Skriptz vs BLACK~MAGIK
 

Battle Rules:

10 Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting
Sorry Skriptz, but NO DICK RIDERS!! So cancel whoever you got lined up to vote for you... :thumbup:

ALL VOTES MUST BE EXPLAINED!!

Minimum posts to vote: 100

Check in by: 05-21-05 at 10:25 PM

Must drop verse in 30 minutes after check in.

Closed - Expired / old battle win


Reopened.. for 1 week from 6/14

You check in first...PLEASE DO NOT DUCK ME AGAIN!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Skriptz has ACCEPTED this battle on 05-20-05 05:17 PM.

BLACK~MAGIK has ACCEPTED this battle on 05-20-05 05:17 PM.

Look...


Your lyrics are trash filled, talk shit? Get ya ass killed
Watch me "rip 'skriptz' into pieces" like a "bad film" *
Your raps is sour, and your style is used and played
Plus you get more "boo's" on stage, than at "happy hour" **
The hottest rapper? Please, you're shit is far from AVERAGE!
So watch me "take ya top off" like an "exotic dancer"
You hate Im on top, thats why you tried escaping this drop ***
Shit, you couldn't "deliver hot" if it "came in a box" ****
You're the type who "writes early" and the only way this kid might merk me
..............Is because all of RV is "on his dick" like "herpes" *****


Explanations:

* movie scripts

** boooze=beer...happy hour...get it??

*** He ducked me for weeks

**** pizza...

***** He's got alot of dick riders :nono:

MC Hammer must be his idol.. & ur punches are sounded dim
They say he was born w/ illness.. too bad it wore off of him
Ur not really into females.. so no wonder that they stay far
..from you.. & ur last shot @ greatness.. was in a gay bar
So while ur up in there.. all you serving is gay men
Cuz.. the closet route for u.. to getting skills.. is under construction
Leaving you scared & lost.. and I’m hittin u with these bars
Only way u’ll get votes..
..Is cuz ur wackness .. got Rv members laughin so hard
Well.. he told us that he was offically gay .. so lets all make fun
..of him.. he knew accidents happen.. but u was made as one

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Voted For: Skriptz

MC Hammer must be his idol.. & ur punches are sounded dim
They say he was born w/ illness.. too bad it wore off of him
7/10....Nice Personal Used
Ur not really into females.. so no wonder that they stay far
..from you.. & ur last shot @ greatness.. was in a gay bar
8/10......Personal & Punch.....Good Shit
So while ur up in there.. all you serving is gay men
Cuz.. the closet route for u.. to getting skills.. is under construction
8/10....Lol Nice P
Leaving you scared & lost.. and I’m hittin u with these bars
Only way u’ll get votes..
..Is cuz ur wackness .. got Rv members laughin so hard
6.5/10....Wast Feelin Da First Line But Good Personal Again
Well.. he told us that he was offically gay .. so lets all make fun
..of him.. he knew accidents happen.. but u was made as one
8/10.....Good Closer

Your lyrics are trash filled, talk shit? Get ya ass killed
Watch me "rip 'skriptz' into pieces" like a "bad film" *
6.5/10.....Nice Wordplay....Aight Punch
Your raps is sour, and your style is used and played
Plus you get more "boo's" on stage, than at "happy hour" **
6/10...Those Lines Didnt Rhyme But Da 2nd Line Was Coo
The hottest rapper? Please, you're shit is far from AVERAGE!
So watch me "take ya top off" like an "exotic dancer"
6.5/10.....Eh Its Aight
You hate Im on top, thats why you tried escaping this drop ***
Shit, you couldn't "deliver hot" if it "came in a box" ****
6.5/10......One Of Ya Best Lines So Far
You're the type who "writes early" and the only way this kid might merk me
..............Is because all of RV is "on his dick" like "herpes" *****
7/10.......Aight Tight Close Also

CLEVERNESS: Skriptz
CREATIVITY: Black (His Was More Creative, He Had Some Good Ideas)
PUNCHES: Skriptz (Stronger...Connected Betta)
PERSONALS: Both (Cant Decide, Both Used Em)
WORDPLAY: Skriptz (Both Had Em, Skriptz Used More)

OVERALL: SKRIPTZ

Dat Last Line Took It....Serious Battle....Black Ya Shit Didnt Rhyme A Few Times That Took Points Away But You Had Alotta Good Ideas Jus Didnt Connect

RTF...1

Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation.

This was feedback posted for BLACK~MAGIK
 

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Majik got it, better punches

Ay Majik btw, you need to get that Ackrite vote removed cuz its pure d/r...

He was just returning the favor cuz skriptz voted on his battle

Just a heads up...

Holla

^now thats funny...his didnt even rhyme...but w/e.

This was feedback posted for Skriptz
 

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uppin this shit

This was feedback posted for BLACK~MAGIK
 

Uppin this shit.............

LMAO at that "wackness" punch...The one with the link in it...I clicked it, and it showed where I ko'ed a dude...lmao nice try