LyricalFlowz vs Adrenaline
 

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Adrenaline has ACCEPTED this battle on 03-30-05 03:47 PM.

lyrical flows?...more like lyrical "no's"...lol

yo...
constipation?...hold strap while Im back with this contemplation
this nigga's wack,he couldn't 'rain' raps if his rhymes was 'in condensation'
I got a sixth sense like bruce willis kid,ur literally blinded
cuz having toy-boats and tanks in dreams is the only way u'll be "military minded"
my freestyle runs in 'waves' so you can say I got more 'flows' than you
and if u died and came 'back' then this kid would just get 'broke in two'
he thinks cuz he got a good 'record' then that shit wont get broken
but the only way he'd have a "spinning-disc" is if he was randomly chosen
this kid cant even 'cum' up with a good diss so dont believe him
he's just a dick, he prolly couldn't battle in real life when he 'see mens'
this kid aint a 'prodigy',he just a 'shook one' and his voice is gay
the only way he could grasp some 'skills' is by lookin at my 'resume'
this guy would never be a star,he was an accident since he came out
cuz the only 'flow' he ever had was at a jays game standin in the 'wave'~crowd


[CLOSER]

I spit the top-notch shit that stops time like pocket watches
and if u "watch diss" then stay away from my 'rocks' bitch...

may he rest in peace... :sad

lyricalflowz has ACCEPTED this battle on 03-30-05 07:27 PM.

uppin............................................. ........................

Voted For: lyricalflowz

Damn nice battle form the both of you so props on both ya'll verses
but ima havta vote for Lyrical

Explanation-

lyrical got my vote due to more creative n complex punches n personals

Lyrical
I like how u used adren name to thorw a tight personal. ya flow was online n nicley delivered. Strcutre was tight in easy to stay wit. Personal very creative n delievered nicely. Ya punches were creative as well .

Adren-
ya had a tight verse but i didnt see hardly any personals n some of ya punches seemed played ya start out tight with creativity then ya slipped in went basic. Ya flow was tight. Ya structure was good n easy to keep wit. didnt see any personals.

elevate on harder punches man n get some personals goin

both need to elevate on some multies they r good to have n battles.

overall:
flow- tie
structure- tie
punches- Lyrical
Personals- Lyrical
Multies- None

good battle fams

RTF
all honest votes will be returned

holla

Voted For: Adrenaline

I' have to say that adrenalines flow was more enjoyable, his punches hit harder, and his flow carries the "OH!" factor vote-Adrenaline

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Voted For: lyricalflowz

V/LyricalFlowz.....this was a good battle but l gets my vote he came wit good personals an punchs were on point consistin of good vocab an structure.....Adrenaline...ur verse was good an u had sum punchs that hit ahrd but u had sum played lines an basic vocab work on that.......NO Hate......RETURN THE FAVOR...
opner=l
closer=l
structure=tie
vocab=l
punchs=l
personals=l
overall=Lyricalflowz

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Voted For: lyricalflowz

nice battle!!!

Adrenaline - ure shit was gud......flow and structure was on point fasho...all except for a couple of lines that were stretched.....the vocab was basic i think, sum of it was aight.........nice punches in there hittin hard, but some hittin weak, gotta be more consistent with that shit.....creativity- i saw some but not a lot, the wordplay was decent and ure personals were aight....toy boats and tanks line was dope, just stretched!!! overall - 6/10

Lyricalflowz - flow was good, lines not stretched, just look long due to oversized writing....i aint blind kid, i can read n shit!!! also no need to explain lines!! ure vocab was pretty nice, similar to adrenaline how u had just a little hot shit!!! punches were on point, a lot hittin good, and u had the best line of the battle.........the one about his free agent thread, pretty basic vocab but tha shit was funny!!! u had more personals in ure verse i think and punches were better. need to get more creative and shit tho, but overall a nice drop. 8/10

keep it up both!!!

- cud u drop an honest vote on one of my battles!! links in the siggy!!!!

word up......y'all....................................

