The Sorrow vs AckRite
 

Battle Rules:

12 Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting
No Bullshit
No Hate

Crew Battle: Illunatikz vs OG

gl to both: 4 days to check, 3 to drop (if you no-show, you will be labeled gay)

Minimum posts to vote: 200

Check in by: 05-17-05 at 03:05 PM

Must drop verse in 4320 minutes after check in.

Yay my first win................................:)

AckRite has ACCEPTED this battle on 05-14-05 04:30 PM.

The Sorrow has ACCEPTED this battle on 05-17-05 07:40 AM.

AckRite you front thug, but we all know that your faking son...
Just look at the emcee in your sig...wait a sec...there isn't one
This kid is done, fronting an undefeated record of just four wins
But tell me, how come you don't up the battles that ya losing in?
Shit...I don't even have to go out on a limb to break this twig...
Since when do people quote themselves in their own fuckin' sig?
I read your old battles, streched lines and your punches simple
Shit...everybody hates "ackne"... so I'll gladly pop this pimple
Seriously, this herb is worthless... just like armless kids in rowing

Oh well shit, knowing this...AckRite probably won't be showing
This kid's polite, can't throw punches, specially if he Acts Rite
Maybe he missed a key, cause we all know that he's Wack rite?


Explanations
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=189718
^ His Mugshot, applies to the first bar...He has a pic of himself in his sig, so obviously thats why we can't see an emcee...;)...

He's not upping a battle he's losing vs Big City..

If you don't get anything else, you deserve to die..

Word...

Nice drop man, best of luck...:thumbup:

Voted For: AckRite

aight yo akkrite to dis

akkrite-ya verse was pretty good u had sum aight punches dat hit hard.... u had sum good vocab i thaught u was wakk on da real but u impressed me u had sum good personals and multies n maybe 1 or 2 lines good drop it was easy 2 read n it wasnt stretched each line followed da next line good openor u had threw da whole battle it was kool good closer 2

the sorrow-i thaught u was gon win dis easy but u didnt u did have a couple good punches but dey wasnt as hot as akkrites sum of dem didnt hit hard and sum of dem was jus plain wakk but u did have sum personals ya verse was eazy 2 read also each line follow each otha dont do dat quote shit unless its wit a hot as personal ya verse started off ok and it ended kind of dull keep it hot da whole way n ull win everi battle

akkrite took dis tho

vote-akkrite

This was feedback posted for The Sorrow
 

polls beaches.......................................

new kid thought ackrite was straigth whack, but that impressed him?

well you can tell that vote wasn't though out very well

^ Me and NewKid have beef since I voted him out of KORV, then made a thread for him to stop bitching about it...forgot to blacklist him...:(

Jeah Nice Lines Nigga.............UPPIN.............Lol @ NewKid...........Fucked Up

This was feedback posted for AckRite
 

worrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrd!!! holla at the realness!1 ackrite doin his thing!....propps y'all, nice battle...uppin this for fam.

Voted For: The Sorrow

AckRite you front thug, but we all know that your faking son...
Just look at the emcee in your sig...wait a sec...there isn't one
—5…pretty decent punch
This kid is done, fronting an undefeated record of just four wins
But tell me, how come you don't up the battles that ya losing in?
—6…good punch here
Shit...I don't even have to go out on a limb to break this twig...
Since when do people quote themselves in their own fuckin' sig?
—8…nice persona punch
I read your old battles, streched lines and your punches simple
Shit...everybody hates "ackne"... so I'll gladly pop this pimple
—5…decent shit here
Seriously, this herb is worthless... just like armless kids in rowing
Quote:
Originally Posted by Drakel
gl to both: 4 days to check, 3 to drop (if you no-show, you will be labeled gay)

Oh well shit, knowing this...AckRite probably won't be showing
—7…lol nice shit
This kid's polite, can't throw punches, specially if he Acts Rite
Maybe he missed a key, cause we all know that he's Wack rite?
—7…good use on his name, punch was good

overall u had a good drop here though… 38/50

Categoric Assessin, U Presently Suck....The Facts Are Displayed
And When Anyone Talks Of Ur Skill, Its Always..'Back In The Day'
—5…nah played punch here
Your A Lousy Faggot............Never Were A Metaphorical Blessing
What Do U Mean To Da Site? (Wait!..Thats A Rhetorical Question)
—5…uh, decent
Ain No Stoppin Me, Ya Wack..& Frankly..I Juss Laugh At U Dawg
Cuz Kid..U'll Neva Be On 'Top'..Ya Can't Even Climb Vaginal Walls!
—0…nope
I'm Morbid & Violent.....'Rainin On Ya Sorrow' Like Stormin Tyrants
& If U Think U Can ‘Stomach This’ Im 'PERFORMIN DA HEIMLICH'!
--4…okay, this 1 was pretty wack
Sorrow Stalked My Threads 2 Quote Me...Nigga Hop Off My Saddle
Fuckin 'Psychic Fraud'..He Made Da Wrong Prediction Of Dis Battle!
—6…good
Sorrow Cant Beat Me, My Words'll Wipe Away & Knock This Herb
Kid..If Money Could Talk.......Then You'd Be At A Loss For Words!
—4…nah not feelin this one

overall u had an aight drop, could’ve came harder… 24/50

this battle was one-sided right here, The Sorrow just came
harder with the punches & they connected, both structures were
okay & the flow was decent, but overall The Sorrow took this one

no hate…

1

Dick rider ^^^^^^^

sorry sorrow, no hate against you, but after all...it is skriptz, an you are Redbull....so one can only imagine he ridin you......i know what skriptz is like, but its straight.