payn vs DZK_BURYMORE
 

Battle Rules:

6 - 16 Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting

Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 06-24-05 at 10:49 PM

Must drop verse in 15 minutes after check in.

DZK_BURYMORE has ACCEPTED this battle on 06-24-05 10:06 PM.

beat your head in death to my enimies
ur on ur last leg im a frekin centipied,
im from west virginia ill put sumtin sharp in ya
stabbin men in they abdomin so hard my javolin splinters,
hits so hard it hits six parts of ya inners causin enternal bleedin
seein my light on this text is the only way your still breathin,
ill teach you a thing or 2 when i kidnap and drag you and your family handily to the back of my labroom
leave your mother-fucked gutted and shackled hung from a block of tackle,
from the tub in my bathroom leave your brother and sister coverd in stabwounds
maggots crawlin in and out of your dads blood splatterd jacket
and a rappers kadabber looks like rabbid badgers got at it,
see sadness just isnt a emtion im capable of havin
so in takin you breakin you and laughin,
and when i say breakin u i dont mean mentally actually
i mean most of your bones bein broken and crackalin,

Payn has ACCEPTED this battle on 06-24-05 10:48 PM.

ight check it here's my verse ...

Ok,

Payn will verbally knock out ya dentals..\
in text i'm suspensful when i jot wit pencils\\
have diz newbie hit more soft spots..Shit, u'd think he was in a mental hospital!..\
no rank is wut ya text gets, Out Breathe Kid? my punches land where ya chest is..\
topin' me.. nah, b stay infront of hoods, buryin' more DZK's & i'm not talkin' bout breathing methods!..\

..But Really

i'll counter ya attack as my blows flow Around yah hits, Fist'll pound yah spits..
But bitch, i'll have you lookin up to 20, Like checking for conterfeits!..
The win i doubt you can handle..Cus yah chest calvical im bout to dis-mantle..
Cus Only tyme L ova my head is when doing sign langague of your outcome in this battle!..
Hood you awful-wita-pen..i'll shove my fist in yah mouth an put yah talking-an-end..
Cus Payn will rip thru yah arteries from yah chest and through yah temple..cause it apparent you thought-you-had-a-win!..

uppin this shit for some votes......yall kno this mother fucker came weak man!

This was feedback posted for DZK_BURYMORE
 

Fronting like DZK is so gay..

Some aliases are funny as hell, but that's just gay..

maybe u should ask for what it stands for instead of bein a lil bitch and judgin ppl b4 u know them that will get u in some shit some day dawg, and dont judge me by name but the lyrics and shit u see

i kno yall ppl can vote...........................................

uppin for some votes................once i get enough posted thing under my belt i will return the favor

Voted For: Payn

Here's my vote and some simple constructive critism

i lost you near the end Payn but your flow was desent ur lines definitely more creative then DZK_BURYMORE . . .word of advice to DZK when u battle don't just simple ryme make sure you going somewhere . . . and Payn love the metaphors . . . Good shit guys . . .



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Voted For: Payn

fake dzk, lol...

OK, poayn gets my vote due to actuially using punches and havin a decent flow. dzks verse was packed with fillers, self glorification and overall was just a weak verse.

No hate but payn takes this in every category...

RTF on a battle inthe sig, OR THIS WILL GET DQ'ED.

will sum1 besides payn's friends vote on this battle?

Voted For: DZK_BURYMORE

^wow... not only a name biter... but a verse biter too... from that very name lol.... get this homosexual DQ'd!

and dont judge me by name but the lyrics and shit u see

^lmfao!@!!!