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Stanza vs Bernonedown
Battle Rules:
10 lines No Crew Votes No Recycling No Biting 3-0 KO GL :thumbup: Minimum posts to vote: 20 Check in by: 05-10-05 at 06:30 PM Must drop verse in 30 minutes after check in. |
Stanza has ACCEPTED this battle on 05-10-05 05:57 PM.
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You On Some Fortune Shit, And Your Lyrical Skills Didnt Get You In Tha Tournament Because If You Brought A Christmas Tree, Testicles Would Be Your Main Ornaments TheNativeSon Might Strike Back With A Tight Rap Not Strong Enough 2 Kill A Track I'll Put You In A Local Compton Oven On 250 And You'll Come Out As Guerilla Black You Think You Hard As Shit, Stop Acting Like You Sick When Your Shit's Garbage Because As Ugly As Tha Girls Say You Are, Its Hard 4 You 2 Say You God's Gift Just Like Your Prior One On Ones, Everyone's Gonna Say Lyrically You Cant See Me Your Fans (If There's Any) Wanna See Your Appearance, Lookin Like A Premature ET You Cant Say Shit About Me Retiring Because "Native" Means Being A Senior Citizen 5 Ft. Son Of A 6 Ft. Dead Couple, Suckin Up 2 Their Genitals When You Act Innocent |
Bernonedown has ACCEPTED this battle on 05-10-05 06:04 PM.
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stanza taking on bernonedown,
does he not know i will pound him in the ground, wrecked, checked and fill in the blank________, doesnt he know that his verse wont even rank, hes up against the best, biggest and most feared competitor, theres nothing that can stop me during rythme, not even STANZA, Rapverse's sexual predator, if he thinks he can compete give him a chance, but deep down my words have already put him in a trance |
Goodluck Man ..............................Uppin for some votes
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Voted For: Stanza
Stanza- On the whole, your verse was ok, wasnt feeling the ending though, flowed alright, and punches hit harder than Bernonedowns did Bernonedown- Wasnt really feeling your verse, punches werent strong, flow was ok Punches- Stanza Flow- Tie Multis- Niether Wordplay- Stanza Structure- Stanza Personals- Niether Final Vote-------Stanza-------- |
Wez Bez Uppin .upin Thjis Mofo
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This was feedback posted for Stanza
uppin for fam......................................
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Voted For: Stanza
Stanza,,,, killed that nigga below cause he suck'd like a mutha fucka shit man that nigga spit so weak personals weere so gay and where are the fuckin pucnhes handsdown u killed that faggot hellz yeah Vote Stanza U win this no matter what ~1~ |
Wez Bez Uppin .upin Thjis Mofo
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Voted For: Bernonedown
okay, this was one of the whackest battles i've read in a long time....uh stanza, you didn't really diss him at all, no punches really directed at him, structure was bad, stretched lines....everyline uhmm, nothing really specific, no creativity....opener was just stupid as hell....wow, overall, this was a bad verse by you man....didn't even play off his name at all, no real punches, so i can't even give this to you man bernone, man, no structure at all, but at least you tried, you gotta elevate madly.....gotta stop self-glorifying....but overall, you attempted more punches at your opponent, kept it consistent, but overall, you both did horrible, but i am giving it to bern one because he was less whack wrecked, checked and fill in the blank________, doesnt he know that his verse wont even rank, ^ all because of that line and it was horrible, thats how bad this battle was, but lol, funny to read, keep up both v/bernonedown |
Thanx Man ,.................................................
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Voted For: Stanza
Bernonedown: no flow no structure no personals wack vocab self-glorification Stanza: good flow good structure good vocab use good punchlines good wordplay v/ Stanza |
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