Voted For: lyricalflowz

adren:
constipation?...hold strap while Im back with this contemplation
this nigga's wack,he couldn't 'rain' raps if his rhymes was 'in condensation'
^^^NICE VOCAB BUT EVERYTHING ELSE WAS WACK
I got a sixth sense like bruce willis kid,ur literally blinded
cuz having toy-boats and tanks in dreams is the only way u'll be "military minded"
^^^^NO
my freestyle runs in 'waves' so you can say I got more 'flows' than you
and if u died and came 'back' then this kid would just get 'broke in two'
^^^^LOL SUPER WACK..I CAN C UR NOT A PUNCHLINE MC
he thinks cuz he got a good 'record' then that shit wont get broken
but the only way he'd have a "spinning-disc" is if he was randomly chosen
^^^^?????
this kid cant even 'cum' up with a good diss so dont believe him
he's just a dick, he prolly couldn't battle in real life when he 'see mens'
^^^^KIND OF GOOD PUNCH RITE THERE
this kid aint a 'prodigy',he just a 'shook one' and his voice is gay
the only way he could grasp some 'skills' is by lookin at my 'resume'
^^^WACK
this guy would never be a star,he was an accident since he came out
cuz the only 'flow' he ever had was at a jays game standin in the 'wave'~crowd
^^^WACK CLOSER FAM....

LF:
I'll freeze this bitches heart so call me cold hearted
I'll slice your head vertically, youd think ya hairs parted^^^DECENT OPENER
Hold up, dawg you know what? Your rhymes are fantastic!!!
You knew I was playing right? cuz even you said:
Quote:
Originally Posted by Adrenaline
are you being sarcastic?
^^^^^LOL I LIKE DIS NOT ALOT OF DUDES USE QUOTES ANYMORE
Like porn stars that just get 'head' I'm fully 'blown'
Ya sig is almost right except your not a legend, your just unknown*
^^^^GOOD PERSONAL
You make me puke, won't make it through the end just like Duke
only way your 'lyrics flow' is when ya 'write rhymes in alphebet soup'
^^^LOL FUNNY SHIT
You and I are nothing alike, so we far from a synonym
I'll slice open your 'adrenal medulla' so you'll have no 'adrenaline'**
^^^^OKAY
Your rhymes are dead, they need fixin so take em' to the tool shed
Proof No crew wants you, just take a look at ya free agent thread**
^^^LOL GOOD PERSONAL
You can drop 20 prewritten, and I'll still win with my 10 lines
Thinkin ya gonna beat me? then your really ahead of your time****
^^^DECENT CLOSER...

LF WINS DIS SHIT EASY.....JUST OFF DA PERSONALS

RETURN DA FAVOR LINKS IN MY SIG

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^^I'll let this battle slide....

I think I smell a dickryder....

This was feedback posted for lyricalflowz
 

Don't know if your a member of Emerica's Finest cause your name on the roster so I'll just have to check the polls!

Voted For: lyricalflowz

Lyrical flowz:

you got this easily....this was an easy victory...your punches hit pretty hard.....good use of personals...and the structure was good....your flow was nice...i was feelin it...multi's...didnt see any......overall shit was koo 7/10

adrenaline: your gettin there dawg....structure...fell off at times...flow...was aiight...multi's none....punches...werent too good....personals....none......shit was koo but this was nothing special at all..you still have alot of elevating to do. and dont bold your letters. shit looks ugly.

vote: lyrical flowz

return da fav plz

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Voted For: Adrenaline

im gonna have to go wit adrenaline on this joint. i was feelin his verse alot more in this battle. his flow was better and he had punches that just hit harder. Personals go to adrenaline too. some of his bars were kind of forced, and his closer wasn't very hot at all; but he had more consistent punches

lyrical flowz=Your rhymes are dead, they need fixin so take em' to the tool shed
Proof No crew wants you, just take a look at ya free agent thread**
^^this was ur best line and it was kind of weak, need to come harder than this

Adrenaline =constipation?...hold strap while Im back with this contemplation
this nigga's wack,he couldn't 'rain' raps if his rhymes was 'in condensation'
^^i liked this bar nice word play n good set up

overall adrenaline just came harder in this joint wit his punches, they were more consistent and more creative and sounded less forced.