E.C vs Marvjay1009
 

Battle Rules:

10 Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting
No d/r
No hate votes

g'luck :shoot:

Minimum posts to vote: 200

Check in by: 06-18-05 at 04:02 PM

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MaRVJay1009 has ACCEPTED this battle on 06-18-05 03:50 PM.

E.C has ACCEPTED this battle on 06-18-05 03:53 PM.

u spit "candy-barz" they easy da eat thru,ima easily defeat you.
whut "E.C" stand 4??...it means he's a sig make in E.ach-C.rew.
my rappin is just nice,he know he cant beat me dis fagget is just hype.
i'll let u "bleed on ya keys" so cops aint gota ask 4 ya "blood-TyPE".
all of a sudden u be focus?,but u was merk'd on ya alias RELOaDED.
beggin soul rebel 4 a spot in t.e for months just recently did he notice.
i aint 1 of dem trash vets,niggaz im studio's im pass text..u a fag? yes.
e.c thought da "virgin islands" was a country were "ppl aint have sex".
dis fuckin cat is a jerk...rv is just gon laugh at his verse.
u a think his girl "Stole red lobster" w/ all dem "crabs is her skirt".

i'd use you as 'bait', but it's iligal to 'fish' for 'nerds' who cary nines,
you woudn't be hard to 'reel' in cuz of the way u stay 'hooked online',
kids in 'school', like to improve on their 'work', not get it 'drafted',
For you 'elevation' is like puberty... i guess you never 'passed it',
your text is 'hurting', he wants to make it 'big', nothin'll work for that,
i'd hate to tell you this but......... 'steroids' never did work for rap,
your a pussy, you smell like 'fish', the way u get 'beaten' about,
like greased up food in chip shops, no one ever wants to eat you out,
i'm 'jack'ing your 'family jewls', obviously it's me who's 'running' things,
call this merking with 'royalty', coz 'queens' always bow to 'kings',
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ight explanations...

5th bar... he is from queens... so family jewels jacks, kings and all tht shit, royalty.. and thats it.

dont get the rest of the wordplay dont vote...

g'luck pz

lol nice verse but wtf bout the sould rebel shit i was in TE since the beginning and he asked me to go back in so thats a fake personal

This was feedback posted for E.C
 

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Voted For: MaRVJay1009

i'd use you as 'bait', but it's iligal to 'fish' for 'nerds' who cary nines,
you woudn't be hard to 'reel' in cuz of the way u stay 'hooked online',

New twist to the hook lines, played concept done well str8 opener

kids in 'school', like to improve on their 'work', not get it 'drafted',
For you 'elevation' is like puberty... i guess you never 'passed it',

Lol funny shame elevation lines are mad played

your text is 'hurting', he wants to make it 'big', nothin'll work for that,
i'd hate to tell you this but......... 'steroids' never did work for rap,

Ight

your a pussy, you smell like 'fish', the way u get 'beaten' about,
like greased up food in chip shops, no one ever wants to eat you out,

Lol that imagerys just dutty, ok punch

i'm 'jack'ing your 'family jewls', obviously it's me who's 'running' things,
call this merking with 'royalty', coz 'queens' always bow to 'kings',

Tight closer

VS



u spit "candy-barz" they easy da eat thru,ima easily defeat you.
whut "E.C" stand 4??...it means he's a sig make in E.ach-C.rew.

Ususally taking initials is wack but since his name are initials this was ok not too good to open with though

my rappin is just nice,he know he cant beat me dis fagget is just hype.
i'll let u "bleed on ya keys" so cops aint gota ask 4 ya "blood-TyPE".

Dope

all of a sudden u be focus?,but u was merk'd on ya alias RELOaDED.
beggin soul rebel 4 a spot in t.e for months just recently did he notice.

Str8 personal

i aint 1 of dem trash vets,niggaz im studio's im pass text..u a fag? yes.
e.c thought da "virgin islands" was a country were "ppl aint have sex".

Weak

dis fuckin cat is a jerk...rv is just gon laugh at his verse.
u a think his girl "Stole red lobster" w/ all dem "crabs is her skirt".

Lmao dope

Ok this was close

Punches = Marv
Opner = E.C
Closer = Marv
Best line = MArv = 'll let u "bleed on ya keys" so cops aint gota ask 4 ya "blood-TyPE".

Amusement = Both
Creativity = Both - some good metas and sims from both

Overal = Marv
This was def a close battle but i felt marv just took it edging with the punches but good from both
respect

please return favour

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Voted For: E.C

i'd use you as 'bait', but it's iligal to 'fish' for 'nerds' who cary nines,
you woudn't be hard to 'reel' in cuz of the way u stay 'hooked online',
^^^
Nice flow, good punch

kids in 'school', like to improve on their 'work', not get it 'drafted',
For you 'elevation' is like puberty... i guess you never 'passed it',
^^^
nice humour


your text is 'hurting', he wants to make it 'big', nothin'll work for that,
i'd hate to tell you this but......... 'steroids' never did work for rap,
^^^
very weak, dissapointed in the concept of your second line.

your a pussy, you smell like 'fish', the way u get 'beaten' about,
like greased up food in chip shops, no one ever wants to eat you out,
^^^
pretty decent, used the ''fish an chip'' concept of british food, some may not understand the concept of the bar, but i did, it was alright

i'm 'jack'ing your 'family jewls', obviously it's me who's 'running' things,
call this merking with 'royalty', coz 'queens' always bow to 'kings',
^^^
nice personal an punch

Good verse, came strong throughout, elevated alot....an i want round 2 with you fa' sho'......good drop, you got this, really impressive stuff man


u spit "candy-barz" they easy da eat thru,ima easily defeat you.
whut "E.C" stand 4??...it means he's a sig make in E.ach-C.rew.
^^
horribly worded Marv, weak concept too...e.c an gfx lines are played..

my rappin is just nice,he know he cant beat me dis fagget is just hype.
i'll let u "bleed on ya keys" so cops aint gota ask 4 ya "blood-TyPE".
^^^
nah, not feelin it


all of a sudden u be focus?,but u was merk'd on ya alias RELOaDED.
beggin soul rebel 4 a spot in t.e for months just recently did he notice.
^^^
good personmal, one of you're better bars in the battle


i aint 1 of dem trash vets,niggaz im studio's im pass text..u a fag? yes.
e.c thought da "virgin islands" was a country were "ppl aint have sex".
^^^
I dont even get it?...not good anyway.

dis fuckin cat is a jerk...rv is just gon laugh at his verse.
u a think his girl "Stole red lobster" w/ all dem "crabs is her skirt".
^^^
not bad, could of been stronger


Marv, weak stuff dog, where's the fiyah you usually on?....real inconsistant, your puns didnt have no humour, an E.C Made a mockery of ya' verse for real....

Good shit E.C, Round 2....get at me about tat, you improved alot an i aint battled since i've been back, so lets go....

oh an return the favor in my signature, narc-uzi's battle.

Voted For: E.C

this was a really close battle in my opinion.......
marvjay- your structure was on point and you came good with the opener.....a few lines here and there really stood out and the wordplay in this line was real good....i'll let u "bleed on ya keys" so cops aint gota ask 4 ya "blood-TyPE". But i think you lacked consistency and that there wasn't enough really nice punches and personals to take the win.....

E.C...your verse was good from start to finish...you kept it consistent and thats why you get my vote....the opener was sick and the personals were hard-hitting....your wordplay was real nice....good job to both but e.c just took this one

This was feedback posted for E.C
 

nice battle dawgs, a tite one
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