best of luck, cause ya battlin a noob for wins or losin to a noob, either way your rep is fucked.. coulda been worded better, but nice finisher 7/10 overall: 32/50.....word, this was a close battle, i was feelin yours more OSB, both had your notables, both had your write-offs, but i think OSB sneaked this one out with harder punches and keeping it more consistent......it was close, so thats what it came down too, good battle v/OneStepBeyond......word, rtf if ya could, glockoma battle if ya get the time |
Voted For: Limited Edition
Bringin' heat with you..? Bitch you just best begone... I will say you ain' wack at all...your 'OneStepBeyond'... gud attempt at a personal on his name, i wasn't really feelin this one though. That's fact, ain' opinion...thats just your evalutation.. 'Cause bein' dope is one step beyond your imagination... lmao!! funny shit!! better play off his name!! You pursuin' a dream...well let me enduce a nightmare... Only if I was as wack as you, would make this fight fair... kinda played concept, but still pretty gud!! What the fuck is 'S-Bury'? Oh wait...I get it that's great... The only beef you could bring...is a fuckin' Salsbury steak... decent, got a laugh outta me!! Dawg before you step up...better get some practices... Because your losses like ya name...'JustAsPackedAsThis'... nice closer!!! you must be stupid as them cuz to beat me ya need you and a friend, you no showed on my alias and i won't blame you if you do it again,* pretty gud, link was nice im bringin punchlines when its crunchtime till your ass is all depressed, Limited Edition?!?! yeah right.... when lyrically your just like all the rest, not feelin this personal, cud've been done differently to be more affective!! read this and be pissed off...oh well.. but i just want it took all intense, you bein seein more 'posts against you' than bein pushed on a fence, decent, nice meta in there to i don't about you votin for skriptz.. meh.. so i'll be takin both ya lives, us battling is 'point'less... like 2 men... both with broken knives... vocab was choppy, not feelin it!! i bet ya callin me a herb... i don't care... but no need to give you the best of luck, cause ya battlin a noob for wins or losin to a noob, either way your rep is fucked.. admittin ure a newb, not gud!!! overall Ltd took this with ease, he started off weak but came together and dropped some dopeness, especially liked the 2nd personal on his name, shit had me laughin. Onestep, opened hot wit the link and shit but then ure vocab went off and ure punches just lost affect and didnt really connect yo. both y'all came pretty basic with some spots of hotness, Ltd was just more consistent with his shit so he gets my vote. P.S. - Yo, return the fave on my battle wit Jimmy Pocketz......the link is in my siggy!!!!! |
Voted For: Limited Edition
This was a tough one to vote on but in the end L.E. took it. OSB your lines didn't connect that hard you had a few good job with the no show thing. I felt your metas were a bit basic and in some lines you were missin words or you worded your lines wrong plus they were a bit stretched....Intense and rest don't rhyme and your end rhymes were basic KNIVES LIVES heard it a million times. Your last line you insulted yourself you called yourself a newb. My favorite line of yours was... you bein seein more 'posts against you' than bein pushed on a fence very creative :thumbup: LE i liked your rhyming technique syllable compound is off the hook very good i like seein that it's not repetative like regular shit. Good job usin his name against him gave you the uper hand on the personals you also flowed better structure was on point easy to read and a nice closer that added the final punch favorite line.... I will say you ain' wack at all...your 'OneStepBeyond' Good job :thumbup: VOTE/ Limited Edition Return the favor honest votes only link in sig take your time so it doesn't get DQ'ed |
i bet ya callin me a herb... i don't care... but no need to give you the best of luck,
cause ya battlin a noob for wins or losin to a noob, either way your rep is fucked.. noone seems to notice that i said i bet your callin me a herb.. as in he thinks im one.. so either way his reps fucked |
and i wasn't trying to ryhme intense and rest...
im bringin punchlines when its crunchtime till your ass is all depressed Limited Edition?!?! yeah right.... when lyrically your just like all the rest rest and depressed.... did you not even fuckin read it |
Uppin' this shit....................................
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Voted For: Limited Edition
lmfao this was hella funny ight he came ok but heres how i saw it punches L.E personalls-L.E structure-L.E pretty much tha whole batle ok verse one step but need more punches in there werd Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. |
Uppin'...please have more explain vote than Ca$pers...
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Uppin' for votes...fuckin' sleepers...............
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Uppin' for some more votes...fuckin' sleepers.....
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