Young Mix
 

I be ~slappin emcees~on a mic,Im ~rappin wit ease~
~clappin ya knees~call da police cuz Im ~jackin u thieves~
They say I got a ~rappin disease~cause Im ~graspin da lead~
and Ill spit dis sick shit til u throw up and be ~askin ta leave~
Just ~sick wit a mic~sometimes just ~spit what I like~
other times,keep writin and dont pay attention ta ~shit dat I write~
dese niggas is a ~rappin disgrace~ straight ~wack and misplaced~
Ill spit til he shits on himself,then take it and throw it ~back in his face~
I be dat krazy dude who've ~stolen ya eyelidz~u aint ~hopin fa violence~
my linez make u be quiet at a concert,then yell durin a ~moment of silence~
Dont act like ya unreachable cause ya ~real limits near you~
Ill make u scream til ya lungs collapse and yell back "I ~still did'nt hear you~
Teachin me how ta stunt,shit,he ~teaches 1 lesson barely~
I ~releases da message scary~til u feel dat ya ~speech is unneccessary~
Ill put u on a ~skillet til ya flamed~cause Im da ~realest in da game~
and my name gonna stay here for a while so ~steel it in ya brain~

Reppin Horrorflick to da fullest..................................

http://community.rapverse.com/showthread=184555

not bad..flow is on point..good use of multis..vocab is nice..structure is good..its nothing special but its a solid drop..try incorperating metaphores and wordplay within your verses..but other than that..good drop man..

Return the favor.
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=184555
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=184554
Pz.

I dont know how ta drop a link..............

just reply to someone elses open mic and take the link from thier post, copy it, and paste it into this thread somewhere either in a new post or edit it into your original post..

Pz.

aight,more feedback please...........................

Pretty sik shit man...Good use of multies...Good flow...This shit was very creative, and I'm feelin it...You're pretty hot fam...We should collab sometime...Holla at me man...1

Thanx yall.......Ill get back at you wit dat collab Black Magik........
More feedback please

More feedback please

yo this was pretty hot bruh...structure was a little stretched but wasn't bad..folw was cool, nice multi's and meat's...you got skills can't deny it...Check out Emerica's Finest bruh...8/10...return the favor...

P.S. You can get a link from rtf onmy track then postin it herel lol we both win!

Im bout ta leave but I got u tomorrow dawg....................

uppin.............................................

uppin............................................

yo this was hella nice,very good,bet your a vet lol hidin as a nooby,but if your a newby well your gonna be dope,its like the structure is hot,everything is dope on it lol,good to see a dope newby

return the favor: http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=185080

i liked this shit, wonderin why your record dont match up wit your talent though, but the multies were good, and so was bout everything else...but i DID feel like the verse started slowly fallin off at the end...but without that, this verse is good

7.5-8.5/10