Which Verse Won?
 

Which Verse Won This?
First Verse
Why aren’t you reppin Mindz Collide? Are you just ashamed to?
N’ even if that bar was written to Untold..… it was ABOUT you!
What the fuck’s apotheosis dude? Gettin a new name’s ya goal
I got an idea that suits you well…….……… how about, apothole?
Bow down n’ learn your role, unwanted faggot, you’ll never win
Aurelius was born in the state of Rome…..ing for a home to live in
Damn yo stop the bitchin’, how to beat me? Ya haven’t a clue
Yeah you’re stumped…………….to the fucking tree I hung you to
What to do, ya love life sucks, when ya girl needs money she calls
But at least she’s a tiger in bed……......……….. stripes, claws, n’ all



Second Verse
Bars Is Weak Like Paraplegics, You In Denial Kid Don't Ignore Me
Why Discuss How Whack You Are When You Just Did That For Me
True Facts, When Da-Trus Spits, It's Like You Wish He Was Dead
You'd Surround A Toilet Bowl, Mistaken I'll Leave Piss On His Head
Your Verse Is Like Arm Amp's Punches Can Never Reach Existence
Attempt To Be Gangster, And Did The Exact Opposite Of Resistance
Like Circus Gimmicks Dick Riders Got This Faggot Juggling Balls
Relief Of A Restroom Break Main F Had This Kid Fucking In Stalls
Denied Me At-First,This Faggot Was Scared To Battle On RapVerse
It 'Hurtz, Da Trus' In Other Words Displaying His Name Backwards
And You Resemble Significance Of Marijuana, In Remaining A Herb
Flow Is Like River Block Off's Your In Need Of Re-framing Ya Verse
Your Wordplay Could Never Match Up, Like Straight To Bi-Sexual
Throwing Your Life Away On Net Sites....Cuzz Life Is Text-To-You
You'd Pre-Write A Verse, And Still Be Fucked Like In depth Gamblers
Only Vote You'd Get Is From Your Alias, Downloading IP Scramblers
His Precision Is Dimmed With For, Like The Ground On The Moon
Explode His Mental's..........Left His Intelligence Around The Room
This Kid's Verse Is Like A Mountain What Can't Be Found Is Pattern
Stomach & Gas Relief Still Can't Spit Flames With A Jack-o-lantern

hmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm ill just say the second one...... 1st one was ok...... but it seems like he had alotta personals i wouldnt get unless u showed me the other persons name, title, avvy and aliases maybe..... i unno

also......... the first guy did the same thing of the " blah.............. blah blah" and switchin the meanin of the first word concept like 3 times. Its aight the first time.... but having it more than that in a 5 bar battle is kinda stupid and not creative

second one...who is who?

Second one... don't know either of them.

well i'm gonna be cool and disagree with everyone..........

the second verse had a fucked up flow, with those stretched lines they need a few multies in there to help it flow better, also a lot of the punches used were not all that original, i have seen pre-writ ballz on loads of sites, also that juggling ballz line along with the fuckin in stalls is not original at all.

the first verse flowed a lot better and the punches were pretty funny, and they were actual punches, some of the shit in the 2nd verse seemed more like statements than punches!!!!

so i wud pick the first verse!!!

im gonna go with the first verse here as well..
second verse had a played punch for its opener
n quite frankly was boarderline wack throughout
i mainly say that cuz the content didnt flow well
as punches...setups had nothin to do with the
punch most of the time......
1st verse had alot more creativity, although it didnt always
come across as hard hitting, it had personals n was way more
direct to the opponent........

Neither for the fact this has nothing to do with LL.

^^ you cant vote anyway

you have no text skillz.........WERD!!! :thumbup:

That bothers me Why?

Theres a reason i dont do text smart one.